Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: binuuu

interesting story...
looking forward...
waiting to know what dev is going to do..
thanks for pm :)


thanks a bunch😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: neelima_menon

Awesome!!!!! Loved it :)


Thanks a lot dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update!!
Please Cont soon
Waiting eagerly...
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Thanks Aditi😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Let's see till where will Dev lead too
Update soon

even i dont noe...any thing is possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved It! Update Soon! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Sorry for delay...
Loved reading...
Dev a play boy...
Really ur different story is raising excitements ...
Update asap...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Being Crazy In Love

Sweet Fight

CH-3





Ishwari Niwas

Dev entered his room, Vicky followed him.

"So, U met Sonakshi?" Vicky asked ...he knew about Dev's next prey...

"Hmmm..." shaking his head in yes

"Dev, I expect you won't do anything which would harm our family's and Neha's reputation. Leave that girl. Forget her...U can have many then why her only." Vicky tried to comprehend Dev.

"Bro, I don't care, its jus about f***ing ...that wouldn't be so wrong of me to do so...I just need to satisfy my burning hunger... it's not going to be a raw deal, I know she won't have any problem in that...all girls like to be in man's custody" he argued...he was in no mood to back out.

Dev was well aware of his good looks, which could lead women dropping their panties just at the sight of him...He was the creature of the dark.

It wasn't like Dev didn't had any feeling for others...he was emotional when it comes to his near ones...but he was impassive towards women...

He used to pretend that he was loving and giving, when in front of a girl and treated each girl as they should be treated, like they were unique...but deep down he hated this gender

"Dev why don't u understand, stop behaving like a pigheaded...grow up...all five fingers are not alike...I know her, she is different...," Vicky was saving Sonakshi's innocence

"You are telling me like you have never done all this with any girl " Dev asked raising his eye brows

"Yess...but I'm not a play boy...bhai how can u ruin her life ,she is Neha's relative...will you marry her?"

"WTH...it doesn't mean I will have to marry her"

"Move on Dev, you are still hanging in your past...stop behaving like a chauvinist"

"You are saying this because it dint happened with you... no way...Vicky, it's decided...no more discussions...I am tired nw...plz go"

Girls wanted to sleep with him and Dev never disappoints them too ...he satisfies himself and the girl too...For Dev, girls were like toys, he plays with them and their emotions and throw them out... without hurting any ...He was the master of this game...

But Sonakshi was not like any other girl...

Bose House

Sonakshi was studying in her room...she was studying or trying to study...she had her head in the clouds...may be dreaming

She was loving her dreams...she was loving that beast in her dreams

Why am I thinking of that b*****d...why am I not able to curse him... I am thinking of doing all that bullsh** with him...fine, he was really good looking but his intentions were not good...stop thinking about him Sona...don't be crazy...

It's ok to fantasize about a handsome man, haan...nothing more than that...I can't fall in love with any stranger...there's no space in my heart for a stranger...

How incredible Dev was at pleasing and alluring a woman's attention and mind, he proved himself once again...

Suddenly, she heard the doorbell...she was all alone in the house, so, she went to the audio door phone...

"Hello...who's this," Sonakshi picked up the phone and asked

"Neha," she got the answer from the other end

She went downstairs and opened the door

"Hi Neha bhabhi,"Sonakshi welcomed her...

Dev was also with Neha...it was Dev's plan to meet Sonakshi again...

Ahh.. thinking of the devil and devil is here...am I still dreaming...what is he doing with Neha bhabhi. Sonakshi narrowed her eye brows...her smile vanished on seeing Dev.

Sona welcomed them and both sat on the L shaped sofa in the living room...

"Sona, he is my brother Dev," Neha cleared her confusion...hain...bhai... Sonakshi gave a faint smile...

So,Dev is the younger brother of Neha bhabhi. where was he at bhai bhabhi's wedding?..she was at sixes and seven...ohh yes Eli di told me about Neha bhabhi's brother...haan haan...okkk...he's that famous seducer ... who don't believe in love...

Sonakshi looked him through her glasses...he was a tall man, was wearing a check gingham shirt, a well fitted dark blue jeans and non-sneaker shoes...irresistible...

No no..now I should rubbish all my thoughts about Dev...I don't want to regret for it later.

"What happen to you, why are you so silent today...," Neha asked

"Nothiiing bhabh...bhabhi...not well," Sonakshi stammered and gave an excuse, whereas the actual reason was Dev... haah...

"Sona...where is chachi," Neha asked for Asha

"maa is not at home, gone to market...main coffee banati hun...," it was becoming difficult for her to stand in front of Dev...

"Don't be so formal Sona, tum baitho, I will prepare coffee," Neha commanded...and went inside the kitchen...leaving Dev and Sonakshi

There was a thick moment of silence in the living room now...which was killing her...

