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Posted: 8 years ago
#1
Hii ,, #DevAkshians
We Don't knw what is going to be happen in Monday Episode ...
But I thought About writing a #Romantic FF About
Joolewala Devakshi Romance ...
How many of You Want This ...,
and Comment Your Expections ... !!

If DevAkshians Support Means I Will Write ..

Waiting ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Seeing u First time in the Forum... So Welcome in our KRPKAB Land... And About ur FF... yeh koi puchne wali baat hai..ofcourse go for it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
r u new to this forum ??? is that so, very warm welcome to this forum dear 😛
and ofcourse, eagerly waiting for ur writing...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Ohhh...thank u so much for this great welcome ...
Yeah I new to krpkab forum ...
And sure I will write ...
If any mistakes means pls correct kardena 😆 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
#A_Joola_Romance ...

Dev & Sona !! '

The Joola is just arrived , ishwari maa, Gkb is get shocked to see this ...
After making them understanding , Sona took it into her room,Sona is very Happy that its her childhood dream to swing on the joola with his prince.
At last,her dream is now going to happen now, she waited for dev ...

But dev is not came at the time ...
Sona is upset with this ...

Sona and ishwari,gkb and mamaji gathered in dinning table ...
Ish, and gkb is still angry with sona ,,,

Ish -- sona , tum dev ko batadhi na ... Joole ke baare mey .. Aur us joole ko tumhara kamreme rakhne ki zaroorat kya hai... ??
Sona -- nahi maa, vo phn nahi utaye,, aur
Vo meri bachpan ki aas tha...
Ish -- lekin sona,, dev ko aise jool... (She is going to tell something , dev entered)
Sona rushed ,and went near him,,
She started to talk
S -- dev ,, aap aane mey itna der kyun kare ,, you know I'm upset with you...
Kab se wait rahi hun aap ka..
But you...
She said all on one breath...
She forget that they ate standing in living room ...

Dev is just signalling her
D -- sona , sona ... sonnaaa...
Sona he telling her name continuously in slow voice ...
He didn't replied her ...
D -- maa ,, vo kuch kaam tha usliye aaj thoda late hogaya...

Sona get conscious when dev said maa
She then realized thatvtey are standing in the living room...

"Ufff,, arey sona ... Bina soche kya kya kehdiya tune" ( she talked to herself )

Ish -- dev beta,, bohat thakgaya hoga na , aaja kuch khaale ...
D -- maa main baadhme khaloonga , waise ab bhuk nahi hai,,
Ish - dev, bhuk nahi hai matlab ,, beta pehle se hi itna der hochuka hai... Upar se aaj tho kaam bi zyada karke aaya hai...
Bhukh to hoga na...
D -- maa ,, mujhe Sir dard horahai maa...
Baadme khalunga ...
Ish -- sir dard,, she get concerened

Between this gkb started to tell about that Joola to dev ,, in a perfect timing mamaji interrupted ...

Mj -- dev,, acha tum andar jao , kuch der aaram Karo...
Ish -- han, bhaiya sahi bola tumne,, dev beta aaja main le jaati tumhe kamre mey...
Mj -- ishwari, tum kya bolrahi hai...
Dev bacha nahi, vo bada ho chuka hai...
Aur sonakshi hai na uske saath...
Sona tu dev ko lekar jaa beta ...

Ishwari get dishearted ..
But mamaji is right in this ... ( sona have to spend time with dev)

Sona got a bag from dev's hand ...
They both wet to their room ...
Where sona perfectly decorated the room
Especially the Joola...

"Kya dev dixit isko pasand karenge..
Kya main sab teak kari hun na...
Agar dev eh sab dhekh naraaz tho nahi
Hoge na ...
But..
Mera childhood dream tho poore hone
Wala hai...
I'm very excited ... ""
All this are going through the sona's mind ...

Dev is going to open their room's door...


Must Comment Your Views Guys ...
I'm Waiting !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Sooo cute
Bt y u ended here..cant wait..plz update
Nd dnt forgetvto pm me
Welcome to the forum dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Welcome to the forum dear
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Yesss of course continue!!!
Will be waiting!


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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Dev is going to open their room door,,
While ria interrupted,,
Bhaiya maa, is calling you "she said..
Dev rushed to ish's room...
Meanwhile sona is quite irked...
She standing near their room itself

Ria went to open dev's room...
Sona interrupted ,, ria you want something
..
Ria started to talk..

No sona bhabi,, I knw aap bhaike kiye kuch surprise plan kare hai na...
Sona widened her eyes ...
I knw bhabi,you bought a new swing chair na...
Meanwhile before bhabi you are my best friend ...,, once we discussed about our childhood dreams khayal hai na..
Tum bataye the ,, that you love to swing on chair with your love .. She winked ...
And bhabi swing chair , aap, Bhaiya hmmm... Mast rahega na romance ...
Sona,, who is already blushing now fully changed red...

Bhabi,, control karo thoda .. Itna blush kar rahe hai. ... Jaise laali rang khilgaya...

Sona got little shy ..
Ria bohat bolti hai na..
Shut up , waise bi ab tu bi badi hogayi hai,, tumare dev Bhaiya ke saath mai baath karloongi,, tere shaadi ki baareme..

She smiled.. OK bhabi have a romantic moment ...
She started walking ..
Arey, jaa bi ab tu.. Sona playfully , pinched her

In ish's Room ...

Dev beta Maine tereliye davaa banaliya hai.. Eh peelena , Sir dard teak hojaayega ..
Dev drinked ,, and sat near ish..

Maa , eh sirf a headache hai, mujhe teak ho jaayega.. Pls ma ..
Mere liye kuch karti karti tu apna tabyet karab mat kar pls..
Aur bohat late ho chuka tu bi na soja ab...
Dev went near the door..
And turned to see ish,, she is still staring her son ...

He came near the bed ..
Maa,, dard ke liye dava tho dedi par..
Meri hug ..
Mujhe ek baar hug karle ma ..
Mujhe kuch dard nahi hoga..
Ish got very happy when hearing this..
Their hug wala flashback is going in her mind ..
She hugged and kissed his forehead ..
He made her sleep ..
And leaved the room ..

He came near his room,, and saw sona still standing out side ...

Arey , eh sona bi hai na ..
Abi tak yahan khadi hui hai ...
He started to walk fast ...

Sona why r u still standing outside ..
Go inside , door open karo he said ..

Main kyun karoon open , waise bi tumahara room hai na ,, so u open the door..

What?? Mera room .. Han mere room tha..
Ab hamara hai.. Hamara karo open ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Plz continue dear... eagerly waiting for next part..
Update soon...

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