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Posted: 9 years ago
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OK so I was quite overwhelmed after yesterday episode and with dev's intense and romantic version.😆😳so wrote something in jiffy to get rid of excess of emotions..so penned these lines down for dev😳bear with me if it's not up to your liking..😊

Mere vajud me tera ab youn Asar aa raha hai,
Meri rooh ko bhi jeene ka sabak aa raha hai.

Tu mujhme rah ja ab youn umar bhar meri banke,
Tere sang hi to jidangi ka har rang Najar aa raha hai.



Tujhe chahta hoon main khud ke liye itna,
Jis kadar chahe Banjar koi baarishon ko.
Tu chhu rahi hai dil ki har tah ko meri is tarah,
Ki rang mil gaye hain andhero me Dabi khwahisho ko.

Tujhe chahta hoon janana itna karibiyon se
Ki lage ham the hi nahi kabhi youn anjaan.
Tere har kisse ka Hissa Lagu main aur,
Teri har kahani me kahi mera bhi ho koi nishan.

Mohabbat ka andaj seekha hai jidagi ne der se,
Par ye safar qayamat se bhi door talak jayega.
Tha adhura sa mujhme Jo kahi muddato se,
Yakin hai tu hi use mujhme mukkamal banayega.


p.s- did not proofread..my lil one got up from his sleep😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Meri behna...sashtang namshkar tumhe...tumhare pair kahan hai...chumne hai...👏 I am so so proud of myself that I have a sista like you.

That was beautiful...if Dev had to say everything he said in the episode yesterday in a poem, this would be it. You need to tweet this to the PH house or someone...I am sure they will say the same thing.
I read this poem which I was watching the episode and I could actually hear Dev saying to Sona...it was that beautiful...

Did NV see this? If he does, he might ask u to stay with ur mummy longer given how u are putting to words another man's thoughts and that too so eloquently. He is going to be so J.

Okay...time to read the poem again...

Love ya darling😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally I find u 🥳

I love ur writing ... for me after episode ur post / writing for me cherry on cake .. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevKiShona

Finally I find u 🥳

I love ur writing ... for me after episode ur post / writing for me cherry on cake .. ❤️

Awww sweetheart...🤗
It lovely to see old friends meeting and appreciating same show again😳
KRPKAB is magical for sure 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoodyTwoShoes


Awww sweetheart...🤗
It lovely to see old friends meeting and appreciating same show again😳
KRPKAB is magical for sure😳



Yeah show is magical but my happiness is see u again 😳
Can't tell u how I miss u n ur writing , finally Old days back again !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

It was dreamy and beautiful . Just how much he wants to be into her ...ur poem expresses the same. Loved it !!

Ruchi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suja di🤗
The poem was ❤️
And and DevAkshi are pure lovee❤️
It's so good to see you back to posting. Big hug!🤗
The show has started growing on me..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaliah3108

❤️

It was dreamy and beautiful . Just how much he wants to be into her ...ur poem expresses the same. Loved it !!

Ruchi

Thank you dear😃glad you liked it..he wants for him..a part of live where is not being anyone else ..just Dev and son's Dev..he can not stay away from her..he knows what she is to him..just beautiful 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SoHu.

Suja di🤗

The poem was ❤️
And and DevAkshi are pure lovee❤️
It's so good to see you back to posting. Big hug!🤗
The show has started growing on me..😳

Sohu meri jaan🤗
This show brought me again here on IF..and best thing is I am talking to my baby shishter again 😳
It's kinda addiction..it just takes you far far away in some kind of heaven❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoodyTwoShoes

Sohu meri jaan🤗
This show brought me again here on IF..and best thing is I am talking to my baby shishter again 😳
It's kinda addiction..it just takes you far far away in some kind of heaven❤️


I'm so glad I found you here. It'll be great discussing things with you, yet again🤗
Missed you and your posts..❤️
And I agree.. It's like addiction and a good one to have😉😆

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