Devakshi OS- The Fault in Our Stars LAST PART UPDATED(Page 9) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a cute one.. Read all parts...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-3
Loved Dev Sona meeting accidentally twice back to back on the same day. Also Dev Nick naming Elena as chatter box, wonderful that Sona in hesitation mode n Pat came Dev's msg asking for coffee, adhoori baat complete karne.
Now again going for the next chappy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-4
Wow U turn liya last part mein, the twist n confession was amazing, this part was emotional n funny too, U have ended with similar situation on-screen.
They proved to be such understanding, supportive n cupid friends.
It's really difficult to write such cute pieces. N U have done it in Ur first attempt.
Why this as last one, continue writing Dear.
Waiting for the next one from U soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just read the prologue and character sketch
very interesting I must say
And it's nice to know that it is based on your own life
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Part-4

Wow U turn liya last part mein, the twist n confession was amazing, this part was emotional n funny too, U have ended with similar situation on-screen.
They proved to be such understanding, supportive n cupid friends.
It's really difficult to write such cute pieces. N U have done it in Ur first attempt.
Why this as last one, continue writing Dear.
Waiting for the next one from U soon.

Thank you soo much🤗
All ur reviews on each part makes me feel soo good ryt now!!
It means a lot!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Such a cute one.. Read all parts...

Thankooo😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Just read the prologue and character sketch
very interesting I must say
And it's nice to know that it is based on your own life

Ty😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Chapter 1

Wow How did I miss this awesome story
Sona ka nature matches with me a lot and Eli is like that best friend who is always behind boys khud ke liye bhi and apni friend ke liye bhi Lol
So Sona ka college change hua and Eli bhi uske Saath agai
Aur humare Hero sahab ki to pehle hi mulakat ho chuki thi Sona se but ab Sona ko uska name pata chal gaya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2

Hahaha I love Eli and her teasing.So Arjun and Dada Dono Dev ko jaante hai.So Eli ne Facebook request bhej Di Dev ko Sona ki ID se And wow Sona was smitten by Dev while he danced.And their basketball game was awesome.Loved how sona was confused what should she reply to him and finally fell asleep.She must be dreaming about him ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Chapter 1

Wow How did I miss this awesome story
Sona ka nature matches with me a lot and Eli is like that best friend who is always behind boys khud ke liye bhi and apni friend ke liye bhi Lol
So Sona ka college change hua and Eli bhi uske Saath agai
Aur humare Hero sahab ki to pehle hi mulakat ho chuki thi Sona se but ab Sona ko uska name pata chal gaya

Thankyou😛 I am glad that you can relate yourself with the character.

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