OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25

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Rishani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

That was beautiful Suvika!

Thank you so much for writing this OS...loved reading it! :)

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Hey suvi,
I literally teared up reading all tgs believe me...I want this to happen in d show...cv's if u r reading ths here's smthng u gt to watch out for...so happy with the way the story shaped up for ths dev and this sona...thanks for ur pm dear. ...and once again...loved ur update...do write more

Thank you. I wanted something like this to happen too. At least something along these lines where Dev thinks and acts. Where his character evolves into a man from a son.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: tia.o
OMG... You literally wrote the world's most romantic proposal. I wish I was watching this on screen. Dev is seeing what Neha, Nikki and Riya always saw and knew. And he is taking time to understand that Sona will have a difficult time with his mom so trying to be her biggest strength. Incredible!!! CVs should read this story to see how REAL heroes should be like...

Thank you 🤗 but frankly, I can't take the credit for the proposal. During one of the numerous conversations with Divya, she'd said, if he comes and asks her father permission to marry her, in front of her, for me, that would be the most romantic proposal.

I built from that. Or maybe I should say I tried to show her that. Although Sona's flying hug was all mine. I wanted that hug. 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: LiveLife321
Felt content after reading Sujatha. Pls dont end it yaar. 😊

I am so glad Lata.😃. but if I extend it more, it would turn into FF - I am not sure I have energy to handle that or the time to invest. I had to put my novel writing on hold to write this OS because I can write only one thing at a time.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Loved it !! 👏⭐️ especially the last part ...wonderful proposal
Can we get an epilogue for this one ??😳...

Thank you. 😃 ❤️

An epilogue for this OS.🤔 What would I even write in that?? 😕

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rose4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: Suvika.

@ red... finally... someone noticed the romantic moments!!! I thought they got lost in Ishwari's issues... much like in the show.

Oops I was so happy to read about a mature Dev that I completely forgot to add how much I loved the romance between them

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: gmgi

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Oh Suvi it was really beautiful. Poor fans, see what the CV's have done. We cannot appreciate romance and intimacy even when it is dancing naked in front of us😆. But seeing Dev standing up for his Sona and taking steps to make sure that Sona will have his support through out I felt so happy and unburdened that this slip my mind when I wrote my comment. May be I will just reveal that I have read that part more than few times just to make it up to you.☺️

Arre don't laugh Geena.. I was waiting for someone to notice that scene.. 😆 especially because it wasn't easy for me to write. I have absolutely no issues writing intimate scenes. After all, I can't call myself a writer in romantic fiction if I shy away from hot scenes but this was tough because I had to make sure I was seeing Dev and Sona, the characters and NOT Shaheer and Erica.

And now that you've revealed that you've read it more than a few times, I am

Edited by Suvika. - 8 years ago

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: srilotus
hey this is such a beautiful story
can i expect 3-4 chaps more?
plz continue
plz pm me

Thank you.😃

But this was the last part ma'am 😳

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: rose4ever

Oops I was so happy to read about a mature Dev that I completely forgot to add how much I loved the romance between them

Understandable. It was a long update too, right? Too many things and it was a small scene. But I so wanted to show love, laughter and passion between them.

Edited by Suvika. - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Oh you could have doubled the length and I would have still loved it😆 I am an avid reader so length is never an issue for me unless its too short😆 You totally succeeded in showing all of the above and with perfect balance, all the necessary issues addressed at the appropriate time
I am telling you again, mail this OS to the writers, they'll at least understand what the viewers want.

Edited by rose4ever - 8 years ago

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