OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25 - Page 26

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Tears are words that need to b written...you hv gently picked up each tear Sona n Dev had shed...moulded it by ur thoughts...result this beautiful update...gradual yet beautiful clearing of vision...layer by layer...rebuilding of trust...only u can bring that sense of satisfaction ...something so believable.

Equal credit goes to Divya as I typed some of the dialogues while we were discussing - word to word.

It was so important for Dev n Sona to talk n clear up d mess .Lingering, bottled-up anger never reveals the 'true colors' of an individual. It, on the contrary, becomes all mixed up, rotten, confused, forms a highly combustible, chemical compound then explodes as something foreign.

The talk was the first most beautiful part of this update.

Thank you. Bottling up always messes up things. Not just between a couple. Talk is required for any and every relationship. The best way to keep things uncomplicated and simple.

Love knows no limit to its endurance, no end to its trust, no fading of its hope; it can outlast anything. Love still stands when all else has fallen. Dev n Sona feeling at peace, however fragilely, made it easy to slip into the visionary end of the dark-sight. The rose shadows said that they loved the sun, but that they also loved the dark, where their roots grew through the lightless mystery of the trust again... outstanding expression , got me totally choked.

Awww

For any parent , love for a child, it seems to me, must include a desire for his maturity and ultimately his independence. Watching a personality unfold is perhaps the deepest pleasure of parenthood.

So true.

But Ishwari seems to operate under the illusion that if she can just get Dev to act according to her wishes , they will be a perfect family.

Tell me about it!!

As for Dev it was much harder to handle the sense that he have to live up to the mark someone else had set for him. The grades became too important, the competition too frantic, the fear of disappointing his mom became an overwhelming nightmare. This is exactly wat happened to Dev. The successful entrepreneur who cud make business dealings in d blink of an eye without questioning his ability failed to stand up for his love...merely due to the fact that a deal... success or failure his mother was there to stand by him , support him , embrace him n so he also believed that she wud accept Sona but the fateful nyt where he saw his mother fight for life n death made him question his own decision abt Sona

The fact remains he was torn b/w love for ma n love for Sona...only d burden of his mothers womb outweighed Sona's love.

Yes and I can't blame him. As my hubby said, it's tough. Mother's love has been with him for 28 years. It was not a battle at all. There was no choice for him.

Now that's what I call a perfect closure to d loops we are witnessing in d show. A heartfelt thank you for maintaining d sanctity of d characters n giving us such beautiful updates.

For your beautiful words Deepali.

Originally posted by: Mohi99

Awww this is what shud happn on show... R cv s reading suvika s OS?????... I wanna scream... Lol... Superb... Please pm me ur next.. I cant wait

Originally posted by: mona5524

it is written so beautifully. I can't stop myself from reading it again and again. u portrayed every emotions every word so beautifully. I just so much loved it. plz update soon I can't wait...

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Excellent chapter

I really liked the talk at the coffee shop indeed it was needed for both of them Bijouy also giving Sona Dev's letter that was just great the encouragement that he gives his daughter is fruitful.

Dev and Sona finally reunites and the emotions that just flooded between them was truly beautiful.

As always I enjoy and wait for your updates every emotion is so well depicted by you

Thanks for updating dear friend

Originally posted by: rose4ever

Suvika👏Before I start, a big hug for you🤗🤗Can you please, please go and give this to the writers of the show?

🤗 What's the point now?? These two are already going to get married in the show. Too late😆

This was so beautifulI loved the awkwardness, the hesitation between them.That is so natural after everything that happened.

Yes. That was the first thing I thought. They would be awkward. It would take time for them to break that silence.

The coffee shop convothis is what Dev should have done.A heartfelt, bare it all conversation.I loved the rain scene as well, Dev so caring, then that hug by Sonakshi, that shock and disbelief that Dev felt when she hugs him and ultimately that relief, that happiness , that love where he just couldn't believe this is happening and peppers her with kisses. Yes, that's the way you do it.when you get your cherished love back. Loved it all so much.It feels so good to read this.Waiting, waiting, waiting for the next part. Hurry up😃

Will try it post it over the weekend. If not, then Monday.

Ooh and you trimmed his hair🤣.

😆 kya kare... he is not doing it in the show so I MADE him to do it in my OS.

