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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
What??????it got over soo soon
Not fair mijhe aur bhi padhna tha
Pls update d next part soon n ths time a longer one pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
It was a wonderful part!!!
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Thank you for the quick update... I was looking forward to this part very much... I liked the simplicity of the plot, in this part..
Like your last part, your writing style remains simple and while, I like a bit of flair and finesse.. But, I have to admit this suits your way of storytelling...

As for the plot, seriously.. Are you reading my mind, because this story is venturing very close to what I think should happen in the story of our Devaskhi...

Please update soon.. Will be eagerly waiting for the next part..

Till next time,
Harryfan011.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Harryfan011

Thank you for the quick update... I was looking forward to this part very much... I liked the simplicity of the plot, in this part..

Like your last part, your writing style remains simple and while, I like a bit of flair and finesse.. But, I have to admit this suits your way of storytelling...

As for the plot, seriously.. Are you reading my mind, because this story is venturing very close to what I think should happen in the story of our Devaskhi...

Please update soon.. Will be eagerly waiting for the next part..

Till next time,
Harryfan011.


Thank u so much for your feedback😊

I will surely be able to update tomorrow!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
excellent os dear..part 1 and 2 r awesome eagerly waiting for next part..pls update soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Flat...😉
Wow..
This part was the said n unsaid...
Both were silent but understanding n knowing without saying is the heart to heart understanding...
Waiting eagerly for flat part to make our hearts flat...
Update soon dear. .
Can u send pm plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U don't need criticism but u need appreciation instead ..keep updating
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhy2015

U don't need criticism but u need appreciation instead ..keep updating


Thank you so much and i will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

hi peeps thank you for all the love and the messegaes!! here it is part 3 it is a bit long so HAPPY READING

Part 3

SONAKSHI's POV

I looked at him talking on the phone with his beloved secretary Tina!! I mentally scoffed even on our wedding anniversary she had to ring him up to remind him of something important!! "Thank you Tina" and he disconnected the call to face me.

A brilliant smile lit up his face and i really wondered what Tina had said which could really cheer him up to this measure."Lets go" he simply stated and i stood there rooted to the spot waiting for a rational explanation but after a while i figured he wasn't going to give me any... So i simply complied with his out of the box demand.

We drove in silence partly because this was our daily routine and partly because we weren't ready to destroy this perfect day in a long time... When we went our separate ways 6 months ago we had decided to never call one another, never meet one another, but this was not what happened...when i moved back with my parents i had already joined the JLS hospital on dev's insistence somehow he just wanted me to work in that particular hospital out of all the other options available for me... I later figured this was because of his weird obsession to have his wife under his direct control since he was a trustee in the hospital board and almost every member on the board was in awe with his personality. I never complained about it, i almost welcomed the relief such strong aura brought with it. Nobody in the hospital ever dared to ask me a question about my on the rocks marriage, i never even heard a snide remark, such was my husband's terror!! We stayed true to our word for a week... And then anxiety got the best of him and one evening as i stepped out of the hospital i saw the same black volvo parked in the VIP section of the lot and mr dixit leaning on the frame. My first reaction was to storm away from the place and never see him again... But at the end of the day i loved him and curse this love, i walked towards him with a high head and a heavy chest... "aap yahan kya kr rahe hai mr dixit. Humnein decide kia tha na... Kya aap kissi cheez ko bhi honour nahi kr sakte.. Na humari shaadi ko or na ab humare alag hone ke decision ko??? Kyu mr dixit??"

I could see the storm under the calm facade and he replied " aap bhi toh humare alag hone ke decision ko honour nahi kr rhi h... Yeh bengali bangles utarna aap bhul gai na??" his question took me by surprise... Honestly i was not prepared for this. It was not like i was not happily married to him or i deliberately wanted to be free of it... This seperation was a result of circumstances and insecurities. But when i didn't reply he just simply stated in a matter of fact tone" aapko jawab deni ki zaroorat nahi h mrs dixit aap" "its dr bose for u" but he still continued in the same unaffected tone "aap late ho chuki hai n the weather is changing yeh aapke liye aacha nahi hai so please have a seat"

Without further arguments i sat in the car... This became a regular routine no matter at what time i checked out of the hospital he was always waiting for me in the same spot sometimes with a cup of coffee... but else this became a constant in my life sometimes i felt i was more eager for my shift to end than i was for the beganning of it... The car rides were always silent, nobody spoke anything but it still was the most blissful time of the day for me... He took the same route every day and, every day he took the right instead of the left, this brought the dull dry ache to the fore front of my being and i kept wondering what could have been only if...

