Devakshi ff:- ~PYAAR DOSTI HAI~ **Completed** Epilogue on Pg 90 - Page 7

Wow ... After Reading The First Episode ... I Can't Stop Thinking About It! I Loved It So Much! U Are A Born Writer! I Loved The Way U Described The Surroundings And I Loved The Bacho Waala Scene! Can't Wait To Read The Next Episode! Update Soon! And Start Reading My FF To! U'll Love It!

Awww this is so sweet !! Absolutely loved it !!
So cuteee !!
Radha kaaki ?!!😆😉 - Nice on there
Awww are they married?!
Sorrry for the late reply I'm slowly recovering - Love you for this!!

Originally posted by: Himruta_fan

Amazing update. Love how u discribed sona and dev. Thank u for the pm.

Wow...your writing style is completely different here as compared to your other fan fiction. That is impressive. Loved the kids and Sonakshi conversation. And loved loved your description of the morning. And Radhrani is nice to our Sona...that's new🥳!!!!!

Awesome work Adithi!!!

Wow

Too too amazing Aditi

Eagerly waiting for next part

Loved it dear. 👏
And sorry for late m bit busy nowadays.

Originally posted by: kashishbano

👏 .
Speechless Aditi. Bang on update.
How nicely u have shown the beauty of the morning, sonakshi, Dixit mansion. Lovely.
When I have started reading the FF, I didn't find it any more FF, infact I felt that it is a beginning of a movie. Perfectly describe the start of the story.
Actually I have read it twice to feel the beauty once again.
The way the kids were playing and calling each other with names, their friendship, have brilliantly showed the hint of devakshi friendship. The dev and sona called prince and pari to each other. So cute .
The intro of relationship of sonakshi and ishwari were sweet.
Waiting for the story to unfold. AGAR SHURUAT AISI THI TOH AGA AGA KYA HOGA
And I must say Aditi you are a brilliant writer.
You made my day with two chapter of yours two beautiful FF.
THROUGHLY ENJOYED IT.
WAITING FOR THE UPDATE. I will not say soon, u will surely give us best.
LOVE YOU
❤️
Speechless bolke yeh saab boldiya. Par what should I do, its your mistake that you have gave such a brilliant update. 👍🏼

🤗 A big hug from your big fan.