Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 66

Originally posted by: independent

Beautiful update... So cute devki...

Loved it...

Continue soon...

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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... Just wow... Amazing update Mayu Di
Our naughty devki 😃 😃 ... Books gayy ne kha liye 😆 😆 nd her naughty question.. Ap log khel rehi thi Na 😆 😆 ... So so sooo cute nd naughty she is..
Sona flashback story... Off.. I was in tears while reading this, so painful, so emotional 😭 😭
U have written the part so beautifully...
Thanks for the beautiful update... I think next part will be sad one 😭
Egerly waiting for this...
Big hug 🤗 🤗

Fero Meri Jaan my one and only one twitter informer😆😆😆

Sorry for making you cry, but am sure with devki element must have laughed little bit as well.

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Originally posted by: mygaby

o shit

is bijoy dying in next part

lovely as usual mayuuu...keep writing

miss u

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Good to see you here ..

All the best 😳😳

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Originally posted by: yyy

Amazing part dear...I love it..it was nice to read Sona and Dev having a mature conversation about their past ...feel so bad for Sona here ...she was all alone ..hope Dev's love will heal her wounds...glad to see she is slowly opening up...

Aww my naughty Dev is back...awesome awesome...I wish to read more of his naughtiness in upcoming parts ...he is such a sweetheart...

Now coming to my favorite character Devki...she is definitely terror Devki. ..how can she be so cute ...haha Dev and Sona were caught by her ..lol..they way she revealed in front of everyone was damn funny ...and Nikki''s comments was so apt. ..bedroom secrets revealed ..haha ...my cutie baby is behind her parents now ...

I don't mind reading more of how their bedroom secrets are revealed by our very own terror Devki

This is such a light hearted story and it brings smile on my face everytime I read. ..can you mail this to our CvS please so that they can get idea for separation track else they are hell bent on forcing something down our throat which we despise. ...

Hi Nitu

Felt so good to see your comments.

@ BOld : touched my heart and soul. Yaar I don't think am serious type writer or what. In fact am writing without even thinking much. But am feeling good that atleast am to brought smile on someone face which is the biggest compliment for me . SO thanks for saying that.

Sending my story to CV 😆😆 No am not that big one. do i have that much talent ?😃😳

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wow dev and sona coming closer

Hi Mayu
beautiful story👏
i specially loved Devki.. most beautiful character...that groomimg session of dev by devki and gluestick wala epi ,then pink color...mujhe apni daughter ki naughtiness yaad aa gayee...even jo look aapne bataya hai,thats much similar to my daughter...i apply oil on her hair everyday ki uske baal kaale ho jaaye but woh apne papa pe gayee hai...😳
my daughty once cut few hair wid scissor and mere hubby ka grooming session ,i witness it every week...
I m a lady of few words😆...but wen it comes to my daughter ,words kam pad jaate hain...
plz cont soonish
and plz pm me😃

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome update
Devki really embarrassed sona and dev
But it was such acute part
Dev is so caring towards sona and her family
I loved it
Amazing
Update soon

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Originally posted by: purnima17

Very Nice and thanq somuch for da PM

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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Fantastic part

I'm glad that Sona told Dev about her painful days she was alone and had to handle her pregnancy.

Oh Devki the "Terror" I just love her

Dev and Sona in school days were mischievous so no wonder Devki too is mischievous

Yeah Sona needs to share her painful days with Dev.

And devki is definitely "Terror" daughter😆😆

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Originally posted by: sinalfan1

I can just imagine dev n sona's eembarrassment at devki's comments 😳 devki is a real terror for them now. ..I really hope she comes to know that dev is her papa n not uncle

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