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Posted: 8 years ago
Such a beautiful beautiful part 👏 Thank you Divya and Suvika for this wonder piece..it just warmed my heart especially after watching today's episode 😆 It was so refreshing to read an understanding Dev, no nonsense Sona, cute bundle of joys in the form of Golu and Soha 😳 And what a way to stop this part with Sona overhearing Dev-Ishu conversation ...am beyond excited for next part more than the episode itself😆 karo karo jaldi update karo

I loved this part so much that I wanted to write a big response but my flu is holding me back.Sorry dearies..just know that I love love love loved it 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Sry...late in commenting... Was vry busy these time...

I must say a fab update... Jeeyo.. Wht a pleasuring and soothing update guys... Loved every bit... Dev assuring sona and soha dev bonding... Also golu soha sibling relationship... Vry beautiful...
Loved d pacha line... Hope its used in d show too...

And doo update soon... Pls guys... Waiting...




Next update... let's see. Yet to open the word doc
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Wonderful update👏...Loved dev-sona convo.

Thanks for writing this beautiful SS...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Absolutely Amazing 👏


Loved it totally! Dev-Soha bond just touched my heart and th McD scene was so much joy. I thought Golu would become a little insecure about sharing his BigCha with Soha. These kids are so lovely and innocent that the bonds which adults take time to accept, ponder over and get insecure about; the kids accepted it so beautifully and gracefully.😊

Yes. He is used to NOT having his BigCha all the time na. In fact Dev used to come home only twice a week. Golu has always been happy with the time Dev has given him. Once he is reassured that Dev would play and spend time with him too, he is happy.

Loved the new dimension in Dev-Sona bond.😳


Dev-Ishwari scene made me so happy😈.

It has made us happy too 😆

BTW, I thought Golu would want to bond with his ex-BigChachi as well. After all, his BigCha once loved her with all his heart and Golu loves BigCha... I guess that is saved for later😆

Let's see. 😃

Beautifully written 👍🏼

Thanks again ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohi99

This has been a wonderful journey with Dev meeting Soha and then Ishwari and Dev conversation. ...your writing us just too good and stands our. ..if they show this really happening in the show na...We will get KRPKAB back...like old days...crisp and real storyline...superb...just superb...no words ...pls pls pm me ur next...pls update soon

Luv, M



Thank you. Yes, we are trying our best to stick to those initial characters that we all fell in love with and could easily connect to. Glad this one is shaping up well. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

Such a beautiful beautiful part 👏 Thank you Divya and Suvika for this wonder piece..it just warmed my heart especially after watching today's episode 😆 It was so refreshing to read an understanding Dev, no nonsense Sona, cute bundle of joys in the form of Golu and Soha 😳 And what a way to stop this part with Sona overhearing Dev-Ishu conversation ...am beyond excited for next part more than the episode itself😆 karo karo jaldi update karo


I loved this part so much that I wanted to write a big response but my flu is holding me back.Sorry dearies..just know that I love love love loved it 🤗



Thank you so much Deepa!! Super glad that you enjoyed it... and that it was a good reprieve after the episode. 😆Can't deny that I would have loved a bigger response from you but koi na. You are excused this time. 😉

You are down with flu?? Take rest and take care. Have a relaxing weekend!! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow its so beautifully written, loved it.. you two are just too good. 👏

I like the want Dev & Soha relationship is progressing
Dev is surely best dad and Soha does throw tantrums when she is with her.. This clearly indicates Soha is very much happy to have her dad in her life and she wants to get pampered by him..

Its not that Sona doesn't pamper or love Soha but it has always been that way that dad loves their daughters the most and so is the case with Dev - Soha

Looking forward to Ishwari - Soha ka milan

Update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you suvika di and divya di for writing such a beautiful story and describing soha and dev's relationship so beautifully
I loved each and every part of this ss
Dev understood son's fear and ensure her that never ever he will try tosnatch soha from her and very clearly said all this to ishwari..
Ur ss is full of positivity

Please please update next part asap

Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.



Thank you so much Deepa!! Super glad that you enjoyed it... and that it was a good reprieve after the episode. 😆Can't deny that I would have loved a bigger response from you but koi na. You are excused this time. 😉

You are down with flu?? Take rest and take care. Have a relaxing weekend!! 🤗


I promise you honey...once am back to my senses I will write a full fledged comment for this part alone because I have so much more to say..I read this part with slurry mind and commented yesterday😆 so will read again leisurely and comment because it had so many layers wrt to all characters and it was really a solace after yesterday's episode for me😆 Will be back again 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Have U both taken any sort of theka to win our hearts, hit the core of our hearts, n make us cry.. plz don't mind...
Loved n felt the connect...
How emotionally described Dev's turmoil n his soft corner also his realization of his mistakes...
Minute details like Dev feeling awkward to tap the door open, Soha opening the door, Soha asking rude uncle... N what not...
Loved Sona clicking n catching memories of their special tym..
N gifting it to Dev through Soha..
Dev making Golu n Soha know n understand their relation.. taking Sona to pick the kids n Sona remembering n smiling...
Well my list will go on n on..

Also U tonned down Bijoy's constipation behavior was a treat..
N how can I leave to mention abt mamaji, issue n Dev...
Brilliant pay back Haan...

Loved how Dev calmly assures Sona.. despite of having the same fear in himself.. yet not letting her to know his change..

Gosh I started again.
So bhavnaoo ko samjho..
Aur jaldi se update dedo...
Still shall I tell U both how the update for me was...

Oh Soha calling Dev as papa...
Ohk.. now m really keeping control on myself...
Bye... But update will b always a wait... Greedy me...
Hope U don't mind my rant...
Keep making me cry... Ready n willing to cry ...

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