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DevAkshi SS: Hidden

Chapter 10


"Kichu bhaiya, yeh kis ke liye?", Sonakshi asked seeing kichu making soup, as she entered the kitchen.

"Dev bhaiya ke liye"

"he asked for soup in the breakfast?", Sonakshi asked frowining.

"Ji, He has high fever since last night. He said he was feeling dizzy after coming home", he informed, not meeting her gaze.

"And you're telling me now!?"

With that, she dropped the dish in the sink and ran out of the kitchen.

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Clicking the door knob, making sure no one else is present, she quietly entered the room as she saw him lying on the bed, sleeping. Frowning as she saw him without a blanket, she slowly walked up to the closet to pull out a blanket. Tugging him under it, sitting beside him on the bed, she whispered scrunching her eyebrows in despair, "let's work like maniacs all the time, let's not have food on time, let's not have medications and you will be just fit and fine!"

Sighing, she continued, "you don't hesitate to turn the house upside down when I don't have my lunch on time, always there after me like a spy, and when it comes to you, you didn't even care to drop a text?"

Running her fingers through his hair, massaging his scalp, she dropped her fingers on his eyebrows, straightening the scrunched up lines. "Pretty sure, you didn't inform anyone else either regarding your health? Of course, who am I kidding! You love to keep everything to yourself and not worry anyone in the house, how I can forget!", Giving a sarcastic chuckle, disappointed at him and herself as well. She knew that he has always been like this, she should have checked on him!

Massaging his forehead ever so tenderly, she whispered as her eyes blurred, "What do I do to you, AB?!"

Sighing, she stood up, turning around to get a bowl of water and handkerchief to put it over his head, though his temperature looked quite normal to her, when her breath hitched as she felt a tug at her hand. And the next thing she knew, she was being pulled harshly and she landed on the bed with Dev rolling on top of her.

Letting out a loud gasp, she widened her eyes in horror, as she tried to sink in what just happened in this split second.

"Hey beautiful!", came the husky voice, as he bored down his chocolate eyes into her hazel ones.

Gulping as her huge eyes kept looking from his right eye to left, her mouth automatically gaping as she stared at him, her cheeks turned flushed pink at the endearment he used, without her knowledge and permission.

With her hands on his chest without her knowledge, she slowly started squirming under him, trying to find a way to get out, still hoping after hopes that whatever is happening right now is one of her crazy dreams that she quite often gets, especially for the last few days.

"Stop doing that!", he ordered with an underlying warning in his tone.

And she instantly stopped. Looking from her left to right, trying her best to avoid his heated gaze, she gulped yet once again, her throat now dry in fear.

"A-aap...y-yeh...kya kar...r-rahe hai?", she finally managed to ask, still not meeting his gaze.

Running his finger tips on her eyebrows, straightening the furrowed lines, he dropped his palms to cup her left cheek that were burning under his touch. Dropping a lingering kiss, he lifted his face to look at her only to have his chest rumble with laughter at the incredibly adorable face she had put up at the small act he did. Her eyes had turned as huge and round as a saucer, her cheeks had become the brightest shade of red, her nose was pink and her mouth was clasped by her tiny hand. She laid under him frozen!

"This makes my job so much easier!". Indicating her paralyzed state, he dropped his mouth to place another peck on her right cheek making her already huge eyes getting wider, if it was even possible. She felt like she might just burn into ashes under his burning touches any moment!

"P-pl...please...!", was all she managed to utter at the pitiful state she was in.

"Please what, sweetheart? Do you want me to do it again?", and with that, he kissed her nose open mouth without waiting for her reply.

Sonakshi couldn't for the love of her life make a head or tale of what was going on with and around her. Let alone coming to terms with the situation, her mind and brain had stopped working all together. She wished the bed could swallow her right there and then and keep her inside until he left this room.

