Passionate Devakshi Series - Office Romance Part 2 Page 55 29.01.17 - Page 4

guys all ur responses are overwhelming...jus had a minor doubt in mind...is it ok if in my next update I go a little overboard with my fiction, if it is a little bit 18+...can I push up my imagination levels and imagine Devakshi not just kissing but doing many more things to fulfill their desires...pls do let me know...

Originally posted by: shri123

romantic, passionate, loved it.

Now how will sona take her revenge. and it should be in his office. pl. update.

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

guys all ur responses are overwhelming...jus had a minor doubt in mind...is it ok if in my next update I go a little overboard with my fiction, if it is a little bit 18+...can I push up my imagination levels and imagine Devakshi not just kissing but doing many more things to fulfill their desires...pls do let me know...

go ahead,make ur imagination run as much as it can

Awesome👏 soo hot & romantic...

Too hot to handle
Very beautifully written

Story-2

When Revenge Gives Pleasure

Part - I

It was 7 o'clock in the morning. The sun rays creping through the window disturbed the handsome hunk sleeping peacefully, still loitering in his dreamland. Sudden ringing of his phone woke him up with a jerk, it was Bunty who was struggling with his sherwani, which was a little misfit for him, and what a bad luck he realizes this at the threshold of his wedding. He was desperately searching for Dev when someone told him that he has still not arrived at the venue. All worked up he called Dev to find out where had Mr. Punctual got caught up so as to not reach the venue on time. Little did he know that his best friend had lived one of his fantasies yesterday night and was still in his fantasy world covered under the duvet on his king sized bed. Dev woke up to a tensed Bunty shouting his lungs out on the other side of the call.

Bunty : Abe yaar hai kahan tu? Traffic mein attak gaya hai kya, abe subah subah konsa Delhi mein kaunsi aisi bhid lag gayi hai ki hamare sahabzade ko pahunchne mein itni der lag rahi hai?

Dev(sleepily) : Bunty yaar chillana band kar...kaan ke parde phat jayenge mere...abhi itni acchi neend se jaga hoon, itna accha sapna dekh raha tha, aur tune sara mood kharab kar diya...

Bunty (astonished): kya? Tu abhi so ke utha hai?arrey mere sheikh mohammad uth jaa...aake dekh yahan mera kya haal hai...shaadi aaj hai aur mere kapde mujhe fit nahi aa rahi hai...jaldi yahan aaja ...tere dost ki ijjat ka sawaal hai...

Dev (rubbing his eyes): accha ab tension mat le, BP badh jayega tera, ruk aa raha hoon, aadhe ghante mein pahunchta hoon, thand rakh paani pi le main aake sab thik kar doonga...

Saying so Dev got down from his bed and went to the bathroom to freshen up. Half an hour later as promised Dev arrived at Bunty's place, called up the tailor who quickly got the sherwani fitting done for Bunty. Dev then proceeded to look after few other last minute preparations...

Soon time passed by, it was evening and guests started arriving for the wedding. Dev was so engrossed in his work that he had completely forgotten that Sona had still not arrived at the venue. He was instructing the caterers when his phone beeped...it was Sona's call...he was amazed at first coz what he had done to her last night, he expected her to be very angry with him, but she seemed to be in a completely different mood...only if he knew he should be all set to face the consequences of his past nights behavior...

Sona : hello baby!!!!!mujhe pick up karne aa rahe ho na jaanu? main kabse ready hokar baithi hoon ...aur kitna wait karaoge...
She said all this so seductively that Dev was confused whether he was actually talking to SOna or there was some cross connection by mistake...he gathered courage and tried to confirm if it was truly his Sona...

Dev : Sona are you ok dear? Kal raat thik se soyi nahin kya?kahin tumhe elina ne pila to nahi di?

Sona : not at all honey!!!na maine pi rakhi hai, aur na hi main aadhi neend se jaagi hoon...ab jiska boyfriend itna hot ho uske emotions kab tak kaabu mein rahenge jaan...ab aur wait mat karana mujhe...jaldi se pick karne pohuncho...I'm waiting...

The last line was said in such a seductive way that Dev would be actually thrown off his seat...he quickly made a dash to Sona's place...here Sona kept the phone down and laughed her heart out at her antics...she was giving Dev a tough time already and he still had a long way to go...Mr. Aubhudro got to know his GF can go a step ahead of him as far as fantasizing is concerned...Its payback time for Mr. Dixit now...she had a special plan up her sleeve to tease him till he pleads for mercy now...

