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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Superb update...so here dev knows ishwari's real facade...great...sad even his confrontation couldn't change her behaviour...
Poor sona is being taunted for not being able to conceive...guess this world and its people will never change...
Update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Superb update...so here dev knows ishwari's real facade...great...sad even his confrontation couldn't change her behaviour...
Poor sona is being taunted for not being able to conceive...guess this world and its people will never change...
Update soon dear


Actually thats called generation gap... our generation seems to be well aware of science and its magics be it conventional or non conventional... but the gen x as they are dont pay much heed to the growth in the concerned zone!!! Hence ishwari says those words... if elt its actually the right thing to trigger a seperation!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
nice part...
so it was the reason y they separated...
Dev recognised his mom's real face..great..
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
I wish they do this kind of test on Ishwari in the serial too..n I really like the confrontation..keep writing dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
There comes a time when u have to fight for urself with ur own loved ones... also fight with urself within ur self...
Living in such society...
It becomes very hard. We become helpless to our selves..
But it is harsh reality...

Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Actually i feel sona dev ko demo dikhayegi kuvh rang mein bhi ... Only then dev will realize
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Atleast Dev knows his mother now... But why did he let Sona go away from him ?Its a sad juncture in your story...but still loving it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Vibrant_Ana

Atleast Dev knows his mother now... But why did he let Sona go away from him ?Its a sad juncture in your story...but still loving it.


I feel anybody who knows their parents are not satisfied with their married life tend to make themselves distant from either the spouse or the parent in dev's case no matter what he would never leave his mother for the past still has shackles around him... and also i feel parents are our most important responsibility... but that responsibility should not become a burdan... in dev's case he is even ready to bear that burdan!!! All in all one should bever disrespect or disregard their parent because we will forever be indebt to them!!! But it is also a parent's responsibility to see to the children's happiness!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi!! thankx a lot for understanding the need to upload the last chapter!! so this ones for all you lovely people!!! HAPPY READING

And I, I promise on all existence
If it breathes then it is our witness
We have unfinished business
You and I
And so my word is that I'll cross those bridges
With zero regret for limits
And distance, you and I

Part- 6

SONAKSHI's POV

I woke up to the brilliant sunshine filtering into the bedroom and felt a pair of strong arms around my waist i looked up to find the most brilliant pair of eyes staring at me... a smile automatically lit up face" morning" I said "good morning wifey" he replied the answering smile as brilliant.

I got up from the bed and he followed my move, I moved to pick the towel from the shelf and turned only to bump into a shirtless dev "seriously dev" I asked " are you sure u not up for a round 2... I make a hell of a naked breakfast" he winked and I blushed "no" was my only response to this flirtiouas avatar of his... "Your loss" saying this he moved out of my way, I rolled my eyes and proceeded to the destination.

I stood before the ornate dressing table in our bedroom, this was truly our house!! And I felt oddly comforted by this notion. I was dressed in the anarkali I had worn last morning... thinking about it the memories of the day flashed before my mind dev had stayed true to his words he did give me memories worth a lifetime!!

I walked out of the room And the smell of freshly cooked food hit me, surprised I hurried towards the kitchen to find dev standing behind the counter and pouring me a glass of juice.. watching me take a seat at the dining table he said"oh!good now that you are here we can start the breakfast"

I looked at him, to see him take a plate and serve me the hot, cooked poha and I bluttered" yeh kya hai"

"poha hai miss kahrgosh... Bina gajar ke!!" he smirked at his own joke...

" not funny mr dixit.. mera matlab hai yeh kahan se aaya" he again rolled his eyes and said " aaya nahi banaya!!"

Taking a seat next to me he served himself some " kissne banaya" I still could not wrap my head around the idea that a somebody apart from me did this job...

" maine" he replied oddly chirpier "huh" I was honestly quite surprised at his admission I must have looked really confused so he just smiled, and began his explanation in the same chirpier tone " dr bose abhi bhi aisi kayi cheezein hai jo aap mere bare mein nahi janti... jaise, han, yeh maine banaya hai... jab mai 8 saal ka tha, toh mere papa ne mujhe yeh banana seekhaya tha ... Uss waqt nikki hone wali thi and ma ki tabiet bahut kharab rehti thi.. Or neha bahut choti thi, toh kissi ko toh breakfast banana tha na.. toh yeh responsibility papa ne mujhe di thi... Pata hai, jab maine pehli baar poha bana ke unhe khilaya tha, toh who itne khush the jaise maine koi gold medal jeet liya ho..." he laughed a dry laugh and my heart felt heavy as I realized this might be the very few memories he had left of his father, he continued with a sigh " u know mere papa bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar krte the jitna ma krti h.."