Originally posted by: Lovely_KaranIka

This was just beyond PERFECTION!!!! I actually don't have words to describe how much I loved it! ❤️ you're SO good , & your writings are amazing 👏 eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: tia.o

Suvika, I seriously hoped I was watching this on screen. There are so much SINCERE emotions in your writing that it's more vivid for me than what's going on screen. After so much water under the bridge where in one scene Sona is claiming that Dev has no personality, how could she jump into his arms in next scene?

I think they rushed the patch-up scene.

As you rightly portrayed, when two people go through so much hurt, anger and problems and then come together, there's a little awkwardness to come back together again which is now both of their responsibility to slowly mend and come back stronger as they did in your FF. That's why, this is the only FF I read.

Truly honoured and glad that you are taking time out to read this story of mine.

Great job. Waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

On a serious note this chapter deserves a special review... and before you ask me for one here it is.

And it's been so so long since I got to read one of your reviews. I know we talk and talk and talk and burn WhatsApp too but still.. the pleasure of reading your analysis gives me a special high. You even pushed back your lunch to get this one out so double thank you.

"You know me very well, don't you?"

"I thought I did."

This was required.. The ruefulness of the situation, the trust is gone from both their sides. He left her, she was ready to. The hesitant start to their relationship.. 👏

Yup. Reminded me of my Destiny's Play. He told her to go and she went - there too, of course for a different reason.

"Yeah. I have forwarded the details to my HR guys. They'll take care of everything." Sona nodded and left it at that. "Sonakshi?"

Glad there was only a mention of the professional relationship. No detailing required here.

🤔 Wonder who told me not to get into these details

One hurdle and you dropped my hand like a hot potato. Like a useless piece of furniture."

This is what Sona is asking, we are all asking. How did he just drop her in a split second break up with her?

"It had to be done that way or I would never have been able to do it. You were right when you said, yeh sirf aapka pyaar nahi hain. But it had to be done that way. In your medical language, like a band-aid being ripped out.

You and I have agreed on this and discussed this so many times. The forum was up in arms why Dev broke up this way and we know he is not strong enough to do it any other way.

Poor guy yaar. And that scene.. I was watching and feeling for both of them. She, unaware, blissfully stating - where would I be, but beside you.. the more she talked, the harder it got for him until he snapped and broke

Maybe because of the different cultures. Maybe because of the food habits.

So clueless as to why Mom didn't like... Are we going to see that awareness coming soon?

I don't know. You tell me. 😆

But that night I realized she would rather end her life than live with my choice."

The line from Dev's Letter's OS sneaked its way back I see.

"But my mother was on her deathbed. To grab her and get her back, I needed both my hands and in that process I had to let go of your hand. I traded off my heart for her life.

Dev did what he did as his mom was on the deathbed. I always wondered when people questioned why is he not fighting for his love. He can fight his mom if she is also fighting with him. To fight he needs an opponent. But the minute his mother gave up her wishes, her thoughts, her life who does he fight and how? Seeing a parent on the death bed... its no time for choices and I see that you got Sona to see that and agree to it.

I think this dialogue is the best. Absolutely LOVED it.

"You'd said, humaara break up hochuka hain Mr Dixit. Aap jab chaahe aise call nahi karsakte. That...that was when it hit me. That was when it hit me what break up actually is going to entail.

You mentioned this then... as soon as you saw the episode that now it hit him what a break up means. The guy who broke up with Sona was Ishwari's son... but it broke Dev Dixit instead.

And I can't forget the way he broke down. Normally a guy crying buckets puts me off BIG time but it was tough NOT to feel Dev's pain.

Who was I fooling? I cannot live without you. So I became that horrid stalker you'd accused me of being.

Dev is now not going to promise anything. He is going to let his actions speak... When he fell in love he spoke of the stars the sun and moon.. and he now realizes that he cannot simply talk. Even during the proposal he didn't promise her anything. This entire conversation he didn't promise her anything. In that sense this line is significant as it states his condition. "I cannot live without you" The only line to indicate his current situation. Simple and straight.

And I think he is going to watch his words from now on. He has learnt his lesson.

All I can ask is to believe me. Say you trust me."

Finally why you started writing the OS in the first place. Like I said love was never a question between the two. When Sona said to him I don't believe you. It hit Dev harder than anything else. All he wants is for Sona to believe him and trust him and if he has that he can face anything.

I loved Sona didn't agree right away. The day she ran out of her engagement she kind of lost that right. So conferring with her family before saying anything makes sense.

Logic and sense.. we can't let go of either, can we?? 😆

I am glad for 2 things here. He did not tell her Bijoy agreed. He didn't try to emotionally pressurize her. Like the day of the proposal he said what he needed to say and took a step back.. In response Sona asked to be hugged.. Here also we shall see Sona's response in a simple hug ( The next day though) but that will convey everything.

