Take me Anywhere- Devakshi FF(DS-2 page 56) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Harryfan011

Thank you for this beautiful prologue... Your storyline is something which I could actually see happening in the shop itself...

While I hate to see the anguish on the faces of our lovebirds, but I also realise the fact that the only way that I see their relationship growing only when Ishwari will stop intervening in their life...

And, I don't see that happening, with them all sharing the same living space.

As far as your writing style is concerned, it is good enough that it doesn't hamper the readers from enjoying or understanding the plot... But, there is something absolutely beautiful about a well written story, that can't be described in mere simple words...

While I love the plot, I feel that a little more work could be done in the writing... It is good but it could be wonderful with a bit of polishing..

Will eagerly wait for the next update...

Till next time,

Harryfan011.

Originally posted by: Jade0001

When I saw the title I thought another chapter updated

but I like that you've put it into both POV

glad that they going to spend the day together

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Tremors

Yeah!!!😵 i will upload tomorrow!!

Originally posted by: sowiee

Very interesting start pls continue ...

Update fast...