Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 21

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

arrey teri chod chand mujhe laga thi ki main khud ki laga lungi

idhar udhar ki batein karke

lekin shukar hai ki aisa kuch nahi hai

tab to comment karte raho meri har comment par

afterall we support MISSION PINK

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Hii ginni yes I'm gayatri

Yeh baat to sahi hai ki humein besharam banane waale khud devakshi hai
Warna yahaan aane se pehle to him aise bilkul na the[/QUOTE

Yahan aane ke baad to bahot GM ho gaye hain hum sab...Devakshi fever. Main to sochti hu ki jab KRPKAB khatam hoga to hum sab Devakshi ko and ek dusre ko kitna miss karenge...sochke hi😭 aata hain..

I have never been attached to any characters before or any show for that matter...

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

🤣

Khud ki..🤣

Hum idhar udhar ki baatein kahan karte hai..

Hum to apne DEVAKSHI ki hi karte hai...😉

Karenge karenge...

Comment to quote quote kar k karenge...😆

Mission pink full on...😆

Originally posted by: Sharica

Dekho mera manna hai ki aaj mein jiyo
Kal ki sochke aaj kyun kharab karna
Lets live our moment with devakshi to the fullest

Chapter Six

(Chapter Five was purely flashback for a mere understanding of the exact position all characters in this story were at, this chapter is a continuation to Chapter Four where Bojoy and Ansh had returned from their stroll in the park.)

Dev straightened himself as Bijoy entered the house followed by Ansh... as soon as Ansh entered the scene and spotted Dev sitting on the sofa he rushed to him and climbed up on his lap with his tiny feet and exclaimed, "Baba, I missed you, aapko pata hai maine aapko kitna miss kiya, mumma to meri baat bilkul nahi maanti aur mere saath khelti bhi nahi hai, aap wapas ghar pe kab aaoge baba?", Dev was far off from listening to little Ansh's complains... he was busy admiring his little bundle of joy who was the only link between him and his upset would-be father-in-law.

He was snapped out of his thoughts as Ansh was patting his face rigorously waiting for an answer, "baba sorry hai beta, baba ko na delhi mein bohot jaroori kaam tha, isiliye apne champ se dur aana pada, par ab baba ka kaam khatam ho gaya hai to ab baba Ansh aur mumma sab wapas ghar jayenge, okies?", an excited Ansh jumped up in joy... getting down from Dev's lap he ran upto his mother to tell her the little secret his baba had just told him...Sona couldn't help but look up at Dev fondly as she cuddled Ansh to herself..."pata hai mumma ab Ansh ke saath baba bohot saare games khelenge, ab Ansh bore nahi hoga aur apna saara homework bhi time par poora karega, hai na mumma?"... an over-joyed Ansh questioned his ever -so-strict mumma...on the other side Bijoy was his grumpy self as ever..."haan beta ab aapke baba ko games khelne ke alawa kuch aur kahan aata hai, itne saalaon se woh yahi to kar rahe hai aapki mumma ke saath"...one side where Ansh couldn't make a head and tail about what his dadu was trying to convey to him, Dev and Sona exchanged a glance to each other as if ensuring each other that one fine day everything will be back to normal.

Dev got up from the sofa and walked up to Sona...he carried Ansh in his arms and took him off to the bedroom to take part in his childhood fantasies...something he had missed in his entire life...he wanted to relive his childhood through Ansh...and he was glad God had given him this chance in a unique way, before leaving he did signal Sona to join them as soon as possible.

Sona couldn't help but reprimand Bijoy about his hatred towards Dev
"baba aap humesha Dev se aise do tuk baat kyun karte hai?woh aapse itna pyaar karte hai aapki itni respect karte hai par phir bhi aap unse aise katekate se rehte hai, accha lagta hai kya?Ansh ke saamne humesha unhe sunate rehte hai, agar mere yah saurav dada ke saamne aapko koi kuch ke de to humein kitna bura lagega, thik waise hi abhi Ansh ko kuch samajh nahi aata par jab woh cheezein samajhne lagega tab use aapka yeh behavior pasand nahi ayega"...