The transition through the various incidents... why they were all required, how they tied up to the story this para is the best example of that. She must have also noticed him take a step back so she is not impacted professionally when he didn't initially come to her presentation.. I am guessing she did, you just forgot to mention it here.

Yes. I forgot.

Bijoy came back and gave her Dev's letter.

Finally the letter... it has reached the person it was intended for. Strange it's intended purpose was to severe all ties and yet here the letter was instrumental in strengthening the bond between Dev and Sona..

Kudos!!

Yeah. I wanted her to read that letter. Somehow. Someway.

The entire accident incident was drafted to ensure Bijoy sees this. Sees Dev as a savvy businessman. Not just as a loser, a mumma's boy, a drunkard. To see the Man Sona fell in love with, to remind Sona of the man she fell in love with... So glad Bijoy's concerns were addressed.

Finally no emotional blackmail here either... No "You have to agree." .. Complete choice... Do what you want and we support you in the decision to be or not to be with Dev... Bijoy understands it is for Sona to trust him again not for them as parents to force her.

Bijoy has learnt his lesson too. He had tried to push his wishes onto her before and look how that turned out. I am not blaming him of course... just saying that he wouldn't do it again.

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"In this rain? Are you kidding? Message me his number. I'll talk to him and then come and pick you up. You stay put until I get there, you hear me?"

Haq hai mera... that's how he is going to be. She doesn't say a yes.. But she spoke to him and he will always be protective of her.

Yup.

Kharapa na, Bijoy thought to himself with a smile. Not bad. "Are you sure?" he asked, nevertheless.

Touchdown... Bijoy has completely accepted Dev here.

When a rough exclamation, he dragged her back into his arms. "Never again Sona. Never again." He pulled back, cupped her face, scattering kisses all over her face. Forehead, eyes, cheeks, chin, lips. "Never Sona," he repeated with every desperate kiss. "Never again," he asserted.

CVs... yeh hota hai passion... yeh...

I want to run to them , huddle with them and say... aww... I love you three...

You should've told me.. I would have added that too. Divya, watching them from afar goes running and they share a group hug. 🤣

Fresh out of shower, clean shaved, hair-trimmed and neatly brushed, every inch the savvy entrepreneur ready to start his day and take on the world.

Extra credit for this!!

My fingers had been itching to write that since I started typing part one. 😆

Ishwari stood there, stunned, staring at her son's departing figure. Sonakshi's house? Without having the breakfast cooked by your maa?

Lets deal with her in the next part . Me not saying anything here.

Good girl 😆

Asha smiled and stepped aside in welcome. "Please come inside. Sona is upstairs in her room. This way," she gestured him towards the stairs. She smiled affectionately.

Yes.. lets get him to call them Maa and Baba... The comfort level is already there.. she is letting a guy in her daughter's room...

Sabr. Sabr.

Shedding the last of his hesitancy, he grinned back at Asha and took the stairs that would take him to his Sona's room.

"Good morning my Jungli Billi!" he greeted.

Ms. Khargosh ab Jungli Billi ban chuki hai!! Super Duper Update...

Don't you dare expect me to write such reviews for each OS that you write.. It was tough writing this review and I can imagine how emotionally draining writing the OS would be and you deserve it... Awesome Job dude... Now you know why I kept saying write this OS!!

Of course O Wise One!!

Lets get the last part out...

Originally posted by: gmgi

Suvi please accept this tight hug from me please.🤗

to you too Geena

Thank you so much for this. This is exactly what we expect them to do. I loved both the coffee convo and the rain convo. The letter finally with Sona and helping her with making up her mind, Bijoy supporting her😃. Dev was never bad at heart only the circumstances were. They deserve each other. No one would have loved them the way they did . Her asking him to never let her go and him saying never again raining kisses all over her face This was so beautiful Suvi. Ishwari and her issues for another day. But today this made my day. Waiting for the last part🤗

I had initially stopped at that point, you know... Ishwari, stunned, staring after her son. But something made me ping Divya on WhatsApp and ask - what is the stopping point. Her reply - Jungli Billi. One should smile at the end of the update. So I extended that scene.

Thank you Divya for your wonderful review and also for pestering her to write and update this OS.🤗

Why are you thanking her?? She is already on my head pestering. Now you say something like this and she will not let me sleep until I type. 😆 (Just kidding)