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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

I really hope Elena is not keeping some secret from Sona but it also seems that both Dev and Elena knows about it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please could you PM me the next time you update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update
thanks for the pm friend
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update..please update next part soon,,,,and PM if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice...I enjoyed reading all 4 parts ...part 4 made it look like reading a mystery novel...so Elina and Dev knows abt it ...is Elina seeing Dev ...or are they related...now I am curious ...please update soon. Kindly send me PM when you post the next part...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wow nice...I enjoyed reading all 4 parts ...part 4 made it look like reading a mystery novel...so Elina and Dev knows abt it ...is Elina seeing Dev ...or are they related...now I am curious ...please update soon. Kindly send me PM when you post the next part...eagerly waiting


hey thanks for liking it so much
will be updating soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbharati

Nice update..please update next part soon,,,,and PM if possible


thanks alot
sure i ll PM 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello all...how have u all been doing ??

I had taken a mini trip of 10-15 days, so I could not update

But hey I m back now..

This FF may look a little confusing now..but as the story progresses things will clear out..so stay tuned!!

PART 5

"what the hell man!!" rohan walked into the classroom mumbling something.."what is a girl doing in the boys washroom??!"

"bad day rohan??" asked shweta

"they dint even let me in man" said rohan "these seniors I tell you.."

That caught sona's attention "rohan what happened?" asked sona

"I opened the door to the bathroom and the next thing I know I m being pushed out by that goon vicky"..."but I dint miss that...I saw her...your bestfriend Elena!"

"what nonsense " said sona

"I m not bullshitting here ok...I saw her..and that tall guy dev..they all were discussing something..i told Vicky u know...no girls are allowed here...he said they needed to talk something important...hello could not u all go out or something...then he just pushed me away...not cool man"

Sona got all the more curious now

What were they all upto ??

She was not sure about asking about this to Elena..if she wanted to share she would have done it already

Sona thought it would be better for Elena herself to come out and explain

She would be mum for now

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It was Elena's birthday

Dev and Sona planned a fab party...they invited half the college...Elena never looked so happy..there were gifts music birthday cake dancing

...elena loved everything

Later in the night all three take a walk outside the camp...

"thanks a lot u both" said Elena "I could have asked for a better party..i had lot of fun...thanks once again"

Sona said "ye to hamara farz tha!!" they all laughed together

Dev said "I m glad u loved it elena...otherwise sona would have killed me...she was so firm on making this day the best day of ur life that she dint realize she was ruining mine..."

Sona started slapping dev ..he ducked away..sona tried again..."stop it u two" said Elena and hugged both of them

All three of them startled when they heard a large screeching sound of a car just round the corner of the road...it came towards them in such a speed that they all freezed...it went by them..just few inches away

Dev screamed "PAGAL HO KYA???!"

Sona thought she saw someone in the car ...someone she knew

Elena said "dev let it be..must be a drunk"

But to sona the driver seemed sober

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NEXT DAY AT COLLEGE


Vicky rushes into the washroom

He washes his hands and face..as if trying to get something off his hands

He was jittery and uneasy all morning

Dev walk in... "hey you alright Vicky?

"ALRIGHT??? U know nothing can be "alright" in my life Dev" snapped Vicky

"look we dint choose this for ourselves" said Dev

"ya I know...I dint...I WAS GIVEN NO CHOICE!!" Vicky screamed

Vicky tries to walk away...but dev blocks his way, "we both dint have any choice vicky...we both dint!! But could u atleast pretent to be normal??"

"what do you think I am doing then ??" said Vicky and walked away

Okaayyy ...hope u enjoyed it..

Sorry for the delay...

Plz do like and comment

Do share ur views

and also i m still working on the title..any suggestions??

Love ya all

Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome👏
Though i dont know what is happening😆 and ya Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well, its mystery all the way...😆
Do cont soon
Thanks for the pm😊

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