"A-ap...yeh...k-kya kar...rahe ..h-hai?", she stuttered, he voice barely audible, not sure about whether to look into his chocolate orbs or drop down her gaze to somewhere else. Hell, he was literally hovering over her! Finally making up her mind to move her gaze from his eyes, downward, she almost let out another loud gasp seeing his chest playing a peek-a-boo from the two buttons of his shirt undone, making her instantly look back in his eyes, leaving no other choice to her poor soul.

"Oh so you want me to explain what I'm doing? No problem! I am-"

"NO!", she almost screamed at his audacity. "no! don't.. don't explain, p-please!"

Dev, for once, wanted to just roll on the floor and laugh his heart out seeing her condition. He had almost decided to let go of the poor soul, looking at her pitiful state and utterly cute face, who couldn't even squirm properly under him because he had strictly ordered her not to, however, controlled himself, sticking to his initial plan.

"So, what do you want me to do, Ms. Bose?"

World around her came to a complete stop, her senses was paralyzed, everything around her blurred except him and she felt like air was gushed out of her lungs that very moment, as she stared at him, into his eyes with her breath held, her heart ran a full marathon in that fraction of a second. His playful face had become serious all of a sudden, his eyes had turned few shades darker, and he stared down at her as though he's expecting a proper explanation and answer.

She couldn't talk. She couldn't think. Hell, she couldn't even breathe!

"I'm done all the talking. Time to zip my mouth and perk my ears for you are gonna do that job!". He said flatly, his face still grim, as he rolled over on his back beside her, lifting himself up on his elbows.

"I-I...I don't know w-what you're talking about!", with that she was about to get up only to be pulled back again, slamming her against his chest.

"Fine, If that's how you wanna play! But you're not going anywhere until we have this discussion. Now you decide whether you want to escape or stay here, in this position forever. Not that Im complaining...", he said shrugging with a mischievous gleam in his eyes.

"H-how...how...did you know?", was all that came out of her mouth.

Getting up with a jerk, giving her a "really?!" look, he turned his back to her, as he started buttoning up the above two button of his shirt.

"how...when-"

"You really think I need some bloody proof to recognize you?! Did you consider me so dumb and blind that I would fail to notice how you had been after me, taking care of me since the very first day, making me all my favorite dishes back to back without me even telling you what my preferences are? Do you think I'm a bloody idiot to not recognize those eyes or the fact that your nose turns red when you cry? That you hiccup when you weep? Or that you have an entire collage of my pictures in your closet? Do you think you would be able to hide that pendant that I gave you before leaving for good and it won't come to my notice? What the f*ck where you even thinking, Sonakshi?!"

That was all it took for her to let out a loud sob before running straight into his arms, slamming herself against his chest, holding him as if her entire life depended on him. As his hands laid beside him, she frowned. Holding his hands with her own, putting his arms around her waist, she tightened her hold around his neck as if to never let go. The peace that descended upon her the moment his arms held her back protectively was beyond comprehension to her and it felt like she had won the words for those couple of seconds. The "Sonakshi", though being voiced out in fury, sounded so soothing to her heart, the moment he had addressed her as "Bose" spilled immense tranquility inside her that she could not fathom. Snuggling in his warmth that his body radiated as he tightened his hold, she gulped.

"You better be!", he said kissing her hair, as he rubbed her back.

"Since when...h-have you..."

"I had noticed your pendant the day I admitted you in the hospital.", he said pulling her back, looking into her eyes. "And everything started getting clear every passing second. Joining the two and two, I realized why I was getting attracted by you so much the day I found you unconscious and brought you home; why I was getting affected by your tears, why you possessed the ability to make me feel better in my weakest point just like you used to in our childhood days. When I asked maa if she had told you about my favorite dishes, she had no idea what I was talking about. But I just brushed it off, thinking you're just guessing my preferences or that it must be a coincidence. But when I saw the pendant adorned in your neck, all my doubts were clear. And then I carried out my own investigation."

Her lips trembled, unable to form any words, let alone voice out anything as tears after tears streamed down her cheeks.

