A Possessive Love! Part Two Updated on Page 4

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shri123

@shri123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity
Wonderful!!!
Finally...He feels jealous! I like the way, u described his jealousy!!
& Poor Sona! She is not getting actually whts happening to her...But she should not be convinced soon...Because, he has hurted him badly.
& one request...Bring Mr.Yash's plot again...M loving Dev's jealousy! ;)
Waiting for the next part...This part was mindblowing...

Exactly. She is hurt a lot by Dev keeping mum while she was insulted. Dev should really understand how sona got hurt badly by his behaviour of keeping quiet rather by insult itself. yes bring back dr yash again. Though he is getting married to another girl, Dev should not at all know this.

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Oh my god

U got me hooked

Though Im glad Yash is marrying some1 else, lets not reveal that to Dev yet and let his jealousy continue

He hurt Sona

Though its a lil like Dev to be shocked speechless I hope it doesnt happen the same way in the serial too

Do continue soon 😃

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Finally getting to see a Jealous and Possessive Dev!! Thank you for this ...waiting for your next part

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Misnomer

@Misnomer

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wow wow wow wow

And now i cannt wait for the next part

Pls pls try to update in the upcoming week ..

Pretty please

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Erian

@Erian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Lovely ... I love your style. It's amazing.

If I'm not mistaken then your other work is AJR .. Right?????

Waiting for the update.

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TRaYaWorld

@TRaYaWorld

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Amazing update👏 It has so much of angst. .! Poor Sknakshi is actually dumbfounded at what is happening. .

Really interesting. . Please do continue soon!Cant wait😳😆

I love the possessive side of dev😊😆

Edit: I am the first to comment

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the first comment always sets the tone so thank you kindly for your postive feedback 👏😉

to be honest i seem to quite enjoy bringing out a possessive side of Dev, lets see how this goes😳

Thanks again

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TRaYaWorld

@TRaYaWorld

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity
Wonderful!!!
Finally...He feels jealous! I like the way, u described his jealousy!!
& Poor Sona! She is not getting actually whts happening to her...But she should not be convinced soon...Because, he has hurted him badly.
& one request...Bring Mr.Yash's plot again...M loving Dev's jealousy! ;)
Waiting for the next part...This part was mindblowing...

hahahaha in my other FF some call me torture queen😉 so i'm sure Dev shall experience my level of torture 😆😆😆

But thank you so much for your wonderful comment, always appreciated😊

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TRaYaWorld

@TRaYaWorld

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shri123

Exactly. She is hurt a lot by Dev keeping mum while she was insulted. Dev should really understand how sona got hurt badly by his behaviour of keeping quiet rather by insult itself. yes bring back dr yash again. Though he is getting married to another girl, Dev should not at all know this.

off course i won't let Dev get off easily he needs to work his way back to Sonakshi's life but yes i'm also enjoying the character of Yash so could definitely do some magic😆😉

Thanks alot for enjoying part 2😊

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adi35

@adi35

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Wow amazing
read both parts in one go
very beautifully written
heart touching 👏
update soon

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TRaYaWorld

@TRaYaWorld

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Oh my god
U got me hooked
Though Im glad Yash is marrying some1 else, lets not reveal that to Dev yet and let his jealousy continue
He hurt Sona
Though its a lil like Dev to be shocked speechless I hope it doesnt happen the same way in the serial too
Do continue soon 😃

Hahaha I'm in total agreement with you😉

i so appreciate your post and please continue to stay hooked😳