Take me Anywhere- Devakshi FF(DS-2 page 56) - Page 7

And, man... The wait was worth it... This part is absolutely perfect.. And, I don't think that anyone could do a better job of writing this part...

Going to the specifics, I adored the kitchen scene... It was sensuous, yet beautiful and I think, it takes some skill to execute it the way, that you did...

Also, the scene where you described the transformation in Dev and Sonakshi, just after spending a few hours with each other, clearly expresses that they are truly soulmates...

As well as the part where Sonakshi makes the wish... It was such a simple wish, but for two people who are yearning to be with each other, yet due to circumstances, they can't...

It was heartbreaking and I could feel that pain oozing out of your words.. So, again, congratulations on the implementation of this part...

All in all, in simple words, your scenes were able to paint a beautiful and mesmerizing picture which enchanted us... So, thank you once again.

I don't know whether you wish to continue it, but I request you to continue this story and build on this strong foundation..

Till next time,

Harryfan011.

I do wish to continue this and i will update soon!! But

The next part is going to be a bit dramatic so i dont know how ppl will react to it so i am a bit skeptical about it so let is see!!

It was awesum...loved every bit of it...cont soon dear😊

AUTHORS NOTE

this part contains some OVER THE TOP drama inspired by a real life situation...

and according to my story Dev and sona have already addressed the infertility problem with the family and like mature adults they have all accepted or at least tried to accept the hard reality and adjust with it...

PART-5

DEV'S POV

I woke up to the most beautiful sight in front of me... the sunlight from the window filtering into the room hitting sona.. she glowed in the dim sunlight... the most precious thing I could ever own is this woman in my arms... She was wearing my shirt and sleeping soundly in my arms and in that moment I wished I could wake up to this sight more often...

FLASHBACK (6 months ago)

I came back from the office and headed straight to my room. I just had to see sona, I had not seen her since the morning and she hadn't called me even once throughout the day, this was driving me insane. I walked in the room to find her sitting on the edge of the bed and lost deep in thoughts, I sat next to her and she gave me wry smile, I took her hand in mine but she just slid it out of mine I looked at her questioningly and she began "dev kya aap mere ek sawal ka jawab denge??" I admit I was nervous but I said yes and she asked "do you remember the last time we had dinner together?" I was taken aback by this question and I was about to say we have dinner together every day but the look she had on her face made me stop and rethink my answer so I kept mum and she began again " okay let me rephrase when was the last time we had any of the meals together?" this one was even tougher than the last one I kept mum again and waited for the logical explanation when she again began " you don't remember because the last time we sat together and had a meal was a very long time back!!"

I still could not put my finger on the missing piece so I asked her a different question instead "sona aaj kuch hua hai kya??" when she did not give me any reply I continued" tumne toh aaj chutti li thi na ma ki help karne ke liye... Ghar pe koi puja thi aaj??"

In a monotonous tone she said "Han maine chutti li thi but aaj bhi wahi hua jo humesha hote aaya hai, or aage bhi hota rahega..."

I turned around to face her and taking her hand firmly in mine I asked her "sona mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha a little help please!!"...

This was it, tears started flowing down her face and sobbing she began her tale "dev aaj maine chutti li thi taki mai ma ki help kar sakun aapke office jane ke baad, mai ready hui and neeche gai mamiji n ma ki help krne ke liye, as soon as maine plates uthai ma ne bola ki sonakshi beta yeh sab kaam krne ke liye bhola n keechu hai who kr denge... I thought koi baat nhn I will help her receive the guests but nahi ma ko toh sare guests ko khud hi attend krna hai infact, unhone mujhe kissi se baat tak nahi krne di, dev, and whats more jab puja khatam hui and sab log adjust hue, and I sat down with the ladies ma ne indirectly, mujhe kaha ki mai bht busy hongi issiliye I should retire to my room... "She took a deep breath tried to steady herself and began again " jab shobha aunty ne ma se kaha ki when will she be lucky enough to be able to call herself a grand mom.. before she could say anything mamiji interjected and simply kaha ki mai kabhi ma nhn ban sakti... iss baat ka itna bura nahi laga jitna jo ma ne kaha un baaton ka laga..."

