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Sushmita75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Beautiful chapters. Thanks for the extras chapter. Cannot wait to see Dev's reaction when he comes to know about Sonakshi's life. Keep going.

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Gayatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Lovely update waiting for next part

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..juhi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

awesome update...wow dev caring abt sona...hope he gets to knw the truth soon...

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Beautifully written ... I am getting so attached to this story now..Please write soon...eagerly waiting for the next part

@red: Aww! you just made my day, darling! 🥳

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Erian
Your writing style is marvellous. Loved the way how Dev is trying to understand his concern for the so called maid of the house without knowing her true identity. Waiting for the next update.

Thank you so much! 🤗

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Thank you so much for the PM otherwise I would have missed this beautiful story😊

Read all parts in one go. This is beyond amazing.

Only thing I hate is the way RR treats her😡 Why does she treats her so badly the whole day? Doesn't even gives her food to eat? No medication? RR doesn't deserves to live🤢

After getting caught by Dev, she will dread that he won't get to know that the girl is Sonakshi.

But please please don't keep us waiting. Really can't wait to see that Dev comes to know about Sonakshi. Can't see her in more pain now.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: gmgi
Not only Sonakshi's even my heartbeat was raising at jet speed when Dev tended to her. Such a lovely update. Addicted to them now. Please update soon.😳

Lool awww❤️ Trust me, I really miss those Devakshi moments we used to get in the beginning of their love story, they actually used to increase my heart beat 😆

@red: This coming from you means a lot as a writer. Thank you so much! 🤗

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Thank you so much for the PM otherwise I would have missed this beautiful story😊
Read all parts in one go. This is beyond amazing.

Only thing I hate is the way RR treats her😡 Why does she treats her so badly the whole day? Doesn't even gives her food to eat? No medication? RR doesn't deserves to live🤢

After getting caught by Dev, she will dread that he won't get to know that the girl is Sonakshi.

But please please don't keep us waiting. Really can't wait to see that Dev comes to know about Sonakshi. Can't see her in more pain now.

Reading your comment, my heart goes like:🥳

😆

You're too kind! Thank you so much for such sweet words. I'm so glad you liked the SS. 😳

Lol trust me, feeling is mutual (regarding RR). The only difference is that I wanna slaughter her in the actual show, while my readers are dying to volunteer to complete that job in my SS🤣 But I guess we all need someone like her to spice up the love story, you know😉

Lol being a lazy bone after updating 2 chapters within 24 hours. Haven't started writing the next one yet Sorry😳 But will update soon, promise 😉

Edited by Mushfika - 9 years ago

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rose4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

I love your story so so much, came across it today and read it all in one go. I love the way you have shaped Dev' s character. It reminds of Cinderella story with our handsome Dev prince charming but only better as they are childhood friends. 👏 Hate RR and the way she treats darling Sona, feeling so bad for her. I am so waiting for Dev to know her real identity.
And love your writing, you have penned it down so brilliantly. I recently posted a one shot and it wasn't easy to pen down so I totally appreciate your efforts. Loving it and hope you update soon.