FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Wow Aditi.
Unique concept.
Love to read devakshi in the high school standards also.
The starting parts are just awesome.
Do update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Hahaha

I love Dev and Shravan convo ...


Lovely part again waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
The wait is over!!
I am posting the 3rd chapter very soon...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: kashishbano

Wow Aditi.
Unique concept.
Love to read devakshi in the high school standards also.
The starting parts are just awesome.
Do update soon.

Thank you dii!!😃
Its not just my writing, but DEVAKSHI magic too!!😉😊😊
I will surely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Hahaha

I love Dev and Shravan convo ...


Lovely part again waiting for next part

Thank you!!
Unka part mujhe bhi bohot pasand hai!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Hey. I just checked your pm now and immediately got on to reading it. I heard its your first work. And it already looks promising. I can't wait to read further. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Here is chapter 3 of my ff.
Hope you all will like it😊😊

Credit for the Banner:- CarpedeimRose


Chapter 3

Sona & Sumo enter the door..its huge school...looks lik a college to sona..
Sumo:This side...come here...office is here..
Sona:Hmm
Counselor( person who decides the level of subjects a student will b able to handle with)
Sumo:sir,thts Sonakshi,my friend she has just arrived here...
C:yes miss Sonakshi,plz come...do have ur documents and immigrant papers?
Sona: yes I do..here they r[hands them in]
C: miss Suman u might b getting late to ur classes,...u may go...miss Sonakshi will b joining the school in a few days...(Suman goes )
[to Sona]so according to these marksheets ur standard is quite high and I can almost say tht u go t the admission ,u don need to take any tests...thoses tests r for ppl who are very new and unaware of the language spoken here...u seem to be quite confident and good to go...processing will take 2 days and u can join the schhol from Monday.
Sona: thnks ...so shud I come directly on Monday or do I need to come in the office for any documents if need be
C: v ll call u if v need anything...or else u ll b getting ur subjects tht day itself
Sona: Sir,I have a request...can I take phs,chem.,bio,phys ed this semister
C: yes,but if classes are full then v l have to move u to some other class...
Sona: ok thnks again;;;
She goes
Sumo was standing outside
Sumo:did u tell abt subjects..
Sona: ya but he said only if classes have space, and I m joining from mon, and no tests for me...yaaahhhooo
Sumo: Coolll...,k I g2g to my class...will u b able to go back alone?take any bus tht goes to our area ..or else show our address to driver and he ll guide u
Sona: don worry I ll figure it out...
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in class
Sumo is sitting on left hand corner with no1 on the other side
Shravan comes in
Sumo's eyes sparkle lik a star...she smiles a bit..
Shravan looks towards her,smiles a bit and sits on the other bench on the right side...now Dev comes and sits with Shravan..

They r sitting lik this

--- --- --- --- --- --- ------- ----
sumo shravan Dev
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...
while the teacher was teaching, Shravan was looking towards Sumo with slanting eyes...and Sumo senses something and looks to her right and Shravan suddenly starts writing something where as teacher was just speaking and not writing anything on board(lolz)
and then shravan looks at her she kinda behaves lik she was looking at the poster on the wall on her right(lolz)...both are ankhein churaying...

class is finished
while coming out of the class

Dev: abe ...yeh kar kya raha tha tu???
Shravan:are yaarr...chilla mat...kya kiya maine...?? Kuch bhi toh nahi kiya...
Dev: kya kuch nahi...teacher likhne ko kehte the tab, u were not writing a word and when he told to pay aattention towards him u were busy writing...phir bolta hai ke...u lll work hard on science subjects!!huhhh...kya work hard...karega
Shravan: karoonga be...tu itna kya pareshaan hota hai..
Dev: pareshaan na hou to kya...tambura bajou...har baaar copy karne pe tule rehta hai...
Shravan: ok ok chill !!!
Dev: aur who kya tha
Shravan: kya(smiles)
Dev:woohhh
Shravan: Kyaaa
Dev: wooohhiii yaarrr
Shravan: (sharmakar) kuch nahiii re...
Dev: Bhai nain-matakka chod ke padne baith..!!!
They both go to the locker..


P.S thnx every1 for reading my ff...thnx a lot...


Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan

Hey. I just checked your pm now and immediately got on to reading it. I heard its your first work. And it already looks promising. I can't wait to read further. Continue soon.

Thank you so much!!!😊😊
Yes, it is my first work!!😳
Thanks again...
Don't wait😆😆
Chapter 3 is already up!!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Loving ur story dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update! Imagining DevAkshi as Highschoolers is difficult for me... but i am looking forward to what your story has to offer! Good job till now! 😊😊

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