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It ended so quick.. I was smiling like a maniac reading this.Sona on a teasing mode where she herself would be going weak. Though she has given the always good boy Dev quite a tough time. Lots more to come😆So excited for the next updatePls update very soon.I'd be busy from tomm. Onwards, so if you can pls update itBy the night maybe😛Ni toh pm meGo on ...write what you feel like darlingNo matter if it is an 18+Don't change your plot, just write what you want to
First of all your writing skill is amazing...
I am wondering that our forum has an infinite number of writers with a great writing skills..actually it's overwhelming for us..
Now to ur story ..it was awesome...u described the state of Devakshi very beautifully n passionately really it suits with ur title.. Nd if you are planning to proceed it with 18+ then I don't think anybody would mind..so plz go ahead dear..
After mahaepisode everyone is excited here...hope show me b kuch Aisa Dekhne ko mile.. .
But u don't let us wait for long plzz...
Waiting for ur next part update eagerly...
(Note : this part is a little 18+ so if u r not comfy with it please don't go ahead...updating superfast on my gutter mind association partner "_RS_")
Story-2
When Revenge Gives Pleasure
Part - II
Dev tried to get through to Nikki, but his kiddo sister would never pick up the phone whenever it was needed the most, "foolish girl" he thought. After several failed attempts to get any sort of help for Sona to drape her saree he finally gave in..
Dev : ab aur koi chance nahin hai Dev, yeh kaam ab tujhe hi karna hoga. Hey bhagwaan bachalena...tu jaanta hai na ki main kitna sanskaari baccha hoon...aise kuch na ho jaye mujhse ki baad mein sharam se doob marne ka man kare...please rakhsha karna bhagwaan...
all of a sudden he had started to pray a lot to the same God whom he denied to even believe all his life...on saying his mental prayer he finally left for Sona's room.
He slowly creaked into the room, dim lights adorned every corner of the room, he closed the door quickly behind him so as to avoid any embarrassment of anyone finding out that he was here to help his fiance dress up... he turned around after locking the door behind him to look out for Sona...and the sight that waited for him was enough for him to lose his senses, go numb to any feeling, he had never-ever in his wildest dreams thought or for that matter even imagined to see this sight so early in his life...
There Sona stood wearing her deep cut almost backless, perfectly fitting blouse, with the half-done saree tucked loosely in her petticoat, asking him to come forward fast and help her drape it. A lump formed in his throat...beads of sweat trickled down his temple...his mouth was dry...he invariably opened the top button of his shirt to grab some air...his breath was getting heavy and brain was getting clogged...he failed to understand how all of a sudden he was feeling so hot in a fully air-conditioned room...yes he was suppose to get married to her in a few months time...yes he had a pleasurable encounter with her the previous night, where he had kissed her like a maniac, bit her lips mercilessly, even left his love marks on her waist, not even thinking what will be her look out on this, whether she'll be ok with this or not...but at the moment the truth was that he was nervous...damn nervous...
With slow & clumsy steps he started moving closer to Sona, every part of him wishing that this should be a bad dream for him...ofcourse he knew only he had the right to see his Sona like this, to touch her all over, but this was certainly not the right time or place for it to happen...his best friend was getting married in some time at this very venue, he had a lot of arrangements to be looked after, everyone downstairs was waiting for his orders to carry on their duties, and here he was, mesmerized and lost to look at this half dressed, gorgeous damsel of his, whom the world knew as his fiance. What should he be doing at this moment, a lot of thoughts came to his mind...should he just escape giving her the silliest reason in the world...lest no...what would the poor thing do, with nobody coming to her aid... he still had no courage to go through this, hence started to avoid the situation in the best possible way and fetch some help for her anyhow. He gathered courage and spoke,
Dev : hmmm...Sona who actually, baat yeh hai, ki mujhe saadi pehnana nahi aata, aur tumhari itni khubsurat saree ko agar kisine complement nahin kiya just because who tumne thik se pehni hai to mujhe bohut bura lagega, to main ek kaam karta hoon kisi lady ko lekar aata hun, who tumhari help kar dengi, thik hai?
He was about to make a dash out of the room when he heard Sona' voice behind him,
Sona : ahaan ...baby, kya tum mujhe aise halat mein chod kar chale jaoge?bas itna hi hai tumhara pyaar, tumne ek baar bhi nahin socha ki maine saree sirf aadhi adhoori bandhi hai, aur yeh kamra koi mera akela ka nahin hai ki main yahan aise hi baith jaaon aaram se. socho ki tumhar bahar jaate hi koi agar yahaan aa gaya kuch dhoondte hue, socho agar who koi mard ho to main kya karungi aise mein...
He stopped in his tracks, he didn't realize if it was Sona addressing him as baby, or her delicious voice, or the truth in her words which forced him to change his decision of going out of the room and turn behind with a determination to help her. Sona on the other hand was enjoying seeing him in this state, she was sure that he had tried to avoid helping her just because he was sure of losing his self control by being so close to her. With whatever courage he had in his body he moved close to Sona, took the end of the saree she was holding in her hand and tried to drape it around her, with she instructing him how to go about it. With every instruction of hers she made sure to make deliberate touches on his shoulders or nape, arousing his anxiety even more; she didn't even realize that she herself was feeling all hot & flushed. His fingers were trembling with every contact that he made with Sona's milky smooth skin ...Sona on the other hand was also on verge of losing her self control...here she had planned to torture Dev and here she was getting tortured herself...but now there was no backing out...guess she had gone too further in her mission...unknowingly...
