Passionate Devakshi Series - Office Romance Part 2 Page 55 29.01.17

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TS One : Don't U Dare Ignore Me
Part 1 Page 1
Part 2 Page 3

TS Two : When Revenge Gives Pleasure

Part 1 Page 5
Part 2 Page 7

TS Three : The Most Happening Weekend

Part 1 Page 16
Part 2 Page 18

TS Four : The Wedding Night
Part 1 Page 23
Part 2 Page 27
Part 3 Page 31
Epilogue Page 35

TS Five : The Office Romance
Part 1 Page 45
Part 2 Page 55


(This series consists of various situations in Devakshi's life where in they give in to their desires and try to be little asanskari together unlike their portrayal in the show. This is the first time that I have attempted to write anything on the forum(all thanks to my craze and craving for passionate Devakshi that we have been not able to see in the show as yet) and expect you guys will support me.)

Story-1

Don't You Dare Ignore Me

Part - I

(This os starts assuming all the differences between Dev & Sonakshi are sorted out, Ishwari although half-heartedly has given a nod to their wedding, Bose family is also all happy for their kids, Devakshi are engaged and now enjoying their courtship period before marriage.)

It was Dev's best friend Bunty's wedding. Bunty had insisted that Dev should be his best man and personally look into all the wedding preparations. Dev had also agreed happily as he owed a lot to Bunty who had helped him during his difficulties when he was not "The Dev Dixit".

All thanks to Dev's juggling between his office n his best friend's wedding preparations, he was getting no time whatsoever to meet his love, his now fiance, Sonakshi. Sonakshi although aware of Dev's busy schedule, used this opportunity fully to tease Dev a bit by pretending to be angry on him for not giving her enough time. She would either not pick up his calls or would tell him off that even she's busy with her work and so doesn't have time to chat with him over the phone.

All this behavior of Sonakshi was in turn building the tension inside Dev, and his want to spend some cozy alone time with his Sona was increasing day by day. Everytime she would ignore him or not attend his calls, he would be thinking of just driving up to her clinic, lock the door of her cabin, drag and pin her to the nearest wall, kiss her insanely...and punish her soundly for troubling him all these days, till she begged to be pardoned, he wanted to bite every nook and corner of her luscious lips, to plunge his tongue deep into her mouth, and then let go of her at a point where she is left wanting for more, her breath heavy, lips sore, face flushed, but still she expecting him to taste her even more...

Dev(in his mind) : Yeh sab tu kya soch raha hai Dev, teri aur Sona ki shaadi nahin hui hai ab tab, aur tere dimaag mein aise saare khayal, kaabu rakh apne emotions par Dev, shaadi se pehle Sona ke bare mein aisa sab sochna sahi nahi hai, agar Sona ko pata chal gaya to kya sochegi who tere bare mein? Yehi ki tu bohot bada despo hai, ki tujshe shaadi tak ka wait nahi ho raha hai.

Dev(in his heart) : Sona bhala aisa kyun sochegi, akhir pyaar karte hai hum ek dusre se, aur saare boyfriend apne girlfriend ko lekar aisi cheezein fantasize to karte hi hai, aur mein to sirf kiss karne ki soch raha hoon, usmein kya galat hai, jab do log pyaar mein hote hai to apna pyaar jatane ke liye kiss to karte hai, aura b to teri sagaai bhi ho chuki hai us se, ab kya problem hai?

Dev was always in two minds when it came to fantasize Sona in a different way, to be precise in a romantic way; he would visit her clinic daily at her close of work, spend time with her in a friendly manner wherein he would tell her all the happenings of the day, take her opinion on his difficulties, and then drop her home and the furthest thing they would do is give each other a hug, although a tight one, but it was never laden with lust. They would chat at nights over the phone, video chat, message each other; but either of them had never gone overboard with expressing their physical needs and desires. They would discussed everything right from the number of children they would have to whether it'll be a boy or girl first, but when reality sinked in they would just try to avoid each other's eye contact.

He still recollected the day when he and Bunty were discussing something about their future partners and Bunty had instantly asked him to tell him about their first kiss. Dev had blushed profusely and thanked all his gods that Sona was not anywhere around to hear this or else he would have to hide himself in the deepest tunnel possible. Everytime his sisters would tease him and Sona whenever she came to their place, about their wedding night, their honeymoon destination, about how they would be busy exploring each other rather than the beautiful locales they would be visiting, he would just find an excuse to move away from that place to a safer zone to avoid watching Sona turning him crimson red with embarrassment.

It was the big day tomorrow, his best friend was getting married the next day, all the preparation were almost done, but still he was feeling incomplete, he wanted something badly, to get a glimpse of her, he decided to call her, but she didn't pick up, igniting his desires even more, he called her hospital and found out that she had night shift today. He decided that he has to visit her clinic and show her how to pay a price for ignoring him. He picked up his car keys and drove to her hospital.

Here Sona was enjoying teasing him and making him impatient for meeting her, but little did she know that she'll have to face Dev's wrath as he has his own sweet ways to punish his lady love.

Precap : (Dev's visit to Sona's clinic...Dev started to move towards Sona slowly but steadily...as the distance between them was decreasing, Sona's heart was thumping more loudly, she tried to say something but had lost her voice somewhere. She had just braced up herself and was trying to say something but realized its too late as Dev had already pressed his lips on her's.)

That's it for the day...will write the next part only if there is a good response...I know I'm nowhere near the brilliant writers we have on our forum but still its an attempt to join the league...Do hit the like button, and drop in a comment to encourage a new found skill in me...

Lots of Love ,

Gayu.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ayee... 😳😳
First of all lots and lots of love to you for writing this
This is something that I badly wanted to read for DevAkshi.
And I really liked how you've written it up
For me good writing isn't just about using jargons and difficult phrases. It is when you are able to depict the emotions of the story in the best way possible.
And if one can imagine in their head whatever you've written then you've succeeded as a writer. That is what I feel.
And I could surely imagine Dev and Sona in this.
So pls come up with the update really really soon. I'm waiting for it.
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Full time green signal for U dear...
Continue asap.


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wow it was beautiful... in-between all these mishappining in show ur TS is stress relieving... plz continue.. Nd update soon...
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You fans are simply crazy!!!!! 😊😊
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Pls update soon...dieing to read something passionate
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It's really nice that u r exploring this angle...waiting to read aage
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Pls.continue...don't stop like our CVS do...correctly when they r abt to kiss 😭
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Continue as soon as possible
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Its really good...😳
Please continue ASAP.😊

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