DevAkshi OS- The Letter Update Pg 5

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Pilu05

@Pilu05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Beautiful mayu

Love to read it yaar

Keep continued

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

And finally read it:)

Hey Mayu...

Ata mi tula kay vishesh tipani du.. Radu aala mala he vachun though I don't know who these characters are.. It was way too emotional and you've expresed the protagonists feelings so well.. The turmoil of not being able to choose between his mother and love is so real..

I wish you'd write anither part to this as to how the mother reacts to the letter.. But that's completely your call!!

Azun lihit zaa.. I love reading them!!!

Love

Priya

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c85rie

@c85rie

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

I want to let you know that Sona is the strength you are my weakness. I need you both to move ahead in life. I love you both equally.

I loved this line from Dev. What a beautiful and mature way to handle insecurity of his mother. And the place Sona has in his life👏

I liked your story but you ended it too soon. I want to read more from you. Please...

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
You wrote really well!!
Unfortunately, Dev in the show is not like what you described and will not even try to convince his mother!!!

Thankyou😳

I am hoping against hope that Dev will open his mouth.😳

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: debby_11
a beautiful letter :)

Thankyou😳

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Pilu05
Beautiful mayu

Love to read it yaar

Keep continued

Thankyou😳

I don't know whether to continue or not?😕

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: BeingIyeristic
And finally read it:)

Hey Mayu...
Ata mi tula kay vishesh tipani du.. Radu aala mala he vachun though I don't know who these characters are.. It was way too emotional and you've expresed the protagonists feelings so well.. The turmoil of not being able to choose between his mother and love is so real..

I wish you'd write anither part to this as to how the mother reacts to the letter.. But that's completely your call!!

Azun lihit zaa.. I love reading them!!!

Love
Priya

Priya🤗🤗

I am so glad that you commented.😳

I am a bit in a dilemma as to how to continue this or rather whether I should continue this.🤔

Lihite ga ajun, pan truely Maan Geet, RK-Madhu saarkha konya characters la mi evadhe attach nai zhale. Plus ithe tar TV pan nahi. I watch online sometimes, that's it.

BTW apli KKB chi story kashi chalu ahe?😳

Cheers!

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: c85rie
I want to let you know that Sona is the strength you are my weakness. I need you both to move ahead in life. I love you both equally.

I loved this line from Dev. What a beautiful and mature way to handle insecurity of his mother. And the place Sona has in his life👏

I liked your story but you ended it too soon. I want to read more from you. Please...

Thankyou 😳

I loved that line too😳 Thats what makes Dev so special and unique.😳

I shall try and write more stories.😎

Love,

Mayu

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teju

@...tejaswi...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

rli mayu it was literally the most emotional letter

he could simply not face his mother it really happens in real life

i truly loved the post😊👏

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...
rli mayu it was literally the most emotional letter
he could simply not face his mother it really happens in real life

i truly loved the post😊👏

Thankyou Teju😳

Yeah, sometimes better than speaking out, penning down is a better option.😳

Love,

Mayu