"Sona beta kaise maaf kar du use, uski wajah se tujhe kitni baatein sunni padi hai yeh sirf main jaanta hoon, logo ne kitne taane diye hai tujhe, iss insaan ne teri tay ki hui shaadi rok di aur upar se khud bhi tujhse shaadi nahi kii", a father who had bottled up his emotions for all these years finally spoke up..."baba yeh baat aap bhi jaante hai ki iss sab mein meri marji bhi shamil thi, yeh sab unhone meri marji se hi kiya hai, aur unka bas chalta to woh mujhse kabka shaadi kar lete, par hum dono majboor hai meri wajah se aur yeh baat aap jaante ho", Sona hopelessly tried to put her point across once more as she had been doing for all these years.

irked with the fact that his daughter didn't require to give it two shots before siding Dev against her own father , an annoyed Bijoy got up to head home...despite Sona pleading to him to stay back for dinner he chose not to budge off his decision...finally giving up Sona decided to see off her father...getting back to her own world she entered the bedroom to see her son sleeping peacefully while Dev was patting his head lovingly, rocking him off to sleep.

As Sona entered the room, Dev straightened up from his posture and held Sona's palm...kissing it gently he inquired about Bijoy only to be told that he had left already yet again after a heated argument with his daughter...an upset Sona sat down on the bed next to Dev, appearing all gloomy, thinking about the showdown she just had with her father...while Dev wondered what could he do to lighten her mood...when suddenly a thought ran across his mind.

"Sona woh main soch raha tha ki aaj Ansh ko bagal waale kamre mein sula dete hain...bohot din ho gaye hain...", Sona's eyes shot up at Dev as he left his sentence midway, a naughty grin adorning his face, his eyes glistening mischeiviously...Sona looked down immediately as she understood the meaning behind his incomplete sentence...freeing her hand form his she picked up a sleeping Ansh and like an obedient student decided to follow Dev, who was off late getting a notch higher romantic with each passing day.

When she returned back to their room she was amazed at the arrangements Dev had made from whatever little stuff was available at home at that moment...the romantic ambience of the room was definitely a turn on for her...the room was dimly lit, with scented candles lit up all around the place; the mesmerizing music that played in the background made her feel urged to sway to the beats along with Dev...as if taking a que from her mind, Dev who had by now taken out his blazer, extended his hand towards her for a dance...as she slid her hand through his, he pulled her into him as they swayed to the slow, romantic music playing in the background...

After dancing for a while they sat down to have their dinner which Dev had set up in the room itself...as Dev poured champagne into the glasses, Sona starred at him a bit reluctant...only to be assured by Dev that Ansh was in deep slumber and would not bother to get up till they finish their unfinished business they had started a while ago in the living room when Ansh was away with his dadu.

Sona was too shy to meet his eyes, while he was all the while busy in admiring the beauty he had in his arms at the moment...initiating was always his job and so he did it today...turning her face towards him he lightly kissed her on her lips...the champagne was really having its effect on them as they peeled off each other's layers while keeping the kiss intact...breaking the kiss Dev carried Sona picked her up and carried her towards the bed...the next hour or so was spent in letting each other know the amount of love they had for each other in their hearts...Sona always felt on top of the world when Dev made love to her...all the soreness and tiredness would fade away with the simple fact that at the end of the session she lay bare and contented in the arms of the man who would leave everything in this world to be with her.

As they snuggled around each other under the sheets, her thoughts drifted back to the day they had made love for the very first time...when she was not sure if this step they intended to take was right or not...and he was almost certain that they belonged only to each other and nobody in this world could do them apart against their wishes...

(ok that's it for this part, had not planned to write any passionate stuff in this story of mine but eventually have come to a point where I guess I'll have to break my resolution...so the next part is suppose to be about the first time these two love birds made out in their phase of living in...but depends on the readers if they want me to write a passionate update or continue in the same way as I have done so far with this story of mine... )

Originally posted by: Tremors

absolutely amazing!! loved every peice of it!! or iss mein puchne wali konsi baat hai!! passion toh ek inevitable part hai usse skip mat kro!! enywys jo bhi aapko flow mein theek lage woh kr dena!!

btw HAPPY NEW YEAR!! n thnx fr this lovely update

Originally posted by: M.soni

Yar thats not fair...atne dino bad itto sa part kaun likhta hai😭

Wo bhi atne sharifon wala romance dala.hai.😭gandi ho bilkul ...bhut gandi.😆...

But as alwaysss itss sooo awsomee...i was waiting for ur update and here it comes...lovely one...👏but i dont like bijoy in ur story.he is so mean😡episodes me toh wese hi ab mujhe bijo gone case lagta hai...forward kar deti hun direct bijoy ko😡...😆

And this time no coloured comment...sorry yar 😆...mobile se colouring and all karna bada mushikal lagta hai yar...is colourless comment se hi kaam chalao is bar.😆

And about ahhhmmm ahmmm part...plzzz have a pity on us yar...kuch hoti hoti likho plz...bhagwan tera bhala karega😛😆