"I felt like the reason behind my existence was s-snatched a-away when I realized that I would never be able to see you. I don't know ... I...I don't know...h-how I gathered myself for the past 10 years without...w-without your s-support,... without seeing you, w-without h-hearing your voi-v...voi-ce", she managed to speak, her words started to falter as her breath quickened. Suddenly she started to take in bountiful of air, as if gasping. Dev's eyes widened in horror.

F*ck!

Taking long strides towards his drawer, he took out the inhaler and returned holding her by the small of her back, rubbing it vigorously.

"Shh... Easy...Easy! Relax..", he whispered soothingly, although his voice held the underlying concern and his eyes contained immense desperation, as he put the inhaler in her mouth and asked her to breath in and hold.

Within seconds, the color of her face returned, as he sighed in relief.

"better?"

Nodding, she was about to resume her talking only to be stopped by a finger over her lips.

"No more talking. We will continue later. Time to rest."

With that he was about to hold her shoulder and lead her to bed when an utterly exasperated and ear deafening voice echoes in the room.

"What the hell are you doing here?! Didn't I ask you to make lunch?! Always finding way to escape from work! You -"

"out!", A bone chilling voice interrupted her halting Radha's feet as she widened her eyes. His eyes contained a sudden fury, his child-like smile with the immense peace in his eyes were all gone, replaced by a sudden rage that sent a bone shivering chill down Sonakshi's spine.

"Kya?"

"Out of this room...NOW!", his eyes were red now and he screamed like a raging bull.

"Dev beta-"

Stopping her by raising his hands to let her talk any further, he growled, "There's a thing called privacy! And I hate to be disturbed when I am busy! ", her emphasized the last word deliberately, making Sonakshi's jaw drop.

Gukping, she somehow tried to manage to utter a reply, "o-of course beta, let me just take this useless-"

"One more word and I won't hesitate to show your f*cking filthy place right at this moment. I said OUT OF THIS ROOM!", he exasperated at the top of his voice, making Radha Rani run out of the room clutching her heart.

"Dev! What are you... doing?! Is that how you talk to-"

"Not now Sonakshi!", he cut her, holding her shoulder as he led to the bed, his nose still flaring, his eyes staill contained the rage boiling his blood. It's gonna be hell of a long day.

"But Dev, you-"

Giving her a glare, shutting her mouth tight without uttering a syllable, he laid her down on the bed. Massaging her scalp as she closed her eyes, Dev spoke with utter tenderness, completely opposite to the side he had just put in display, few minutes ago.

"At least 3 hours of nap." He said tugging her under the duvet, as he turned on the air conditioner. Frowning at the dark circles that had formed under her eyes, he cupped her cheeks with his thumb under the part of her eyes, as he spoke with a determination in his tone,"I will make sure they are all gone!"

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Suvika, does it still look a bit unusual? 😆hope I answered your doubts?😳

Not gonna say much, Just gonna wait for your comments with my heart clutched and breath held☺️ Hoping to get some detailed feedback from you lovelies! 😉

Note:

if you wish to receive PMs for this SS or for any of my future DevAkshi work, please send a buddy request to my other account called Devakshi_PM

Chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/136723109

Edited by Mushfika - 9 years ago
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Oh wow..
Just what we want Dev to do. 😃
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Omg Dev found out that idiot finally realized yesss omg I hope he literally slaps the fridging
(f*cking) daylights outta RR. Yaaayyy I love this story omg what have you done to me Mushfika di I'm so addicted god save us.
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I think I am the first one to click the like button. And I had started reading it even before I got your PM.

Yes. I does clarify my doubt (s). He is definitely a force and a cunning one at that. Got the perfect excuse that would bring his girl running into his room. Near his bed. Exactly where he wants her.

