Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed) - Page 80

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cancerian87

Wow mishti thank u for both updates😳

It was really awesome 👏


Thank you so much Bisma Di for liking it! ❤️
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Wow Mishti kya surprise tha as I was expecting its gonna b Dev at the door but it was kushal but it's ok uska chapter Bhi to close krna tha.
Loved their confession n that kiss was much needed. 😛
Ab jaldi jaldi next two updates Bhi de dena.
Plz try to give both at the same time.
I knw m greedy but u knw the reason. 😉
Thank u 😊


Thank you Sneha Di!🤗

Haan DI.

Both of them will be up at the same time only!😉

You're welcome! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaz16

beautiful update... thrilling as well as romantic...
Maza aa gaya padhkar...
n proposal.. simple n sweet... Very nice !!!!


Thank you so much Sneha!
❤️
I'm glad you liked it!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Standing Ovation lady !! Beautifully written 👏 ⭐️


Thank you so much Ashwathy Di!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raji91

Oh Mishti...

res
beautiful update


Thank you so much Raji!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Diii
..
.so so so ..
Sorryyy...bohot Late comment karrahi hun...
but kya Karun...bhul jati hun Comment karna...so Sorry...
and regarding this FF... ap isko itni jaldi kese khayam karsakti ho...aur agar app isko khatam karogi...mujhe asap ek naya ff chaye... ;)
so Sariii muskile khatam...Bechara Dev tutaya tha...thank god...cvs ki tarah app Bhi unique ho...Jo Dev ko akhri Barr Sona ko Dekne keliye bheja ;) ..now all clear... waiting for next part...


Arey no problem Mona!
Haan haan, naya FF milega ji!😆😆
Thank you!😆😆
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Hi Mishti...

So here I am with my comments ka ocean...

First comes first...
A big big big big sorry for being late...
Almost at the tym when the end of this FF is nearing...
So accept my apologies plz...

Now coming to the part-1
I loved how they meet, react, describe n feel stupid...

"Hey Bhagwaan" we
think, "koi itna mesmerizing kaise ho sakta hai?"

I was clearly able to visualize DevAkshi from Ur description...

See how U come up with wanting Dev's look... with Dev's description aur bill fada Sona k naam pe...

Aisa Dev aapko aur mujhe chahiye bhy...
Chalo let me end this here...

Oops Thank-you bolna bhool gai...
So Thank-you a lot n lot...

Areyyy!
Aap aa gayi finally!
Yaay!
Haan, humein bhi aisa hi Dev chahiye!😆😆
You're welcome Di!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Part -2.

So after morning doze here fate is all set to bump them...

"Kya karti rehti hai Sona. Matha Kharap tomar. Uss Dev ko dekhtey dekhtey time hi bhul gayi"

This sounds an usual statement for us...
If U know what I mean...

I loved how Sona thought to pass on her work to Elena n she took it as Sona allowed...

U r giving perfect bump to them n Us...
Asusual Dev's description was awsum...
I m in love this FF...
Right from the first...

U r taking it simple n clear ...
Yet the best...

Haan, I know exactly what you mean!😆
Thank youuu DI! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Part -3.

I loved Ur description of the way they were feeling n still keeping their expression n words in the situation...
Oh... So Sona ne neend udani shuru kar di hai...
Aur to aur ek almost sleepless night k baad office mein 15 mins k baad Mam ki entry...

Fir to Dev babu gone...
To b stolen from his coffee by a pretty lady...
N giving him he new position from The Dev Dixit C.E.O to Dev the chaprasi...
Oops... maine to agle part ki comment shuri kar di...
Kya karu... padh liya tha na... to sath hi bak liya...

haan shuru kar di!😆
hahahah😆
Kuch nahin hota.
Aap jaise chahey comment karo!
Pasand aya toh hi bohot hai! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Character sketch-

Agar nahi bhi diya hota to pata chal jata..
Hamare unique show k characters bhi to unique hai na...
But I loved all the to the point characters...
Including Kaushal n Ritwick...

Thank you DI! ❤️

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