DevAkshi Os:Love At First Sight(Removed and reposted in a new post) - Page 3

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#cc0000">Lovely... Wonderfully written OS... Just loved it... Do keep writing and sharing your write-ups with us.👏😊</font>

Thank you so much for your appreciation

Originally posted by: star.21

Sorry for commenting this late!!

But...What a story!!

Lovedd every bit of it!😊😳

Thank you dear
it's really heartwarming to see people appreciating our work

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Wonderful :)

Thank you so much dear

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Hey Ankita...
So cute OS dear... Beautifully written...
Wow... It was Dev who push her in d river... 😃 😃 ... Amazing yaar...
Love at first sight... .. So it was Dev who fallen love first... Wow .., so sweet...
I so love it..
Keep it up nd write More...

Thank you so much for your appreciation :-)

It's a wonderful Story!

Originally posted by: Deepsikha_94

It's a wonderful Story!

I really loved the simplicity of the story!

You write really well!

And the concept of a flashback along with the present was a nice touch!

Aur likhooo!

I would love to read them!😃

Thank you so much di

Super duper dear...

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Super duper dear...

Sona pregnant... wow...

Loved reading it...

U have a great idea dear...

Plz continue soon...

Pm plz ...

Thank you so much for your appreciation but this was a one shot only that means it's complete

Lovely os dear
Enjoyed reading it

Hahaha! I was sure it was Dev because of whom she fell! Aw! This was such a cute, cute read. At the beginning I thought there was something wrong. Sonakshi was crying, right? I felt they might've broken up. But look at that! They are together and she's pregnant too. This was a real heart warming read. Thanks! 😊