And finally she is with him. He is with her. After 12 long lonely years!! Wish their hug had last longer. I know there would be more hugs to come of course, but still... this greedy reader wanted them to savour that first hug. Let it seep into their pores. A tangible, physical reassurance that they have found each other. Have each other. Desire can follow it of course but initially it would be just the two of them drinking in each other's presence. Wiping away the pain of the past. Maybe once it sinks into her that she is not seeing some crazy, bizarre dream? Can I get a scene like that?? Maybe in the next chapter or the next?? No obligation. Just a request.

On a lighter note, I am just imagining Adi's face when he sees the grown up version of the little girl in the photo frame. 😆 And his relief that he doesn't have to hound the CBI officers. 😆

Loved it.
Edited by Suvika. - 9 years ago
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Part 10

I'm happy that finally Dev found his Miss Bose
When Dev actually rolled over on Sona I had thought it wa because of his fever but hey I so liked the fact that he already knew it was Sonakshi, so kissing her was all in his plan I loved it .
Radha Rani gets her first dose of Dev Dixit and again I'm glad as now Dev knows just how she has treated Sonakshi all these years and lied to them saying Sonakshi left with her uncle.
I'm waiting to see what Dev does to Radha Rani
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Lovely!

Can't wait for more. Please do update soon 😊
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ect time for this lovely one to make some true smile on devakshi fans...after some heart breaking scenes and segment..
now...dev knows abt his sona in hospital and so his talks there and in phone and adi comparing are all right and he can do like that only to her...and nxt conv btw dev and rr is I'm really awaiting...and also doubt wht rr gonna do tell ishwari..that all no need worry now...
and for now very happy dev knows all sufferings of sona she had...and he will not do or leave her to take pain...
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Originally posted by: Mushfika

"So, what do you want me to do, Ms. Bose?"

My reaction: Ahhh,yayyy,ahhh,he knows, he knows(jumping with joy)

"You really think I need some bloody proof to recognize you?! Did you consider me so dumb and blind that I would fail to notice how you had been after me, taking care of me since the very first day, making me all my favorite dishes back to back without me even telling you what my preferences are? Do you think I'm a bloody idiot to not recognize those eyes or the fact that your nose turns red when you cry? That you hiccup when you weep? Or that you have an entire collage of my pictures in your closet? Do you think you would be able to hide that pendant that I gave you before leaving for good and it won't come to my notice? What the f*ck where you even thinking, Sonakshi?!"

My reaction: Awww😳❤️(who cares about the angry tone when his love is so clear in the above said words)


"One more word and I won't hesitate to show your f*cking filthy place right at this moment. I said OUT OF THIS ROOM!", he exasperated at the top of his voice, making Radha Rani run out of the room clutching her heart.

My reaction: Wohooo, run away witch,shoo shoo 🥳


What a beautiful beautiful chapter, this one takes the cake for me👏The best one,though I have a feeling you will keep outdoing yourself with every chapter.I seriously have no words to tell you how much I love this story and even more this chapter.You definitely have the flair for writing so beautifully. Every words conveys the characters and emotions so perfectly👏I am so eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I hope Dev avenges for everthing RR inflicted on Sona,looking forward to however you are gonna write that. I am sure it will be awesome to read.😃 And of course more of our Devakshi😳Update soon pleaseee😳😳
Edited by rose4ever - 9 years ago
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OH MY GODDD..this was a big shocker..Surprising thoughI must say this part is a masterpiece..goes into my favorite list😳
I was wondering how did he not see her pendant all these days..yess he saw itSo this was the reason he was over protective towards her after the asthama attack. But great patience man, even after knowing he did not confront her then and there as she was sick.

Finally Sonakshi got the peace in his arms. This girl has suffered so much in these years. She deserves all the happiness now. 10 years is such a long time. He surely will make up for all her pain.

But I can't imagine his state knowing how much pain she has gone through all these years.
The missing pieces are joined together now😳 Dev got his Sona back.

So so happy to read this. Ab RR ki khair nahi. How he screamed at her..lovely. She is the cause of the pain and misery his Sona went through. 😡

Can't wait for the next part. I am sure it will be a happy one and romantic bhi chalega😉



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