Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Erian
Lovely start. Loved the teasing Dev & annoyed Sona. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank u 😃 will update soon!!

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gmgi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Loved the prologue.👏 Why did you stop it there?😡 Please update soon. I was picturing Sharica when I read. I hope your problem with IF is sorted before yr next update. Waiting...😳

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: gmgi
Loved the prologue.👏 Why did you stop it there?😡 Please update soon. I was picturing Sharica when I read. I hope your problem with IF is sorted before yr next update. Waiting...😳

Thank u so much dear!! Hehehee.. sorry! The next chapter is gonna be long, don't worry! Will update tonite mostly😊

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saumiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Yet another amazing story👏⭐️😳

This was so good Malvika! I could totally imagine Dev and Sonakshi here😆 . I can't to read what happens ahead😳😳

But if I may ask, could you please elaborate this para for me. . I could not understand its context.😊 You can pm if you think elaborating/explaining ruins the experience for your readers😳

What did just happen?

"The first blow stunned her and her knees hit the ground as she willed the ringing in her head to cease. The second one flattened her and gravel dug into her cheek as she stared ahead. Before the third blow afforded her darkness, she saw the carton rolling on its side under a car.

It would melt soon. "

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Zaya.hp

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Deffo! Deffo! Deffo! You should definitely continue this! It is so amazing! Very, very interested to know what happens next...

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: saumiee
Yet another amazing story👏⭐️😳
This was so good Malvika! I could totally imagine Dev and Sonakshi here😆 . I can't to read what happens ahead😳😳
But if I may ask, could you please elaborate this para for me. . I could not understand its context.😊 You can pm if you think elaborating/explaining ruins the experience for your readers😳
What did just happen?
"The first blow stunned her and her knees hit the ground as she willed the ringing in her head to cease. The second one flattened her and gravel dug into her cheek as she stared ahead. Before the third blow afforded her darkness, she saw the carton rolling on its side under a car.
It would melt soon. "

Thank u so much dear!! I'm glad you're liking it. I have big plans for this story.

Coming to the paragraph, Sonakshi is involved in a mugging incident with a drunk man. So when she refuses to give him money, he hits her and she falls onto the sidewalk. I will elaborate on this in the next part. Hope this clears it up 😊

Once again, thank u soo much for always supporting me.. big love to you *Hugs*

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp
Deffo! Deffo! Deffo! You should definitely continue this! It is so amazing! Very, very interested to know what happens next...

Awww thank uu sista!! Updating soon😃 *Hugs*

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sinalfan1
Interesting prologue update soon

Thank u dear😃 will update soon!

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rasika_DS

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Malvika first I thought this might be a after breakup story but you gave me a pleasant surprise. Amongst all the heartbreaking news, married DevAkshi is always a relief.

Awesome prologue, loved how he was teasing her. That man hit her seriously???
Waiting for the next part.

Is the IF problem solved?

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Malvika first I thought this might be a after breakup story but you gave me a pleasant surprise. Amongst all the heartbreaking news, married DevAkshi is always a relief.

Awesome prologue, loved how he was teasing her. That man hit her seriously???
Waiting for the next part.

Is the IF problem solved?

Hi dear, thank u soo much for your kind words!! Glad you're liking it. I have planned something for this story. I hope it works out nicely. Will update soon😊

No dear :( it gets solved for a moment then happens again. I'm still trying to sort it out!