Dev finally managed to plate her saree and tuck it inside her petticoat, while doing so his fingers touched her belly button creating a rush in his as well as her hormones. Plans of revenge were long gone, she was so lost in his touch and proximity, that she didn't even realize that Dev had finished draping her saree long back and was now busy nuzzling at her neck. Her breath fastened as he planted small, wet kisses on her neck and exposed part of shoulder, creating butterflies in her stomach. He slowly moved behind her, moving her hair on one side of her shoulder, untying her blouse dori in the process, placing wild kisses on her back which was exposed and highlighted due to her deep, almost backless blouse. His hands roamed all over her shoulders, right down to her waist and settled on her belly button. His hands tightened around her, forcing her to leave a moan, much to his pleasure. Slowly bending down he lifted her in his arms, like a groom lifts his bride on their wedding night and carried to the king sized bed in the room. He placed her on it gently as if she was a brittle glass sculpture who should be handled with extra care. He came on top of her and started brushing his lips against her, first gently and then roughly. This kissing of theirs was much more wilder then the previous nights encounter, they bit either ones lips, entered each others mouth, where their tongues fought fiercely for domination. Sona tightened her hold around his nape while his hands were freely moving all around her sexy body. He caught hold of her breasts hid under the saree pallu, letting her moan against his mouth. She tried to protest but soon gave in to the immense pleasure she was experiencing. He broke the kissing grasping for breath, with a dangerous glint in his eyes, as if a man on mission. His hands ran across her shoulder and quickly pulled off the unpinned pallu from her heaving bosom. Her chest was moving in a prescribed pattern, her breasts moving towards him and away from him, making him go mad second by second. He trailed his way down from her neck and stopped right above her heaving bosom, within a few seconds like a starving lion set to look for his prey he cupped her breasts and started sucking, kissing and nuzzling them through the cloth that covered them. Sona hands which were roaming in his hair suddenly grabbed his hair in a tight fist, his sucking down there creating havoc for her...her moaning his name made him go a little bit further in his pleasure tour and open up the top two hooks of her blouse, exposing quite an amount of her cleavage to his raw & naked eyes. He dig his nose in between the opening of her blouse, below her bra and started tickling her there. He hands moved ahead to remove the remaining two buttons of her blouse when all of a sudden...his phone started beeping...that was enough to bring him back from his reverie...he got up with a jerk and checked his phone to see who was calling him, his face turned red when he saw his sister's name flashing on his phone, he picked up the phone only to hear out that his family had reached the venue and were looking out for him...he told her that he'll be there soon and cut off the phone...
He looked around the place to realized what had just transpired, he was about to make out, no-no he had almost made out with his fiance at his best friend's wedding venue, in the same room and bed which was suppose to be arranged for Bunty & his wife's first night. He looked down to find Sona still in a disoriented, half naked state and he was the sole reason for it. Couldn't he just have control over his horomones? Did he not realize that he was here to help Sona dressed up and not undress her? He quickly gathered himself and got up from the bed to go and stand at a distance from Sona. Sona was brought out of her reverie by his soft but sharp voice, she too didn't take much time to realize what had just happened between them. Blushing hard & avoiding any sort of eye contact with him, she grabbed her self and ran to the washroom, closing the door tightly behind her. She cursed herself mentally for planning to take revenge from him by seducing him and ending up in such a state with so many people around them. Dressing up quickly she came out of the washroom to find Dev waiting for her. He took no time to realize that her hand was not hurt at all and that all this was done on purpose by her to take a revenge for his previous night's deed, a mischievous smile formed on his face, as realization dawned upon him . He came close to her thus making her heart flutter, behind her ribs. He bent down and whispered in her ear,
Dev : I think we should tell our parents to get us married soon, we roaming together before marriage like this could be dangerous you know...with you every now and then planning about how to get back at me, we could end up doing something mad and wild...
he winked at her making her blush even more...placing a light peck on her lips he pulled her out of the room, to mingle with his friends and family members.
After the wedding they sat down to have food when suddenly Nikki propped a question to Dev,
Nikki : waise bhaiyya, aap aur bhabhi the kahan jab maine aapko call kiya tha?
Sona spit out her food and Dev started mischievously starring at her only to give a reply to Nikki which was sure to scare the daylights out of Sona,
Dev : woh Nikki actually hum dono na ek bahot he serious discussion mein lage hue the, aur discussion ka topic tha ki "CAN REVENGE GIVE YOU PLEASURE" , mera kehna tha ki haan yeh dono cheejein ek saath ho sakti hai par tumhari bhabhi thi ki manne to tayyar hi nahin thi, to kaafi time lag gaya unhe manane mein, ek practical example bhi diya tab jaake maani hai who...kyun baby sahi keh raha hoon na main?
Stressing on the word BABY' he turned and winked at Sona and raising his eyebrows at her as if to ask her if she agrees with him know. Guess he already knew her answer...
That's it for now guys, finished this chapter with lot of difficulty...guess what just realized that reading passionate stuff is easy but writing it down is very difficult...hope I could satisfy all of your high raised hopes with my writing,...see you with a new passionate TS of devakshi lovelife in my series
Lots of love,
Gayu.