Dev reached Sona's place to see her dressed in a simple salwar suit as opposed to the saree that she had purchased specially for this wedding. Dev remembered how she had rejected almost 99 sarees that the shopkeeper had showed her and finally settled down on the 100^th one, much to Dev's and shopkeeper's relief. How relieved Dev was when finally he got out of the saree shop, escaping the deathly glares of the salesman who was fed up with Sona's process of saree selection. God these ladies he had thought...kaha se hota hai itna patience...hum mard to pehli yah dusri dikhayi hui shirt utha lele hain...

Dev : yeh kya pehna hai tumne, tumne toh kuch aur pehenne ka plan banaya tha na?
he asked confusingly...

Sona : haan saree to maine carry ki hai apne saath, wahan jaakar change kar loongi...abhi pohni to kharab ho jayegi na...isiliye...
she replied trying hard to hide her naughty smirk...

Dev was about to start the car when he noticed Sona had not yet fastened the seat belt, he looked at her and signaled her, to which she showed him her bandaged right hand.

Dev : yeh tumhare haath ko kya hua? Kal to thik tha...

Sona : woh actually main kitchen mein kuch kaam kar rahi thi, to haat kat gaya...bahut takleef ho rahi hai haath use karne mein...seat belt tum hi laga do na please baby!!!!!

Dev was seriously feeling uncomfortable with her addressing him as baby!!!!what's wrong with her?he thought... Discarding his thoughts he leaned forward to fasten her seat belt only to have his adreline racing...she was wearing a very deep cut kurti, he realized it too late...her cleavage was exposed completely from the angle he was looking at her...she had purposely pinned the dupatta only on one side of her shoulder as if inviting him to see her half exposed bosom...the good boy character in him was forcing him to turn his eyes of the sight that he was being shown...but the bad boy character that he had developed just two days back...which had him fantasizing about Sona in all the possible ways, wanted to see more of her...he just wished the world would stop there...that he could just tear off the kurti from her body...strip her down of every piece of clothing that covered her body...and make her his there and then itself, even if it would mean making love to her in the car...

Here Dev was lost in his own world , totally unaware that Sona was enjoying the sight infront of her...she exactly knew what were the thoughts going on in Dev's mind...and this is exactly what she had planned...to tease him till death...just like he had left her wanting for more of him the previous night...she decided to get him out of his reverie...

Sona : kya hua Dev, seat belt attak gayi hai kya?itni der kyun lag rahi hai tumhe belt khinchne mein?
saying so she shifted a bit in her seat exposing a little more of her bosom, much to Dev's discomfort...

Dev finally managed to fix the seatbelt and started the car, ignoring all the quirky thoughts that were coming to his mind...he tried to concentrate on his driving...failing miserably...certain visuals creating havoc in his mind...
Finally they reached the venue, Dev felt his tension release a bit as he was surrounded by many guests her unlike how a few minutes he was caged in his own car along with his tigress, all alone, pleading for her mercy...little did Dev knew that this was just the beginning of his torment...he had lot more tortures to bear from his Ms Khargosh.

As soon as they reached the venue, Sona insisted that she has to change, so left to find a vacant room...indicating Dev that she might require his help in any sorts as she has an injured hand...Dev was already super ventilating...now what was she upto... his thoughts were soon broken as he received a phone call from Sona insisting that he should immediately come to her help, as she was facing a lot of difficulty to change...with a thumping heart Dev left to help her...

Precap : (Dev had never imagined he would have to help Sona to tie her saree...his fingers were trembling with every contact that he made with Sona's milky smooth skin while doing so...Sona on the other hand was also on verge of losing her self control...here she had planned to torture Dev and here she was getting tortured herself...but now there was no backing out...guess she had gone too further in her mission...unknowingly...)

Planning to make next part a little 18+ do let me know if its ok wid all of you'll or else will have to change the plot

That was awesome...!!👏

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

Planning to make next part a little 18+ do let me know if its ok wid all of you'll or else will have to change the plot

First of all your writing skill is amazing...
I am wondering that our forum has an infinite number of writers with a great writing skills..actually it's overwhelming for us..
Now to ur story ..it was awesome...u described the state of Devakshi very beautifully n passionately really it suits with ur title.. Nd if you are planning to proceed it with 18+ then I don't think anybody would mind..so plz go ahead dear..
After mahaepisode everyone is excited here...hope show me b kuch Aisa Dekhne ko mile.. .
But u don't let us wait for long plzz...
Waiting for ur next part update eagerly...