DevAkshi OS~ Phir le aaya dil, majboor kya kijiye - Page 4

Originally posted by: rukiaa

wow...amazing❤️ you described each and every thing so beautifully..their emotion and those deep lines...just beautiful...good work...👏👏
and thank you ... 🤗

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

I really loved this...❤️

You have penned down emotions beautifully and I like the poetic side of it.It is a beautiful piece of writing where dialogues are kept minimum and feelings are wonderfully exposed👏

Thank you so much guys for all the warm wishes, it feels really nice to hear from you all !!

Originally posted by: ammu3

D'aa thank you so much Ruchi !!! Such a heartwarming comment 😳

I AM HEREE! Sorry ceebs editing the other one, too much laze in my life. Plus I just ate a really decadent chocolate cupcake and hence I am even more lazy. Tmi I know 🤪

Okay coming to the OS! I really like how there is an equal amount of dialogues and inner thoughts and explanations to this OS! It makes it a complete read in my opinion! Teach me your ways Bae!!! How do you do it 😆
I am just more partially inclined to the feelings and inner workings of a character and hence I really really enjoyed that side of the OS! Not saying I didn't enjoy the dialogues, I did, just liked the emotional side more!
I would write more but I am blowing my data limit for this 🤪

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I AM HEREE! Sorry ceebs editing the other one, too much laze in my life. Plus I just ate a really decadent chocolate cupcake and hence I am even more lazy. Tmi I know 🤪

Okay coming to the OS! I really like how there is an equal amount of dialogues and inner thoughts and explanations to this OS! It makes it a complete read in my opinion! Teach me your ways Bae!!! How do you do it 😆
I am just more partially inclined to the feelings and inner workings of a character and hence I really really enjoyed that side of the OS! Not saying I didn't enjoy the dialogues, I did, just liked the emotional side more!
I would write more but I am blowing my data limit for this 🤪

Wow! 👏

Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain

Wow! 👏

This is so amazing 👍🏼

Loved what neha said .. giving a reality check to ishwari

Dev 😭 Loved how you portrayed a depressed dev here

Over all an awesome OS

Do write more 😳

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome OS
Beautifully written

Waow yaar... seriously great choice of song... beautifully set story... had tears when I was reading neha and mum convo... seriously I feel only neha can do this even in the show... loved the os... thanks a lot for writing this for me... lottts of luv..