Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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Asif

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Posted: 8 years ago

#831

Awesome update
I imagined the scene as Steve in nail polish. Like the caring Devki. His reaction after getting know what devki did was shocking & full of care. He accepted the deal bc the way Dev handled devki & didn't thought abt loss. I agreed that both daughter & son are equally important. No point to divide them with superiority. Update soon plz
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Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#832

Superb part mayu dii...

Oh my God!!! Devki made me laugh very muchh...

Very cute n naughty...

Enjoyed through out..

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: Sobsss
awww this was really cute ❤️... pls do continue the story.😊

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
😆yeh mera reaction tha pehle part keliye
i agree you should never put anything inside ur nose eyes mouth ears

👏yeh hai mera reaction dusre part keliye
ofcourse daughters are a blessing bass yeh baat sab samajh jaaye to desh ka bhala ho jaye

Ohhh 2-2 reaction for this part😃 Loved it 😳 @ Bold: I strongly agree with it.😃

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Devki ki innocence ko dekh ke ,Rona Aya...pyar aaya.
Betiyan bohot pyari hoti hain.

Oh yes kids are cute😳

A son is a son till he gets a wife

A daughter is a daughter for the rest of your life.

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: ashlyn12
Such a beautiful part! And loved the way Dev was taking care of Devki! The message at the end was indeed beautiful❤️

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: sarica_sefa
After reading this part, i laughing out loud also cried my heart out... Bt all my tears come out of happiness. happy for being a girl came with a lot of happiness in my parents life... love your writing.. go ahead

Good to know you cried because of happiness 😃

I don't like the concept of giving blessing to get a son😡- Irrespective of gender of child - every child should be welcome with open heart and mind.

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: AfiChanAC_CA
Ustaaad I luvvv u for writing this ❤️ as u know I haven't read all the previous parts...I read only one before!😆 but this one is awesomeee ❤️ bohottt lmbaaa hy..🤣 abhi half bhi nahi padha...baqi ka padh k again I ek comment!!😆 hasaaa hasaaa k maarnay mein toh ap wesay he ustad ho!🤣

ABI- why are u like this. ?

Half-Half kaun read karta hai ? Aisa kaun karta hai bhaisahab?😕

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mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
I really don't know what to write my dear...I enjoyed reading it ...loved it to be precise...amazingly you have written abt the naughtiness of lil kids and yes girl kids like makeup games...that did remind me of my niece who wanted to play makeup game with my sis...in betwn my sis slept ...but when she got up ...her face was pretty scary...and more of Kajal than any thing else... 😆

eagerly waiting for the next chapter ...pls continue...

Yes I know. My girl is so obsessed with makeup, jewellery and fashion ka jalwa that I can't tell you. Poor your sister she must be scared 😆😆

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