Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: simplesweety1
Loved It! Update Soon! 😊

Thanks Dear

Updated😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Sorry for delay...
Loved reading...
Dev a play boy...
Really ur different story is raising excitements ...
Update asap...

Arre don't be..😳

Thanks a lot😃

yaah he is a playboy...

yaah v different

Updated😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Amazing part!!

Was waiting for your update since a long time...

Lets see, sona ka answer kya hota hai!!

Pls cont soon

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Thanks a lot Aditi🤗

really😳..Actually i m writing this same SS for another forum too so time lag gaya...next time update jaldi karungi😃

hmm even i m thinking ...kya hona chahiye😕

sure😃

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Amazing se bhi amazing update
Next update jaldi se jald
Please please please

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka
I'm Loving this Story now...
Let's see how Dev's fantasies takes turn in form of Love...😉
Dev have to understand her emotionally and it would be done by our very Sona...
Intresting parts, Continue Soon...😊
Thanks for the PM.
I loved Vicky here in start, how he tried to reason out Sona's innocence, Bas yahi par accha tha warna show main agar hume aisa mil jaye toh Bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukr!!!!😆
Next part jaldi update karo please...

Love,
Anushka

P.S. One song which always comes into my mind reading the title of the story and the plot also is Crazy In Love by Beyonc from FSOG that I hum while reading, it suits very much to all chapters and Dev's character of what he is implying, U know!!!!!

Thank you so much Anushka🤗

This story is v different from other stories...

Dev is a playboy ..he don't understand Love

My pleasure😃

ab story mein achha bhi koi chahiye tha toh maine Vicky ko hi achha bana diya😛

ek hi villain iss story mein kaafi hai😆...

sure ...abki baar jaldi update karoongi

from fifty shades...😉 😆 Dev jaisa serial mein hai yahan total opp.hai

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Dr Neelima Menon

@neelima_menon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Wah !!! Tats a lovely part !!

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

amazing
plz update soon
thanks for pm

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Oh god this dev looks devilish and dangerous...hope he doesn't hurt sona with his flirtous nature...waiting to see how this wild fellow turns into a gentleman due to the effect of Sona's love...update soon diii