" hum pahunch gaye" his voice brought me out of my reverie and i noticed we were no longer moving he got out of the car and i followed his lead. For the first time noticing my surroundings, it was a parking lot of a posh high rise and from the exteriors of the building i realized this was very close to Ishwari niwas!!! I must have looked quite puzzled because he seemed truly amused at my expression.

" why are u looking so confused... Bharosa nahi h mujhpe" he winked, this sent butterflies unraveling in my stomach, even though we were married the slightest of reactions from him sent me over the edge!!!

"nahi" "huh???" and from those expressions it was evident i was acting foolish so i rephrased " nahi bharosa hai..."

DEV's POV

I took her hand and lead the way towards the elevators, we got in and i pressed 12... She looked at me with her big brown doe eyes and i smiled at her... In no time we were standing outside the doors of the flat 12010. I took out the keys which had a ribbon tied on them and placed it in her hands...

"Dev yeh kya h??" she asked completely surprised

"This is one of the many memories we are about to make today!!" i simply stated and turned her around to face the door and i literally took her hand in mine and inserted the key into the lock we opened the door and she walked inside the apartment...

"OH MY GOD!!!!" she squealed as soon as she walked in... "This is exactly as i imagined it"

The house was a simple three bedroom house the main door opened to a little passage that had a shoe rack on one side and it opened in a rectangular living room which was painted a pastel shade of white and there was a sofa to the left wall below the windows which were covered with white curtains with adjoining chairs on both ends of the sofa. There was a dining room on the right-end side of the room which was attached to an open kitchen, which was a mixture of wooden brown colours giving it a very earthen appearance. There were three bedrooms down the corridor joining the living room. The wall of the corridor was covered with pictures of the time we first met, our selfies, our wedding pictures and various other such pictures. The first room was painted a slight darker shade of beige and had a low sitting arrangement with a huge tv dominating the door wall the room was completely empty except for the big unit that held sonakshi's favourite collection of music and dvds... the second room was a simple room in shades of blue. A queen sized bed dominated the bedroom which also had a top to bottom glass panelled wall which overlooked the bustling city. The third room was my personal favorite and i knew sonakshi would fall in love with it the moment she would open the door- when she would open the door this was another surprise for her- the center of the room was dominated by a huge white four poster bed which was covered by a white veil on three sides of the bed the room had a lot of butterfly lights or something like that as my interior designer described it but it looked beautiful in full glow and the wall facing the bed had a tv and around the tv were some more pictures of us together.

I stood at the threshold of the house waiting as she went in and I watched her exclaim at things like a little baby girl! Yes, thats what she was my baby girl!! i smiled at the thought when she literally ran into in my arms and i had to turn around to balance myself. "Easy baby girl" she just laughed the sound resembling the wind chimes in the wind...

"wont you invite me in" "huh" she asked confused "yaad hai pehle jab tumne mujhse apna dream house share kia tha toh maine kaha tha ki ek din mai tumhara woh dream bhi pura karunga" i said as we moved in the house and i continued shutting the main entrance door " and this is me doing it" I finished extending my arms mid air "yeh flat tumahra hai agar tum isse accept karo toh"

She looked at me and then her tears spilled from the corners of her eyes and i wiped them away before taking her lips into a slow passionate kiss our lips moving in perfect sync with one another we broke the kiss when we were completely out of breath, i rested my forehead on hers smiled and said "aaj no more tears Mrs. dixit"...

i know nothing much happens here but trust me its important for the progression of the story!!

feel free to drop in ur views, throwing roses, or eggs ir ur choice😆😉

and i will upload soon!!


Edited by Tremors - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
U surely deserve a Garland of roses...
Thnks for the update...
Love Ur story...
Waiting for next...

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