"kya kaha ma ne" I asked I could not understand the point of this rant but I still let her continue..

" she said han woh ma nahi ban sakti... on being asked agar unhone jaldbazi ki shaadi krne mein she said yes!!! Dev, was she or was she not ready for this??" she broke down after saying the last word... " dev humne shaadi kyu ki?? Maine aapse pucha tha na ki humne last sath beth kr khana kab khaya tha aapke pass iska jawab nahi tha, kyuki ma ne humein kabhi bhi sath baith kr khana khane hi nahi dia, kabhi sath kuch krne nahi dia... "

That's it I knew where this argument was headed, I shouted not being able to bear any thing against my mother " bas sona ab tum hadd se zyada bol rahi ho"

" mai zyada nahi sach bol rahi hun dev or waise bhi jab bhi baat ma ki aati hai aap apne aankhon pe pati band lete hai" she retorted back.

"enough sona" but she being SONA she didn't shut up "dev aaj mai chup nahi rahungi, maine apse shaadi ki thi, apki responsibilities share krne ke liye, aapka sath neebhane ke liye, ghr mein ek non existant body ban ke rehne ke liye nahi ki thi..."

"sonakshi baat ko be wajah mat bhadhao tum non existant thodi ho tum iss Ghar ki bahu ho tumhara haq hai sab cheezon par..." I said annoyed.

"Please dev, agar mai mere pati ki zindigi ke sabse important insaan ke liye hi koi mayne nahi rakhti toh mai itni mehnat kr kis ke liye rahi hun... Maine aapse shaadi koi keechu bhaiya ya bhola bhaiya ki jagah lene ke liye nahi aai thi... Agar ma ko kabhi mujhe apnana hi nahi tha toh itna sab kyu??" she continued ranting.

"sona aisa nahi h" I tried to be calm and reason with her.

"aisa nahi hai toh phir ma kabhi mujhe aapko raat ka khana kyu nahi parosne deti, kabhi bhi mujhe aapki koi responsibility kyu lene nahi deti" she sobbed hard and sank to the floor

but my anger rose to its peak " bas kro sona tum ma pe humare beech aane ki allegation laga rahi ho"

"agar yeh sirf allegatio h toh aap 1 chota sa experiment krne se nahi darenge right? I nodded an affirmative and she began, determination ringing " go downstairs and tell ma ki mai sona ke sath agra ja raha hun do din ke liye will be back by thrusday ".

"And what will this prove"

"Agar ma ne aapko nahi roka toh aap sahi but agar mai sahi hun toh aaj aap iss issue ko address krenge.. Deal??"

I went downstairs... To find ma working on the kitchen "ma mujhe tujhse kuch zaroori baat krni hai"

" han bol na beta" she said smiling I looked at her tender face and solemnly said " maa mai sona ke sath 2 din ke liye agra ja raha hoon tujhe kki problem toh nahi hai na" she stood there rooted to the spot I wited for an answer but she kept mum when she didn't s anything I asked her again "ma tujhe koi problem toh nahi hai na"

"huh nahi beta mujhe koi problem nahi hai tu ja aaram se ja" she replied

I loked to find sona entering the scene with perfect ease "ma, who hum aaj raat ko hi ja rahe hai meri conference kal subha jaldi hai, toh agar traffic mila toh mai late ho jaungi" she stated, and further added " dev aap meri help krenge packing krne mein ??"

