DevAkshi SS: Hidden - Chapter 13 | Pg 53 | 06.09.2017 - Page 24

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

hahahahahaaa...my god adi...kahin aisa na ho...sona k bare me puchne pe u end up in hospital...dev is so so concerned for her...

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

This is so nice... I am short of words to describe how beautifully and eloquently you have written. I could feel that special feeling that was arising in them..I loved the way he was taking care of her...which girl would not like such attention and love 😳...eagerly waiting to see how he is going to know that she is the one who he has been searching for ...

Will wait for the next part as usual ...

Originally posted by: gmgi

I am sooo happy. Love you for this sweet update. Made my day after seeing the depressive promo. Thank you sooo much. I really like Adi. When I read the part where he was grinning like an idiot I felt like pinching his cheeks and say cho chweet😳.

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next part

I read the story all over again ..in one go...every time I read it ...I have this smile on my face...but at at the same time , there is feeling of pain for the lead lady...I dont know how you maintain two emotions at the same time with equal imp thru out...I liked it...

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

I read the story all over again ..in one go...every time I read it ...I have this smile on my face...but at at the same time , there is feeling of pain for the lead lady...I dont know how you maintain two emotions at the same time with equal imp thru out...I liked it...

And yeah Dev!! hmmm...niceee...guy who doesnt want to show his emotional side...😉 but fails miserable when in front of her...

So when are we getting the next chapter ...if you dont give it soon ...every day you are going to have one PM from me asking you to post next chapter😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Firstly, hope you are feeling better. Get well soon!! Updates can wait. Health comes first. So please take good care of yourself.

That said, it was a small but cute chapter. The way Adi observed and tried to join the dots as to who his boss had been talking to made me grin.

Isn't it a bit strange that this guy took her to the hospital when she had been sick, handled her medication etc yet doesn't ask her for her name?? I find it a little unusual. Normally that's the first thing we ask, right??

DevAkshi SS: Hidden

I feel like he kissed her and she asked him what he's doing
Hahahaha 😆
It's prob something else

yaar this is nt fair
my gutter mind is on work