SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14

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Priya

@Dystopia

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Beautiful SS. I've been reading your story ever since the first part and now that I have finally signed up to IF I figured I really need to tell you both how wonderful this is. All the conversations are so amazing and it reminds me of old KRPKAB days.

Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon

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komal793

@komal793

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Posted: 8 years ago

#542

Loved the update. Love how Dev and Soha are bonding 😊
Dev-Ishwari part was fantastic 👏
Do continue soon.

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noor

@noor j

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#543

Read all parts in one go!! Loved it far too much, and love that the chapters are meaty and long and so emotional. You are a terrific writer :D

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Deepa

@deepsel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#544

I am back 😎 First of all extra jhappi for pulling a midnight stunt for this update🤗

Sona- Boses:

How beautifully you both have written Sona handling Bijoy on the phone👏 This made so much sense for the reasons she had to stay back in Delhi and the flow is very convincing! You guys also kept Bijoy true to his character of mistrust in Dev but still his trust intact on Sona without any unnecessary screaming!! Loved how she made them stay in Kolkata instead of hurrying like we saw in original..who doesn't like some lone Devakshi moments huh😉 How cute that picture Suha drawn was !I would literally visualize it through your capable writing!!

Ishwari:

Very typical of her to seek kitchen to share her happiness😆 and even more typical of her to judge Sona what she might or might not doGuess what Ishwari, our writers here have already made Dev know about his daughter unlike your CVs who want to prove you right at any cost😈

Dev - Suha:

Oh what a beauty of writing here ❤️ I can't wait to see this happen on screen!! I visualized Dev's bright face with soft tears in the corner of his eyes when he witnessed his princess drawing, Sona's flowing emotions seeing father-daughter bonding, Soha's pride in showing her talent and her bliss seeing a happy papa..absolutely fantastic ladies 👏 I loved how Sona had maintained every memory of Suha so Dev doesn't miss those 6 years even though if not in person..I could feel Dev's flurry of emotions here , can't help but feel for this poor guy !!

Dev - Golu:

I loved that Dev is still the same old Bigcha for Golu even after knowing about his daughter..such a cute bond they share and I literally LMAO imagining Golu and Soha together putting Dev in the spot😆

Devakshi - Kids:

Awww the mere words in single sentence is such a bliss to read, I wonder what will be my condition if i happen to see this on screen😆 Loved how Sona bared her heart about her fear (Yo Jatin take a hike buddy..you are not needed here😆) and Dev's comforting words are even more bang on..definitely lot has changed Sonakshi, which you have no idea about!! Loved how Dev managed both kids taking turns and making them special👏 It was really bliss..which was missed for six long years , only if they had the brains to sit and introspect years back

Devakshi - ishwari:

Oh the mere words in single sentence is sending scare waves 😆 As expected she barges to his office to question about her rights and I love Dev's words here " My daughter didn't have father for 6 years because of you, now I won't separate her from her mother again because of you" 👏 whoever wrote this take a bow ladies !! And the surprise of all Sona hears this

Should I say more how much am looking forward to next part 😳 Thank you for this reading delight ladies !!

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#545

@Deepa... now you are pulling the midnight shift, looks like!! Flu and its after-effects all gone, I trust??

Let me login through my laptop and I will reply you. Give me 5 minutes.

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#546

Hi Girls...

Finally I am back from hibernation... 😆😆

I was travelling on account of work , So home front took a hit . Just settling things now. Though managed to dole out the last part. Didn't really get a chance to log in and read the reviews. Imagine you write a post and don't even get a chance to read a review... I felt like I was chained down.

Oh well...

Will definitely log in today and reply to all the wonderful comments...

Thanks for all the appreciation...

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070
Wow its so beautifully written, loved it.. you two are just too good. 👏

I like the want Dev & Soha relationship is progressing
Dev is surely best dad and Soha does throw tantrums when she is with her.. This clearly indicates Soha is very much happy to have her dad in her life and she wants to get pampered by him..

And he loves indulging her. 😃

Its not that Sona doesn't pamper or love Soha but it has always been that way that dad loves their daughters the most and so is the case with Dev - Soha

Plus...being the child of a single parent, Soha had to be more understanding and accommodating than a typical six year old. Now she is learning to be a little girl through her Papa and Golu.

Looking forward to Ishwari - Soha ka milan

Update soon 😊

Probably in a day or two.

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Thank you suvika di and divya di for writing such a beautiful story and describing soha and dev's relationship so beautifully
I loved each and every part of this ss
Dev understood son's fear and ensure her that never ever he will try tosnatch soha from her and very clearly said all this to ishwari..
Ur ss is full of positivity

Please please update next part asap

Thanks fr pm

Thank you Anjali.😃 I think we have enough tantrums and negativity in the show. No point repeating that in our stories too, is there?? 😳

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Have U both taken any sort of theka to win our hearts, hit the core of our hearts, n make us cry.. plz don't mind...

Loved n felt the connect...
How emotionally described Dev's turmoil n his soft corner also his realization of his mistakes...
Minute details like Dev feeling awkward to tap the door open, Soha opening the door, Soha asking rude uncle... N what not...
Loved Sona clicking n catching memories of their special tym..
N gifting it to Dev through Soha..

Sonakshi might not trust him in her life but she can't deny that he, as a father, has missed out on a lot.

Dev making Golu n Soha know n understand their relation.. taking Sona to pick the kids n Sona remembering n smiling...
Well my list will go on n on..

Also U tonned down Bijoy's constipation behavior was a treat..

I think we have toned down all the characters, Chandni. 😆

N how can I leave to mention abt mamaji, issue n Dev...
Brilliant pay back Haan...

Loved how Dev calmly assures Sona.. despite of having the same fear in himself.. yet not letting her to know his change..

Gosh I started again.
So bhavnaoo ko samjho..
Aur jaldi se update dedo...
Still shall I tell U both how the update for me was...

Oh Soha calling Dev as papa...
Ohk.. now m really keeping control on myself...
Bye... But update will b always a wait... Greedy me...
Hope U don't mind my rant...
Keep making me cry... Ready n willing to cry ...

😆 No, I don't mind your rant. Thank you so much for showering your appreciation through your rant. 🤗

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Deepa

@deepsel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Suvika.
@Deepa... now you are pulling the midnight shift, looks like!! Flu and its after-effects all gone, I trust??
Let me login through my laptop and I will reply you. Give me 5 minutes.

Slept most the day Suvi 😆 much better than yesterday still hibernating in bed like polar bear else my weekends are always jam packed😛 You take your time..Patidev scrolling eyes to shut laptop , so I will log out now..You have a great day dear🤗

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