I nodded and we moved out of the dinning room and went to the bedroom I still could not figure out the reason behind such an elaborate experiment she was my mother for gods sake why would she even want to think about anything that would hurt my wife. Sona sat down on the edge of the bed, she looked so sure of the outcome that it scared me. Suddenly there was a knock on the door and ma walked in... " kya hua ma sab theek hai n aap thodi pareshan lag rahi h" sona said perfectly in check of her emotions I was stil completely confused..

ma sat next to sona looked at me and said "dev beta kal ekadashi hai or mahakal ka din h who jo ajmeri gate wala shiv mandir h na mera kal wahan jana bahut zaroori hai... who jo tujhe sarla kaki yaad h na unke pote ka mundan hai wahan par toh agar mai wahan nahi gai toh unhe aacha nahi lagega "

A tear slid down sona's face and she quickly wiped it off!! And I knew this was where I had to confront my mother as to why she can't accept sona. I took her hand and placed it on my head and said " ma meri kasam kha or bol kya tu mann se sona ko apni bahu nahi manti?? Kya tujhe iss shaadi se koi problem h??"

She remained silent for what seemed like an eternity from where I sat on the floor I could see sona's silent tears and it felt as if my heart was being ripped open... " mai teri khamoshi ka kya matlab samjhun ma" I said as I faced her. Her face was devoid of all colours and emotions we remained silent for some more time when finally she spoke "maine sona ko apni bahu toh mann liya h dev lekin shayad usse teri jiwan sanghini kabhi mann na paun"

I was completely bowled over it felt as if someone punched my gut and I bluttered "kyu ma?? Kyu kia tune aisa ?? Jab tu iss rishte se kabhi khush hi nahi thi toh phir tujhe kya zaroorat padi thi??" my head was in a frenzy and I figured I couldn't form any coherent sentences anymore nothing was making sense to me...

" iska jawab mai deti hun dev" sona began in a lifeless tone " aapki ma aapko toot ke bikharta hue nahi dekh sakti thi iss liye"

I was still reeling from this when ma spoke in a hurried tone " nahi aisa nahi hai mai dev ko bas khush dekhna chahti hun, lekin mere pass bhi rakhna chahti hun, agar aisa nahi hota toh kya mai sona ki halat janne ke baad bhi usse iss ghr mein rehne deti... Woh toh maa bhi nahi ban sakti... lekin apne bete ke liye maine sona ko aapnane ki bahut koshish ki magar shayad dev jaisa beta paa ke mai bahut khudgars ho gai hoon toh shayad kabhi dev ko bant nahi pai!!"

and that was it as soon as the words were out I realised that getting me married to sona was something my mother did to keep me with her... " ma mai toh tera hi hoon tujhe mujhe apne pass rakhne ke liye sona ko beech mein lane ki koi zaroorat nahi thi!!" And I waked out of the room leaving behind two pair of eyes staring at me one expecting and one accusing...

When I came back I found sona packing her bags she didn't even look at me. I walked in front of her grabbed her hand and demanded" sona yeh sab kya hai, maine kaha tha na humare beech mein jhagde honge arguments honge but u r not supposed to leave this room... phir bhi tum yeh sab kya kar rahi ho?"

She just moved her hand out of my grip and in the same lifeless tone replied "dev yeh sirf aapke bare mein nahi hai... jab aapki ma hi rishte se khush nahi hai toh kya aap khush reh paenge ?? dev maine aapse shaadi ki thi taki mai aapke sath reh sakun. Or mai aapko roz thoda thoda batt te hue nahi dekh sakti... Issiliye hum dono ke liye yahi aacha hoga ki hum alag ho jaen"

And I stood there in a daze feeling beyond helpless...

END OF FLASHBACK

And how I wish I could turn back the clock...

I know this must have disappointed a lot of readers and for that... i apologisebut this was important fro the progression of the story!!

your comments, critisism and views are most welcome.. feel free to use the comments section...

HAPPY READING

It was amazing!!

Finally Dev confronted his mother...lekin usse hua kya??

Anyways, it was very good.

Please update soon