Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

#621

Wow...it was Amazing update dear...Brilliant writing

Now i m addicted to dis story...plz update soon

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CreativeAish

@CreativeAish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#622

Hey Mishti!!

Kya filmy update likha hai..Hero aata hai..Villain ko maarta hai..aur heroine ko bachata hai!!

Ab bas hero heroine ek kab hote hai woh dekhna hai!! ;) :)

Achchha update thaa..But bahut hi predictable thaa!!

Ab aage kya hoga??Expected ya unexpected..eager to read it..

U r amazing writer and sweet person I must say!! :)

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coolmeet

@coolmeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#623

So kushal is a psycho.Will he come back in Devakshi'life or he's gone.
Looking forward for the next chapter.

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shri123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#624

waiting for update eagerly. 😊

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#625

Wow awesome story

Loved every partvof it

Do pm me for next updates also

Totally loving it

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: .kashishbano.
Yayyy.I am the first.
Res my comment again for all the missing chapters.

Okay Adi!

Waiting for it!😃

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Phir se phir se phir se cliffhanger... And dis chap was nt long... It was short... Ahahahah... Not fair.. Waise ek haddi tali.. Kushal... Vry glad he gt arrested...
Bt... Dev natasha... Pls.. Pls... Jaldi iss natasha ko htao... Aur nhi... Aab toh dev bhi pyaar karta hai... Bolne wala tha...
Jaldi devakshi ko ek kardo... Pls... Aab aur heart brk nhi..

Jaldi update karo

Hahah😆😆

Tumhey yeh chapter chota laga?😆😆

It's actually as long as the previous one!😆😆

Shaant shaant!

Sab hoga.

Bass shanti rakho!😆 ❤️

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: cscs
Shaadi 😲

Haan Ji!😆😆

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: Sharica
Res

Okay! Waiting!😃

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Amazing part...
I really want to kill this Kushal...
Anyways...I am glad Dev saved her at the right time...
And the best part was Dev was about to confess his love for Sonakshi...
But now this Shaadi...
Pls cont soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank youuu Aditi!🤗

Was he? Who knows?😉

Yes! The Shocking shaadi!😆😆

Okay dear!

No problem!😃