I looked at him and said " ofcourse dev, aapke jaise beta ho toh pyaar toh hoga hi na"

We ate in silence for a few minutes before he began in a firm voice " maine decide kia hai that you are coming with me" " huh?? Kahan" I asked

" aaj tumhe ho kya gaya hai subha se ajeeb baatein kr rahi ho, duffer toh tum ho hi bewakoofon wali baton kyu kr rahi ho?" this earned him a smack on the shoulder and he continued " aacha baba!! Mera matlab tha ki mai tumhe apne sath ghar leke jana chahta hoon"

I was completely taken aback and without thinking bluttered "konse ghar"

he placed his hand on my forehead and checked as if I had developed a fever " nahi, tabiet toh theek, hi lag rahi hai, phir bhi, kuch hua hai kya? Aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Mere kitne ghar hai sona..."

"ek" I said in a slow voice "han toh mai chahta hoon tum mere sath, mera jo, ek, ghar hai na, wahan chalo"

I looked at him surprised and then said " dev, aapki ma iss rishtey sse khush nahi hai, toh kya aap mere sath khush reh paenge, yeh jante hue bhi ki ma upset hai? Dev aapne jo bhi kia hai, who sab maa ki khushi ke liye kia hai or hum apne parents ke wish ke khilaaf ja kar kuch bhi krenge toh hum bhi khush nahi reh paenge to iska kya point hai"

He looked shattered" but mai tumhare bina bhi khush nahi reh sakta it feels like a part of me is missing" " I too feel the same" I replied...

"phir kyu nahi?? Kyu tum mere sath nahi reh sakti" his look broke my heart in pieces. "aap jante hai mai kyu aapke sath nahi reh sakti"

" lekin sona aisa kab tak chalega kabhi na kabhi toh humein sab kuch face krna padega na??" his gaze was almost pleading " aise chalta raha toh tumhare baba ya meri ma koi na koi divorce ki baat zaroor krega or who mai nahi chata" he continued

" baba ke bas mein hota toh meri shaadi aapse kab ki tut chuki hoti" I muttered hoping he would not catch that but as luck would have it he sprang to his feet and almost yelled" mai aisa nahi hone dunga!!! Mai tumhe chodunga hi nahi!! Mai khud, baba se baat krunga lekin mai tumhe kissi or ka, no ways, I can't even think about it, no, I am not ready for this.." he started hyperventilating, so I stood up, poured him a glass of cold water, made him sit down, sat next to him and tried to calm him down.

This worked, and when he was calm and composed he looked at me, and a tear slid down his eyes. I took his face in my hands, and wiped his tear, and said as calmly as possible " mujhe pata hai dev, or mai bhi yeh nahi kar sakti I was meant to be yours and I will only stay yours" the last line became a whisper..

we sat there staring at each other when he said "agar mujhpe itni responsibilities na hoti na toh mai tumhe kidnap kr leta"

giving a wry smile I replied "agar aap pe responsibilities na hoti toh aapko mujhe kidnap krne ki zaroorrat hi nahi padti, mai khud hi aapke pass bhaag ke aa jati."

We were in the car, he was dropping me home before he would move to his, we sat silently, our minds chaotic and our hearts heavy... I hoped against hope that this ride would never end... when he began in a low voice "tum magalsutra or sindoor nahi pehnti toh phir yeh Bengali bangles kyu pehenti ho?"

the question was not something I didn't expect so in a low voice I replied" baba ki wajah se... jab mai aapke ghar se apne ghar aai thi.. toh baba ne gusse mein aa ke mere sar se sindoor mita dia tha or agar dadi nahi rokti toh who mera magalsutar bhi kheech lete... seriously dev maine unhe itne gusse mein uss din se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha... uske baad maa ne kaha ki mai who sab na pehnu... and mai maan gai..."

" Toh yeh bangeles" he asked "jab humien yeh pehnai jati hai na toh yeh kaha jata hai ab yeh tabhi utarna when u r no longer a wife, but mai toh apki biwi hoon na... toh mai kaise utar doon" .

the rest of the ride was silent. We reached my home and I got out to see ma standing at the door, she came to stand next to me dev got down from the car and touched ma's feet and ma said" khush raho " when he stood up she continued "dev beta agar kabhi ghar aana chaho toh aa sakte ho... sona tumhari hi hai bas humare pass hai"!! saying this she smiled and the answering smile was as brilliant

"thank you ma" saying this he mouthed a bye' to me and drove away and I stood rooted to the spot waiting for a miracle to happen...


your comments and critisism is always welcome!!😊

i will update soon!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
This one was emotional towards the end of the chapter but I loved it...waiting for the next part...write soon pls...

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