"Hi Sonakshi," Sonakshi was chewing raisins when a deep husky voice reached her ears and she swallowed those raisins at once in panic...she felt herself being trapped again...she stood up

...Dev also stood up and went near Sonakshi.."uummm...missed me...like the surprise...I can't see a beautiful girl having sleepless nights because of me... that's why I am here...just for you "Dev said passionately in her ears... his lips touching her earlobes..."won't you show me ur house ,the lawn ,ur room where u sleep" Sonakshi frowned ,she wondered about his savage ,ferocious side .

...She looked into his light brown eyes in astonishment..."Don't look at me like this, I know you have the most expressive eyes and so as mine," ... his piercing gaze send sensations in her body. The intensity of his gaze wen he looked Sonakshi was indescribable...this man is dark deadly devil

"Coffee is ready," Neha interrupted ...all three sat down...Sonakshi controlled her ragged breath.

"Achha Sona ,tomorrow is Ganpati poojan at my maa's place and you all have to come ," Neha told the purpose of their visit...

"Sure bhabhi...I will convey this to maa baba,"

After some time Neha and Dev went away.

I must have to control myself and my thoughts...I can't hurt maa baba...YES...I won't let this happen again...no one can touch me without my permission

The next day, Sonakshi went to the college instead of going to Dev's house for the poojan...she was about to cross the road, when the same manly fragrance reached her nostrils...she saw Dev standing just next to her...Oh no...wat's he doing here...why is he stalking me...

"DDe...," Dev put his finger on her lips ... her voice got trapped in her throat...

Sonakshi gathered some confidence and pushed away Dev's finger

"What are you doing here...why are you following me...tell me your real intentions," Sonakshi tried to hit Dev with her questions...

"as if u don't you know, I am missing you like hell , Sonakshi..." she was shocked at his audacity...

"Plz Dev , don't use such cheap words, I know what exactly guys like you want from a girl...I am not like others ,"Sonakshi bluntly said

"why ,if you can think about me in your dreams then why can't u be with me...,"Sonakshi fumbled on hearing him

"Why would I think of you...now let me go"

...how could he let this opportunity go in vain

"Is your skin as soft as your lips... ,"he continued looking closely at her rose pink lips

Now...i can't take this anymore...

"...btw, is your skin as rough as your thumb," Sonakshi backfired...

"Why don't you find it yourself by touching me" Dev gave Sonakshi an indirect open invitation

"U will have to undress yourself ...," Sona said without hesitation .Dev was puzzled...he had never seen such a gutsy girl ever before

"If you have no problem then why should I...would love to in front of u," Dev said cheekily

"Baby...you are the host, not me," Sonakshi was crushing Dev's ego with each word...

"why don't you study me at night," Dev said in a seductive tone...he tried

"Oh...I can't ...I have to study my books at night,' Sonakshi said and shut Dev's mouth

Find another way Dev ...Sonakshi is different...she is not a grape...

"U like raisin...,"

Not again...cheap Jack

"How about date...'s

"Try something new, its common now,"

"K...then why waste time in dating, let's do it," Dev finally said it...he was losing patience...

"...mind your tongue...or I will cut it with knife," Sonakshi smacked him back

"You can do many unexpected wild things with my tongue apart from cutting," Dev said calmly...

"Look Dev, u r Neha bhabhi's brother...better behave,"

...nobody can say he is Ishwari aunty's son...

"k...let's be friends...fine," Dev lost his grip over his Casanova attitude... he surrendered

"You are a stranger,"

"am I still a stranger, come on...just friends that's it...even I would like to have a friend like you...I mean an out spoken friend...who have rejected Dev Dixit,"

"Hmmm..,"

She look beautiful and serene, but she is not innocent...a smart girl...not an easy target

...a little tigress

Sonakshi don't challenge me...you are only increasing my thirst

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing part!!
Was waiting for your update since a long time...
Lets see, sona ka answer kya hota hai!!
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
I'm Loving this Story now...
Let's see how Dev's fantasies takes turn in form of Love...😉
Dev have to understand her emotionally and it would be done by our very Sona...
Intresting parts, Continue Soon...😊
Thanks for the PM.
I loved Vicky here in start, how he tried to reason out Sona's innocence, Bas yahi par accha tha warna show main agar hume aisa mil jaye toh Bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukr!!!!😆
Next part jaldi update karo please...

Love,
Anushka

P.S. One song which always comes into my mind reading the title of the story and the plot also is Crazy In Love by Beyonc from FSOG that I hum while reading, it suits very much to all chapters and Dev's character of what he is implying, U know!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Loved It! Update Soon! 😊


thanks a lot dear😃
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