Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Wowww so hot !!!! Romance at its best.. plz continue writing;) eagerly waiting;)
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Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Wowww so hot !!!! Romance at its best.. plz continue writing;) eagerly waiting;)
Sighhh...I can imagine Dev doing all this ..plz do write about the post Diwali morning..very nice n very sensuous piece of writing
Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
<font color="#ff0000">First of all I'm really sorry I made my
readers wait for so long; was held up in my official duties to such an extent
that I just did not get time to write up
this part, written it in a hurry as could keep you all waiting anymore, so
incase it looks shabby please pardon me. Hope you enjoy reading this part as
well</font><font color="#ff0000"></font>
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<font color="#ff0000">Part Two</font>
<font color="#ff0000">PRESENT TIME</font>
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<font color="#ff0000">Sonakshi's brain had stopped
functioning as Dev's touch on her body created havoc in her mind, she got back
to her senses when she felt Dev' s hands rub against her bosom as he tried to
undrape her saree. Getting back on her "mission protest" she quickly grabbed
her pallu back and tried to push Dev away feigning anger, "Dev maine kahan na tumse main bohot thak gayi hoon, phir bhi tumhe
apne man ki karni hai, tum na mujhse bilkul pyaar nahin karte, baaki saare
mardoan ki tarah tumhara dimaag bhi ek hi jagah atka hua hai", she burst
out. </font><font color="#ff0000">Dev was too smart to know her
acts by now, hence he knew to catch her off guard, "accha wifey to mera dimaag ek hi jagah atka hua hota hai, jaise ki
tumhe yeh sab accha nahin lagta, let me recollect, resort kisne book kiya
tha?shayad maine... nahin...aur maa se jhoot bhi maine hi bola tha ki hum
tumhare mama se milne jaa rahe hai...aur haan yeh bhi maine hi kahan tha ki
ab se hum har subah aise hi uthenge...to patniji please mujhe samjhayenge
aap ka har subah aise hi uthne ka matlab kya hota hai aapki bhasha mein?",
Sona was too shy and numb to respond at that moment.</font><font color="#ff0000">"aur waise bhi main kahan keh raha hun ki we
have to go all the way?...maine toh aisa kuch kahan bhi nahin...main to
sirf tumhe yeh sikhane ki koshish kar raha tha ki humari wali hindi mein kaunse
gehne ko kya kaha jata hai...tum to kuch aur hi soch baithi...", Dev leaned in on her leaving very little gap
in between them, enough to rupture her senses, Sona quickly closed her eyes,
unable to bear his proximity.</font><font color="#ff0000">Smiling inwardly at the effect he
still has on her, despite of them doing the act so many times, he began tracing
his fingers on her features, starting from her forehead, whispering s**ily into
her ears he continued, "ab tumse mujhse
dur nahin raha jata to main kya karun?...ab ismein meri galti thodi na
hai ki tumhe mujhe dekhkar aise waise khayal aate hai?...man karta hai
ki tum mujhe", giving her a open mouthed kiss on her delicate lips, "aise kiss karo, to ismein galat kuch nahin
hai, aur tumhe sharmane ki bhi jaroorat nahin hai, afterall tumhara haq hai
mujhpar, tum mere saath jo chahe kar sakti ho, mujhe bilkul bura nahin
lagega...shotti Miss. Bose ", he winked earning a deathly glare from his
wife.</font><font color="#ff0000">Suddenly remembering his left out
job he recovered, pulling her pallu off her bosom again he continued, "haan to main kya keh raha tha, haan humein
jis cheez ke bare mein janna hai sirf usi pe concentrate karna chahiye, baaki
saari bekaar cheezein hata deni chahiye,
taaki humara dhyaan apni manzil se na bhatke", with this he started opening
her blouse while Sona continued to glare at him, unable to realize as to why
she was lying almost paralyzed infront of her devil husband. </font><font color="#ff0000">Hook by hook, he opened her
blouse making all attempts to intentionally rub his hands against her heaving
bosom, all Sona could do was to moan helplessly, every moan from her was
arousing him even more, he wanted to free her of all her coverings, kiss her
meanly, punish her for making him wait so long on their 1st Diwali
together, make her his all over again.</font><font color="#ff0000">By now even Sona was enjoying the
pleasure he was giving her, her body, the feeling of being tired due to the
household chores was long gone, now she wished to be tired for a different
reason, all she wanted him to do was to make love to her as soon as possible, she
was getting all irritated for he was delaying the process for his own pleasure,
but was too shy to reveal her eagerness to him, as she knew this would inturn
earn her a lot of teasing from him. So she decided to play along her naughty
husband, and let him do whatever he wanted to do with her tonight.</font><font color="#ff0000">As she was busy in her thought process, Dev
who was now lying down next to her, pulled her over him, kissing her anxiously;
