DevAkshi OS- The Letter Update Pg 5

Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Such a fantastic start

Ishwari cut herself off from Dev all because he failed to tell his mother he fell in love

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Epilogue

A simple letter yet deep telling his mother that he had missed out on the joys of life which was no one fault he loves Sona but he loves his mother too she'll always be his mother no matter what happens he wants to marry but he also need his mother by his side loving a woman that is not family is new for him because this love is a soulful love he has fallen in love with love and life

A Beautiful Story

hope to read much more stories by you

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Snehavinaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Sona is my strength
U r my weakness
What a line !! Absolutely true.
Why couldn't a mother see a son's happiness??
However possessive a mother is ... But to hurt ur own son for ur selfish motives!! I can't digest that

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Epilogue

A simple letter yet deep telling his mother that he had missed out on the joys of life which was no one fault he loves Sona but he loves his mother too she'll always be his mother no matter what happens he wants to marry but he also need his mother by his side loving a woman that is not family is new for him because this love is a soulful love he has fallen in love with love and life
A Beautiful Story
hope to read much more stories by you

Thankyou so much Jade😳

Yes, a simple letter is something is very useful when some person cuts all conversation with you. Its simple but great, I am hoping in the serial Dev and Sona's love story will be understood by Ishwari😳

If any other such scene inspires me to pen another story, I will sure do it.

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sjain
tum 😲 yahaan

Haan! Main yahan😳 Shocked ho yaa surprised?😳

Waiting for your comment😊

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Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Snehavinaya
Sona is my strength
U r my weakness
What a line !! Absolutely true.
Why couldn't a mother see a son's happiness??
However possessive a mother is ... But to hurt ur own son for ur selfish motives!! I can't digest that

Thankyou😳

Its that the mother feels insecure. Nothing more. Its always better have a conversation.

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Brilliant one..👏 super loved it..

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Brilliant one..👏 super loved it..

Thankyou Rasika😳 I hope that is your name.😆

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Mayu

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fatima rukia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Prologue is so amazing.❤️
Epilogue: How beautifully Dev conveyed his emotion.😳
Loved it👏

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Amazing...
how beautifully u penned it...
well explained Dev's POV ...
very heart touching letter..
totally enjoyed...
if possible write one more part...

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