DevAkshi TS- Meeting You Again Updated 30/9

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hi all
this is Ritika. its the first time i am writing something on DevAkshi,my other works are on Nibir.
this one is based after breakup, when both meet by luck or by destiny.
scroll down for the first shot.
do like and comment.

part 1 - below
part 2 - LINK
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1

"it was a great experience working with you Mr.Dixit" said Mr. Rana Mukhopadhya shaking hands with Dev.

"pleasure is all mine"

They waited till the board room got empty

"so finally this project is completed, so glad that the investors loved"

"yes it was indeed"

"so Dev what are you planning to do now, I guess you must not have seen much of Mumbai."

"no Rana was busy with work"

"ya I know you Dev we have being working together for nearly 4 months now"

"yes yes"

"so chalo I give you a Mumbai darsan today"

"arrey plz don't take troubles"

"no trouble at all Dev, waise bhi meri cousin sister yaha aa rahi hai, aayi toh hai kissi conference ke liye par mein idhar settled hun so jaldi aa gyi taki mein usse ghuma shaku"

"oh"

"ya toh waise bhi Mumbai darsan toh karwana h hi usse tumhe bhi sath mein karwa lunga chalo"

"ok lets go"

"ok toh phele usse airport se pick up karenge and phir Mumbai darshan"

"who tired nhi hogi"

"nhi who superwomen hai"

In the car

"Dev ek baat batao"

"hmm"

"how old are you"

"29 kyun kya hua"

"nhi abhi tak shadi nhi ki issi liye"

"oh"

"toh bhai kyun nhi ki shadi"

"bas koi mili nhi"

"sachi bol toh aisa rahe ho ki kisi ko pakke bhi kho diya"

"actually haan, thi koi bahut achhi thi par maa ko pasand nhi thi so baat aage nhi badh payi"

"seems uss se bhut pyaar karte the issi liye tum bhi aage nhi baad paye"

"hmm ya shayad phir badhna nhi chahe, koi uss jaisa tha bhi toh nhi"

Dev closed his eyes remembering the good days, the sweet light heated moments he spent with Sonakshi, the girls whom he fell in love with two years back and is still in love with after two years though they are no more together. Dev gave himself fully to work after Sonakshi, he did not for once even looked at anyone else, he became the old Dev dixit, in whose life there are no blues, blacks, and greys. The colours too went from his life with Sonakshi. She was the one had filled it with colour and her departure took all away including a part of him too.

His thoughts were broken when the car halted at the airport. Both Dev and Rana went to the arrival gate waiting for his cousin sister to come. Dev got from his maa, excusing himself he went a little away from Rana to talk. After he hanged, he heard Rana calling him, he turned around to get the biggest shock,

"Dev meet my bubbly sister Sonakshi, and Sonakshi this Dev dixit, we handled a project together." Rana introduced them to each other, not knowing that they already do know each other. While for them, the words had stopped and both were at a loss for words.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shocked, happy would be Dev's reaction...Shocked, angst would be Sona's reaction... I guess. Good start
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing 😊

Please update the next part soon. waiting 😉 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start ritika
Continue soon
mishrialways thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mena_k

amazing 😊

Please update the next part soon. waiting 😉 😃


Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb👏
Can't wait 4 nxt part
Continue SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali3070

Superb👏

Can't wait 4 nxt part
Continue SOON


Thanks

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