DevAkshi OS- The Letter Update Pg 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola, its me Mayu. I am a very old member of IF and was very active in DMG, GHSP and MEIEJ forums. But its my very first OS in this forum. So please bear any mistakes.

Prologue:

As Dev had finally opened about his relationship status to his mother, she was baffled. She felt betrayed, hurt and lost. Her only son, the son who worshipped her, adored her, loved her and above all respected her, had lied to her. Lied about how his life had changed. Suddenly it reflected upon her, the reason why he cancelled his engagement to Natasha at the last moment. It all dawned upon her, as to how over the past days, Dev's attitude had changed. He was acting very different, very weird, very unrealistic and very odd, the complete opposite to his nature. She was not angry. She felt betrayed and hurt, as to why in these many days Dev couldn't muster up enough courage to tell her the truth. And in this angst, she had questioned her upbringing, her love and care for her family. And she had blasted Dev for falling in love, for living life and for enjoying the life's precious moments. She had stopped any communication with him, stopped eating and completely banished him from his life.

Dev was in a dilemma, he couldn't even dream of living without Sona or his mother. These were the very two women of his life whom he cherished, loved and respected. These were the very two women, who were pillars of strength, who were from where he drew his energy. And today, he had to convince his mother what does Sona, aka Ms.Bose mean in his life. What a transformed man he had become because of Sona. He had to tell her how his life transformed from Mr.Abodro to Dev. The journey was phenomenal and exhilarating. He also had to make his mother understand that no matter what happens between him and Sona, the unconditional love for he has for his mother will always will be there. He knew having a conversation with his mother will yield no results as she has shut herself form the world since the revelation. The penning of a letter seemed a better option.

To be continued...

Hope I loved up to the expectations of the fans!

Please do comment and do you want an epilogue?

Love,

Mayu

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-Mayu- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved for index😳

Epilogue page 5
Edited by -Mayu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds really intriguing Mayu! I look forward to you penning more down (and maybe even that epilogue if time permits 😉)

Love the way your prologue is written! It makes me to read the next installation immediately!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum!!
Your concept is really interesting!!
Cont soon
Would be waiting eagerly...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent start...
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue... and soon... please please please. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Starting was amazing mayu

Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Start

Yes its always an issue when a son hides his true feelings from his mother and now its up to him to make her understand that he loves her and respects her but he is also sorry for letting her know what was actually happening in his life
continue soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear
Good start 👍🏼
Continue soon...

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