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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter- 12.
Thank-you for a long update...
So Dev is keeping an eye on Sona as well as Kaushal... Mr. Possessive Dixit...
Sona really is holding back hard..
I was having tears when Sona was self talking in the balcony..

So now Dev wants to replace Natasha with Sona...
He lies to Natasha...

Good progress Mr. Dixit...
Then how will the tables turn...

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Posted: 8 years ago
U should be a script writer u know?!!
U write very filmy story!!Everyone loves it..
Ritwick's surprise entry..superb
Dev's feeling after watching Sona-Ritwicks photo..perfectly fine!
I wish..Sona also had some beautiful n strong dialogues in the confession seen..
But overall nice parts..n awesome FF!!
Keep writing..Lots of Love..
:) :)
And sorry for reading too late!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter-13.
So their trip lead Kaushal to b arrested...
Thank God he is out now...
Aur kya tareeka chuna hai...
Jo seedha Dev k dil par lage...
Hatts off to u gal ...

And this hit the right nerve of Dev Dixit...
Aur ye kya bina bole hi chale gaye janab...
Koi nahi he will make up...
To Sona happily back...

Bose family the best family...
Aah... Aasha Maa...
Asusual sensing the best way...
Aur hamari Sona ka blush...

Chalo now m running to read their dinner at Bose home...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter -14.
Loved the paper shock...
Loved when Sona was crying her heart out..
See her friends n siblings r her support...
They gave her strength too...
Aasha Maa u always rock...
Tina n Riya supporting was surprise for Us ...

Loved her confidence with which she went...
Loved her to the point talk too...

Now I have not read the next chapter still...
I would have killed U if I had to wait to read the next chapter for a weekend...
Hopefully n luckily m late n so will not have to wait...
So here m jumping to read the next...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Awww... Deeps di... Loved ur ff... And also the confession... Simple yet beautiful...

I loved it really... Kushal is really a haggard and phir se aya hai sona ko pareshan karne... And ritwick is also soo good.. Aisa dost hona chahiye...

Dev ka pyaar ritwick ko dekhke toot gya... Par thank god driver ne ghar pohucha dia... And phir dev ka confession was... Awww... Loved it... Really... Sona got all she wanted...

Thr passionate kiss was also too good... Thank u fr fulfilling this...

I wll also miss this update... Want an epilogue also di... Pls...

Jaldi update kariyo... Cant wait fr thr marriage...


Thank yoAnu!
Oh, thank god. I was worried about the confession.

Yes, Update coming up after I finish replying!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cscs

Mishti, I want to kill you and hug at the same time for both the updates. The moment i read Kushal's name 😡, i was feeling like to comment even before reading the update. But second update managed everything. It was beautiful just like Devakshi. Thank God Ritwick clarified everything, vrna Dev babau toh ulte pav laut jaate.

I liked their confession, it was direct and simple. Looking forward to the last chapters and i hope you will come up with something else after this.


hahaha😆
Such confusing emotions!😆😆
Yes, I will come up with a new one. Don't worry!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharica

Oh Mishti, you scared me...Pehle Kushal ki entry and then Dev ki MU..OMG...😲

Thank god double update diya, nahi to kitna wait karna padta, aur soch soch ke humari halat kharab ho jaati ki kahin Dev vapas to nahi chala gaya😆

Beautiful confession dear...loved it.❤️

All's well that ends well...😊. Finally Devakshi❤️
So 2 more chapters to go...waiting..


hahaha😆
Scare karna toh meri aadat ho gayi hai!
isiliye toh eksaath kiya!
Thank you Di. I'm glad you liked the confession!
Yes! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Damn this Khushal again comes after Sonakshi he is really obsessed
thanks to Ritwick that finally he was stopped at the right time
and polices took him away yes now Dev has to make sure he gets send to maximum security 😆
Dev seeing the photo of Ritwick and Sonakshi thinks that he has lost her to Ritwick and now he feels its his punishment
but wow I was so glad when he decided to go into the house and Ritwick explains him that Sonakshi is his childhood friend she is like his sister its only Dev that she wants and he tells Dev to go into the room and see her
the confession was simple yet it held love and its more important about the people been in love confessing then making special arrangements that can always come later


Thank you Shaun.
I'm glad you liked the confession.
Yeah, special arrangements can come later!
Thank you for liking the chapters!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vinoguna

Just one word...

PERFECT!


Thank you so Much dear!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

OMG!!!😳

it was amazing👏
aur chinta mat karo confession scene bahut achcha tha😊
aur pehla update padh kar main to dar hi gayi😕
mujhe laga ki tumne to cliffhanger de diya
but thank god u continued👏
and thanks for the pm
and update soon


Thank you Soumya!
🤗
Mujhey shanti mili yeh sunkeye!😆
No problem!😃
Yes, update coming up.😉

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