while his lips continued to taste hers, his hands were busy at an altogether
different task. He very neatly took of her blouse without her even realizing,
one should mention the ease he had attained at the job of undressing his wife, especially
after their make out at the resort was commendable. Rolling over he broke their
kiss, to move down to her neck, as his hands rubbed against her bare navel
while he un-draped her saree pleat by pleat. Her hands automatically wrapped around
his nape, while her fists tightened around his shirt, while his hands were now
busy taking off every single clothing that was barring him from viewing his
wife uncensored.</font><font color="#ff0000">Dev got up from his position, to have a look
at the beauty lying infront of him; with her saree and remaining clothes lying away
in a silent corner of the room, where he had hurriedly thrown them away after
taking it off from her; she lay before him, eyes closed firmly, dressed only in
her jewellery which he had made her wear earlier in the evening. With a glint
of mischief in his eyes, he leaned over and huskily spoke in her ears, "ab woh kaam karen jo hum actually karna
chahte the, agar tum chaho to", Sona smiled coyly as he got down to his
work.</font><font color="#ff0000">Taking off her maang-tika he
kissed on her forehead, "ise maang tika
kehte hai... aur ise nathni", he said while simultaneously removed her
nose-pin. Sona hissed in pleasure as he took off her earrings and bit her
earlobes, her hold over his shirt getting firmer minute by minute. Dev made
sure to kiss her evenly, while he took off her necklace, bangles and finger
rings. After kissing her on her upper body, he moved down to the strap of gold
around her waist, "ise kamarband kehte
hai ", Sona curled her toes as Dev leaned down to kiss her on her exposed
navel. He intentionally moved his hands down there in order to arouse his
already ignited wife, "Aaahhh Aouch,
Devvv...", was all she managed to say while her moaning continued as
he lit up her raw passion. </font><font color="#ff0000">One by one the jewellery kept
getting of her body and piling up on the side table at their bedside, finally
moving down to her toe rings he tickled her on her feet, before instructing
her, "aur agli baar koi pooche ki bichhiya
kya hota hai, to confuse mat hona", pointing at her toe rings he said, "isse kehte hai bichhiya, ab acche se yaad
kar lena, kyunki har baar itne pyaar se samjhana mere liye possible nahin na
hoga, aaj to thik hai hum kamre mein akele the, kabhi kisine sab ke saamne pooch
liya tab thodi na main tumhe samjha paunga", he sucked her toes and winked at
her, while Sona hid her face deep inside the pillow. </font><font color="#ff0000">Sona was surprised when he got
down from the bed and stood there at a distance starring at her bare form, she
wondered what he was up-to as he continued to gulp in her alluring figure. A
sudden urge of covering herself up with a blanket hit her, as she felt all
nervous under his piercing gaze. She was amazed at the effect this man had on
her with a single glare of his, despite of shedding it all infront of him on so
many instances. Sensing her awkwardness, Dev decided to end her torture,
quickly getting off his clothes, he climbed on the bed next to her, taking her
in his embrace he kissed her passionately, while this time she responded back
equally. </font><font color="#ff0000">Passion took over the two souls
madly in love with each other as they made love all night, the bedroom was
filled with the moaning and giggling of the newlyweds. They were busy taking
over each other's bodies, while marking each other with their love marks; groping,
hugging, kissing and rolling over each other they lost count of the number of
times they gave in to their desires and made love, getting raunchier and wilder
with their every attempt. Finally exhausted and satisfied, they lay in each
others arms, cuddling into their partner, as Dev covered them with a sheet; they
fell into a blissful sleep, dreaming of the joy the coming day of Diwali would
bring into their lives.</font><font color="#ff0000"></font>
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<font color="#ff0000">P.S.
This part concludes the Devakshi Romance on the Choti Diwali, actually had
intended to write their story on the Diwali day but somehow got carried away
with this idea, this one's complete in itself but incase you guys want will
write up another part including their romance on Diwali day morning, but I seriously
don't know how north Indians celebrate their Diwali. So in-case you want me to
write up this part, it'll be according to the rituals which we follow in my
state. Please let me know of I should write it or not.</font>
Originally posted by: Mishti_94
Speechless!
Totally!
What a chapter! 👏
So steamy and hottt!
Totally on fireee!
Aur likho di!
Start with the next one jaldi jaldi! 🤪
Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Ohh dear...kuch jyaada asanskaari ho gaya kya??????
Should i tone it down a bit?????
pls let me know if thats d case ok
Mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagega...