My poem for DevAkshi - Page 2

Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful.. 👏

Originally posted by: GoodyTwoShoes

OK so I was quite overwhelmed after yesterday episode and with dev's intense and romantic version.😆😳so wrote something in jiffy to get rid of excess of emotions..so penned these lines down for dev😳bear with me if it's not up to your liking..😊

Mere vajud me tera ab youn Asar aa raha hai,

Meri rooh ko bhi jeene ka sabak aa raha hai.

Tu mujhme rah ja ab youn umar bhar meri banke,

Tere sang hi to jidangi ka har rang Najar aa raha hai.

Tujhe chahta hoon main khud ke liye itna,

Jis kadar chahe Banjar koi baarishon ko.

Tu chhu rahi hai dil ki har tah ko meri is tarah,

Ki rang mil gaye hain andhero me Dabi khwahisho ko.

Tujhe chahta hoon janana itna karibiyon se

Ki lage ham the hi nahi kabhi youn anjaan.

Tere har kisse ka Hissa Lagu main aur,

Teri har kahani me kahi mera bhi ho koi nishan.

Mohabbat ka andaj seekha hai jidagi ne der se,

Par ye safar qayamat se bhi door talak jayega.

Tha adhura sa mujhme Jo kahi muddato se,

Yakin hai tu hi use mujhme mukkamal banayega.

p.s- did not proofread..my lil one got up from his sleep😆

Originally posted by: Spruha1

such a nice poem.

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...

This is absolutely lovely 👏 ...Amazing

It fits Dev so well 😊

Originally posted by: GoodGoneWrong

Meri behna...sashtang namshkar tumhe...tumhare pair kahan hai...chumne hai...👏 I am so so proud of myself that I have a sista like you.

That was beautiful...if Dev had to say everything he said in the episode yesterday in a poem, this would be it. You need to tweet this to the PH house or someone...I am sure they will say the same thing.

I read this poem which I was watching the episode and I could actually hear Dev saying to Sona...it was that beautiful...

Did NV see this? If he does, he might ask u to stay with ur mummy longer given how u are putting to words another man's thoughts and that too so eloquently. He is going to be so J.

Okay...time to read the poem again...

Love ya darling😛

Originally posted by: GoodyTwoShoes

I am so glad you liked it😳🤗sab Teri sangat ka Asar hai Behan😳

Awww you read it while watching epi😳

Dev sona are taking a toll on my mental health now😆

It's after ages I wrote any ..and I am glad it's for dev😳

NV would ask me to be with mommy even without reason so he can have few days of relief😆

I wish he gets J😳😆😆but it's far fetched😆

Thank a lot jaan..and love you too🤗