Devakshi ff:- ~PYAAR DOSTI HAI~ **Completed** Epilogue on Pg 90 - Page 69

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome ending

Really loved it

Beautiful epilogue

Congratulations for completion of your ff

Loved it thoroughly

Keep writing dear

Originally posted by: DayDreamz

A very Beautiful and simple way to end the story 👏
From the start of the story till end the journey was amazing.
Thanks to you for this amazing story

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Hii Aditi

Finally Mene pura pdh liya

WOW!!!

Yrr tum ho kya????

Har ek cheez ko itne acche SE explain kiya hai

I could imagine everything happening in front of me.I was thinking that I'm not reading bit watching this story.

From beginning to ending it was FABULOUS

Great job

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Finally aditi... I hv read ur entire story... I do regret highly ki maine iss ff ko pehle kyu nhi pada... I just loved it... koi baat nahiin...abhi toh padha naa...its absolutely ok😊

Itna achha likha hai tune... U kno... U shld take up literature course in clg... Itne achhe writing skills ko wasye matt kar... seriously?? Aapko aisa lagta hai?? Meri mamma ko bhi aisa hi bolti hain...lets see If I get good marks enough to go for Eng Hons in DU

I hv also seen d ques... Aab mujhko sequence yaad nhi... Par jawab deti hu... My fav characters are devakshi...Chahe jo bhi ho... Woh mere sabse fav honge... And rahenge bhi...yeh bhi koi kehne wali baat hai??😉

My best scene is d scene of thr first soliloquy... Jaha sona ne diary mein and dev ne aaina k samne aapne feelings share ki... I hv a personal likeness fr soliloquy... The scene which made me laugh was... Well kayi saare the... The parts were devakshi's gangs teased dem abt thr relationship... IKR...friends ko tease karne mein bohot maza aata hai...😉😆

The scene which made me cry was of course dono ka tutna... sab yahi keh rahe hain...looks like maine sabko bohot rulaya...

And the scene which i hated was neil ki negativity... woh toh tha hi ekdum bakwas aadmi...

Well jo bhi ho... I m glad that i got such a masterpiece gem of a writer as u as my friend... Aww...thanks a lot for the compliment 😳🤗

One criticism i wanna point out that ki jab dev and sona ko pta chala abt thr feelings and wanted to disclose it... A dejavu sort of moment hapoened... The same torment they went through.. I misunderstanding then roona then frnd ka gussa and den thr remembering of thr respective moments with each other... Aisa dono k saath same?? Well yeh mujhko thoda odd laga... Hmm...I agree...but I will not defend it...bcoz critical analysis ko defend nahiin karte...

Bt baring that... I just loved it yaar... Thanks a lot😳😃

And sneha... Aww... Cho chweet... Yeah...she is indeed very cute...😳

And also... I found my name in d epilogue... Haha... hahaha...uss time main aapko jaanti bhi nahiin thi...phir bhi aapka naam likha...😳😉😆

Again a very big wala thank u fr recoming dis ff... I m glad i read it... Thank u sooo much aditi fr writing this... This name of d ff is my fav as it concerns my most fav actor in bwood... SRK

OMG...bass...itni tareef bhi mat karo...and yes thats one of my fav dialougue too...hence I chose this title...

Also i can aloud say... Indeed...

"PYAAR DOSTI HAI"

Originally posted by: binuuu

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

I read all it chapters and am just in love with it writing u write so beautifully just awesome.

~KT@K!