OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 5

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Oi dramebaaz. Waise I am the oldest reader. So get in line.

Originally posted by: Jade0001

The title is so apt for this OS , it's true Dev needs Sona for himself

Without her his life is now lifeless before he met her at least then it was all about business but now he has learned there can be colors too in his life .

Yes. And he's learnt to balance his life. Bond with his family. How to navigate his relationships. And now he is adrift in this sea of pain and desolation.

Like this story I do hope Mamaji too will try and let Ishwari know about Dev's pain .

Thou I feel Ishwari will only realize when Dev breaks down in front of her eyes .

Yup. She is not listening to anyone. Not Neha, not mamaji, not Bijoy...

Dev breaking everything in the lounge and dinning room the very things that brought happiness to his mother and all she could do was destroy his happiness.

He won't confront his mother and ask. What will he ask?? What his mother is doing / has done can't be put into words. Not by him. So this is the only way I could think of, to make Ishwari listen and see what her actions are doing to her son.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Dil toot gaya mera Dev ko dekh kar...
If the writers take even a pale imitation of what you wrote, it still would be heart wrenching for the viewers to see Shaheer portraying that broken man.. Buckets and tubs of tears would be flown in those episodes... You have written THAT good...

Thank you Aazeen

But why did you stop it here?

Why did I stop it here?? 🤔 All I wanted to show was Dev breaking under his pain. And Ishwari witnessing it in such a way that she can't deny the truth any more. Uske baad kya hoga... meine socha hi nahi Aazeen. 😕

Didi, you need to write further, I can't keep on hanging there until the writers have mercy on us...
Please for Heaven's sake, do write it further... Atleast another part... And I am not taking your "OS means one shot thing"... This is a very humble request from your younger sister, and you cannot dishearten me... I want the next part...

I have been starving for your writing for the past 8 months, and now I want it... You have to fulfill my request... Please! I beg before you... 😭

Emotional blackmail - thats what this is!! 😡 😆

Originally posted by: mgram505

read it and omg...no words to express...and the fallen dev dixit...his reactions and pain still is in front of my eyes...and ur os...I have read many os...and ur os...is one of the best...and if it's shown in our show...then shaheer ...his expressions and actions...he can do it in a splendid way and he will be the...grt...and very eager to see...the shaheer performance when dev came to know abt her mother in future...and how she broke down in front of her eyes...and also supriya ji also will nail it to core...

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

that was great...ishwari is so so selfish...

Originally posted by: M.soni

Wowowowothats simply awsomeeerre yar..really wish yo see this in show...plz plz plz cvs do read this we want this scenes in show yar..

Originally posted by: mena_k

Awesome!

Can this be somehow passed on to Mamta madam. I want atleast some part like breaking the photo frame to be included in the actual show. It would be an episode to watch I tell ya.

Please do write more. Words can't express enough appreciation to your written os. Simply Brilliant.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Getting her to write this was also not easy. Took a week of convincing I tell you.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

But to tell you the truth Aazeen, I don't want her to write the next part. Let the CVs work on how to get Dev and Sona back together. It will all depend on Rit is positive , negative.

They have taken him to such a low and it is consistent to his character no doubt but I am curious how they get him back.

So Suvika. No part 2. Let the CVs rack their brains here. If we think we are stuck in an endless loop. We can then dish out something.

Editor's Orders !!