Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed) - Page 79

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Chapter 17

Oh no...yeh toh kushal hai...

Main na ab issey sach mein maar dalungi...

Thank God...Ritwik saved her...

Aur yeh kya?? Dev thinks he lost her??

Next update abhi padhti hun...

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Chapter 18

Wow...finally Dev realised that Ritwik is only her friend...

Aur confession bhi ho gaya...

Yipee!!

Waiting eagerly for the next part...

Aur haan...iss FF ke baad epilogue bhi chahiye...

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sona43

Nice Di and so romantic

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

Mishti sachiii bolu to i wanted to kill u when I read first part... 😡

But in second part I want to hug u 🤗

Simple and cute confession I liked it 😳

Tm suspense queen ho yaar... 😆

But but i'm sad ki soon dis awsum ff will end 😭 can't u extend it plzzz 😒

Thanks for Pm 😳

Waitingggfor next part so post soon dear n if u can't extend it den come soon with next ff 😊

Ye lo do do update ek saath krne k lye 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

I ❤️ u 😉 😛 😊 😆

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

I Swear! I'm Going To Kill You For Separating DevAkshi! :'( ! Nooo! Yaaar! I Loved The Update And You're An Awsm Writer But Nooo! :(

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

I ... I Just Have No Words. This Chapter Was ... FANTASTICALLY FABULOUSLY AWSM! I Can't Express My Feelings Through Words! I Have To Say That This Is The Best Chapter Of This FF And My Favourite Chapter! When Dev ... Umm .. Kissed Sonakshi ... I Felt Goosebumps Form On My Arms! That Moment Was Bliss! Ahhh! I Felt So Happy Imagining It Lol! Haha! This Chapter Was Outstanding Yaaar! Kaise Bataau!!!!!!!!???? How Should I Describe It! And ... How Dare You!? Kaise Boldiya Ki In 2 Parts You're Gonna Finish It Off Man! Nooo! If You'll then I'll Not Talk To Youuu! Understood! 😡

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

It's already 9:13 p.m isliye no bakwaas today...coz Epi is gonna start in a while...isliye jaldi se mera comment lelo...ok?!😆😆

Haa!

Toh When I first read the word Kushal in chap 17...I smiled wryly!😉😉...

Mazaa aa gya twist pad ke...I was covinced till this chap got posted ki It'll be Dev only...par aapne toh kamaal kar diya!👏👏...

Aur phir Ritwick came in there at the 11th hour was totally unexpected...and den Dev asking for a pic from Prakash...aur pic dekhkar sad ho jaana...all made me to sit on the edge of my seat!⭐️⭐️

Finally Dev teasing sona...and confessing abt his feeling to her by keeping her hand on his chest!...was just out of the world😳😳...reminding me of Sona's dream seq!😉

The way he caressed her hair...ahh!!...loved imagining it!😉

The lip-lock was a pure bliss!😳😃

I expected dis and u did it!...and their ILU exchanges were cherry on the cake!😳

U conformed to my expectations...and U made me travel thru Devakshi Dreamland!❤️❤️

Thanku 4 such a treat and a big bear hug 4 u!

🤗🤗

It's 9:23!

I'm going!!😉

Tata byee!!😆😆

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Finally I read 6 chapters

All are amazing

Loved them so much

I hope DEV will surely protect sona from that kushal

Will read further chapters later

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Okay Okay, please don't be angry Mishti Di!!!

Be sweet like your pet name...

First of all updates were WOW, Just WOW!!!!

👏

Reply toh 13th chapter se karna chahti thi but leave it...I didn't get time to reply briefly which I wanted to do!!

But Okay talking about overall first of all I hated thhe thing that Kushal had tortured Sona so much & now in the party...But then Dev saved her & the part I loved was Dev getting too much attracted too Sonakshi...😉

Ritwik is really sweet friend & happy to know RiRi story started as parallel i.e. Riya is also such sweet that she deserves best & Ritwik is one...😊

Then here in many chapters friendship is defined by Elena, Ritwik, Riya, Tina who stand by Sonakshi in 14, 15 or 16th chapters... The way Natasha also understood Dev's feelings for Sona & her dad's intensions were like true understanding friend that Dev got one😊... Haan, I'm happy Nat-Dev ki shaadi nahi huyi...😆

Phir the parts of Sona Dev confrontation at office before shaadi was also good one where Dev's inner turmoil was shown beautifully, how he loves her but is willing to let go, even in chapter 18 at first to Ritwik he was doing same that meant he loves her too deeply to set her free & not tie in chains...😳

Yes so coming to the part 17 & 18, pehle gussa aaya jab kushal ka naam suna & I was glad Ritwik came in time waise I just liked that Ritwik came but would have loved it if our hero would have come i.e our Dev!!!

Part 18 helped me cool down & Thank God!!! Thank Goodness!!! Holy God!!!! & what not ki at last inn dono duffers ne apna pyaar qubula! Warna I thought ki it would have taken lifetime or even in next janam to express their love...😆

It was awww moment when Dev healed to her wounds at neck & those dried tears, So beautiful moment... Even Sonakshi seemed dumfounded but she at last replied positively to him...😳

They shared a moment & I'm in love with that part... So revealed that Dev loved Sona from starting, Love at first sight...Wah Wah Deepshika Ji, apne Dev ko toh chupa rustam nikala? Kyu?😉

Anyways Ab I'm ANGRY on this Vishay/topic that...

"HOW CAN YOU END THIS FF"

Nahhiii!!!! Aisa Nahi Ho Sakta!!!!!! Keh Do Yeh Jhoot Hai!!!!!!!!!

Nahi Mishti main tumhare pair padhti hoon please don't end this FF...

Yaar you know what I'm in love with this FF!!!!

Accha fine agar tumne mind bana liya hai toh thike khatam kardo iss FF ko, Ye le lo knife aur khatam kardo...

But please Season 2 la do...

As I am deeply in LOVE with this FF...

Agar aisa nahi hua toh main...main muh phoola ke baith jaoungi!!!!😡

I Don't want to spam your thread😆😆 But I would just like to say I enjoyed this Ride very much of small moments that many small momnets have formed in bonding with this FF,you & me...😃

This whole was...

thrilling,

action packed,

romantic,

sensuous,

humorous,

mind blowing,

best of best,

beautiful,

& God dammit Freaking

Awesome like always...

It was all Wow!!!🥱

Your OS turned out to be FF really got to be best & loved by everyone...

I would just love you if you brought Season 2, please think about it!!!!!😳

Love,

Anushka

P.S. Kuch zyaada bada ho gaya kya? Koi nahi out of love likh diya for exclusively you Di!

Maine aisa same bada sa reply Aditi ko bhi diya tha uske FF ke liye, but jo maine bola uske bare main sochna, Haan Di???

I want you answer, take your time😃

Originally posted by: moni160282

Hey mishti aaj tujhe ek bada as hug dene ka mann kar raha hain . I loved the confession part. Awesome update.👏