Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#751

Diii
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.so so so ..
Sorryyy...bohot Late comment karrahi hun...
but kya Karun...bhul jati hun Comment karna...so Sorry...
and regarding this FF... ap isko itni jaldi kese khayam karsakti ho...aur agar app isko khatam karogi...mujhe asap ek naya ff chaye... ;)
so Sariii muskile khatam...Bechara Dev tutaya tha...thank god...cvs ki tarah app Bhi unique ho...Jo Dev ko akhri Barr Sona ko Dekne keliye bheja ;) ..now all clear... waiting for next part...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#752

Hi Mishti...

So here I am with my comments ka ocean...

First comes first...

A big big big big sorry for being late...

Almost at the tym when the end of this FF is nearing...

So accept my apologies plz...

Now coming to the part-1

I loved how they meet, react, describe n feel stupid...

"Hey Bhagwaan" we

think, "koi itna mesmerizing kaise ho sakta hai?"

I was clearly able to visualize DevAkshi from Ur description...

See how U come up with wanting Dev's look... with Dev's description aur bill fada Sona k naam pe...

Aisa Dev aapko aur mujhe chahiye bhy...

Chalo let me end this here...

Oops Thank-you bolna bhool gai...

So Thank-you a lot n lot...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#753

Part -2.

So after morning doze here fate is all set to bump them...

"Kya karti rehti hai Sona. Matha Kharap tomar. Uss Dev ko dekhtey dekhtey time hi bhul gayi"

This sounds an usual statement for us...

If U know what I mean...

I loved how Sona thought to pass on her work to Elena n she took it as Sona allowed...

U r giving perfect bump to them n Us...

Asusual Dev's description was awsum...

I m in love this FF...

Right from the first...

U r taking it simple n clear ...

Yet the best...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#754

Part -3.

I loved Ur description of the way they were feeling n still keeping their expression n words in the situation...

Oh... So Sona ne neend udani shuru kar di hai...

Aur to aur ek almost sleepless night k baad office mein 15 mins k baad Mam ki entry...

Fir to Dev babu gone...

To b stolen from his coffee by a pretty lady...

N giving him he new position from The Dev Dixit C.E.O to Dev the chaprasi...

Oops... maine to agle part ki comment shuri kar di...

Kya karu... padh liya tha na... to sath hi bak liya...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#755

Part-4.

So here too Sona had struggled with sleep...

All thanks to both of them...

I loved her self scold... as we most of us carry same habit...

Then her new job excitement...

Here comes the queen all set ready to meet her new boss...

Whose coffee she owned n was enjoying..

Only to spoil his new boss shirt...

Chalo isme aata nahi coffee aayi...

N her reaction OMG...

Loved this part as well my Mishti...

Edited by Chandniyati - 8 years ago

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#756

Character sketch-

Agar nahi bhi diya hota to pata chal jata..

Hamare unique show k characters bhi to unique hai na...

But I loved all the to the point characters...

Including Kaushal n Ritwick...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#757

Chapter-5.

Wow... the unexpectedone...

Dev is gifted coffee stain by his own new employee, by his own coffee in his own cabin...

I wonder how he must have been felt...

N that too after thinking so much abt the same girl who had made a straight forward business man to a confused n restless man...

Ye hamare Dev Babu bhi na...

Jante hue bhi jaan buch kar puchte hai...

Ye banda nahi sudhrenga...

I loved how he understood broke the silence by handling Sona the file.

Awww... Sona so much work by Dev...

Itna kaam pehle hi din kon deta hai...

Par nahi ye to hame multi name Dixit hai na..

Rude, Obhodro, pagal, deewana, aur ab to The Dev Das Dixit ...

Bada lamba comment ho gaya...

Let me end...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#758

Chapter-6.

Oh... so now Kaushal has come to bring both close...

I cud visualize Sona trying to avoid Kaushal n his presence...

Loved that lift scene too... who also cud have kept so subtle other than U...

So now she is feeling safe under the presence of Dev...

Aah... she is being thankful to dev mentally...

N Dev how best n awww of him to sense her discomfort...

He is truly the Best in the world...

Thanks dear Ur giving quick long updates...

U love us sooo mucchhh...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#759

Chapter- 7.

So he saw Sona running with tears...

N was restless to see her with tears...

So he caught her at her own house...

Aahaaa... Sona if U can effect him in his own office infact hhis own private cabin, then why can't he try at Ur home...

So then he was full onn in his teasing mode...

I m loving the way U r expressing his smirks n smile... which r visualized by me n a treat from U...

I loved the way they both were self talking n keeping in check...

U have gifted Us the best way of sorry from Sona to Dev...

Girl U rocking n hum shocking...

N her excitement gave happy feeling feel to us...

Oohh boom...

Came Ur Natasha twist...

N in the position Sona saw them is really painful...

Yaar sula diya...

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#760

Oops the chap 7 reply went a quiet too long for my rant I forgot to mention the billion dollar sentence by U which hit the core of my heart ...

"Dr. Bose jo baat kisiko rulayein who choti toh nahin ho sakti.

Claps... claps... claps... claps... claps...

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