DevAkshi One Shot: We'll Find That Balance

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: riddhima11
What a beautiful piece of writing!!
I loved the way you made way for a discussion which is really needed at this point.. and I wish this happens soon on the show..
You captured Devakshi's essence.. thebest thing about this one-shot.. I could imagine this happening.
I love your writing style.. simple yet laced with emotions..
Would definitely love to read whenever you write about Devakshi..

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Pankhuri

Thank you so much Pankhuri! 🤗

I really wish this conversation happens soon on the show. 😳 It's really needed. Especially the way Dev is behaving nowadays. 🤔 It doesn't even have to be that long. Just a short, simple one will suffice.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ssimmy
Absolutely beautiful. Loved how the dialogue unfolded between the two. Hope this happens in the show! Great work as always 😊

Thank you! <3

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Os.. 👍🏼

Thank you. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _Meena_
nice os as always!

Thank you Meena. 🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Missadorable
dis s so good nd wish v l get to c sumthng like dis n d shw...
loving ur works yaar❤️
nw evn mre excitd to read ur take n rain dance
keep writing more dear

Thank you so much! 🤗

You just reminded me! I have to get started on that rain dance. >.<