DevAkshi One Shot: We'll Find That Balance

asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Khusharni
So sweet! Hope they show some type of scene like this

Thank you! 😳

I hope we get a scene like this too. <3

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Posted: 9 years ago

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dis s so good nd wish v l get to c sumthng like dis n d shw...
loving ur works yaar❤️
nw evn mre excitd to read ur take n rain dance
keep writing more dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dishadishki
Amazing OS! I actually wish something like this happens in the show...because sona addresses a real concern we all have about dev's negligence towards his work. I hope it does not pose to be a threat for his business which he built after toiling so much in life :)

Thank you! 😳

I really hope it happens as well. It's great that Dev wants to be with Shona but he shouldn't do it at the expense of his business. 🤔

Now that he has expressed his love for Shona, she won't be going anywhere. She will be there for him through thick and thin. But business is a fickle mistress. Profits & losses come and go but it takes immense work to stay at the top. I don't want Shona to become a reason for RR or Ishwari to point fingers at her.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: bobadekajal88.8
one word...beautiful.

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Originally posted by: hermosoanu123
Aww,this is awesome nd sincerely I feel this part should b incorporated in the serial .it will strengthen der relation nd the amount of faith in each other. Vry beautifully conceptualised.

Thank you. 😳

This is something that I really want to see. As you said, it will increase their bond and give them the strength to face all obstacles.

Thank you once again. :)

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Originally posted by: ..HowRude..
Ahhh this was perfect !!!!!
Honestly, perfect is an understatement !
You kept it short and simple ! Good job !
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Thank you so much Steph! 🤗

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Originally posted by: independent
Superb👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome OS :)
Superb :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Starkheart.
It's been a long while since I've read any sort of Fanfiction and a longer while since I've read a good one. What you've written, it's just so Dev and Sonakshi. I can totally see this happening sometime in the show.

This is undoubtedly the best OS I've read on DevAkshi and probably the best I'll ever read on them(unless you write more and I really hope you do.)

Thank you so much for this! 🤗

It really means a lot. And the fact that you have singled out selections from the piece means even more. <3

I have written other pieces on them and I definitely plan on writing some more on them. You can visit my index if you're curious about any of them. 😳

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