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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dhk26
Waiting for part 11... Hope u get time to update soon..
Sad with the current story n spoilers... May be devki's lil mischief would make day for may of the forumvasis.!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Great story. Very well written.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Big thank you each and everyone to such nice comments..Kisses and huggies to all( including silent who are not violent members. )

This part is exclusively for Devki fans- Surprisingly she has become popular than Dev and Sona

-------------------Next Part - 11-----------------------------------

After 15 days of their first dinner date- Where Dev and Sona were again busy in their hectic life, but still try to give atleast half hour night time before sleep.

Sonakashi= Dev!! I don't think this is right. Why are you not allowing me to tell Devki that you are her father.

Dev- I am not ready yet Sona. Try to understand this. Woh mujhe uncle bolti hai but iss mein pyaar hota hai. What if you hates me after knowing the truth.

Sonakshi- Hate ? Really Dev. Hate is very strong feeling, I don't think Devki is a kind of girl who can hate anyone. Woh toh kisko dislike bhi nahi karti hai not even her bus driver - Ramesh- slapping incident. Baccho mein issi feeling nahi hoti until and unless hum log aise feeling unko bataye either through our gestures or words.

Dev- I know sonakshi. You are 100% right. but pls I need some more time to stand in front of my daughter. Tum nahi samajhogi. Its my internal fight. I am culprit of her mother and to her too.

Sonakshi- Dev! You need to come out from that guilt. Otherwise it is not good for our family. Ok you need time I will give you , but ...anyway leave it and just sleep.

Dev coming towards her and giving her side hug.

Dev- I know Sonkashi it's not right. Devki shld know all this may be even before our wedding. But you know life mein maine jab bhi sabse jayada pyaar kiya uske aankho mein maine aasoo laaye - whether its you or Maa. Although I don't want to stay in past, but agar Devki ne ko maine dukh diya knowingly or unkowningly then I can't face anyone. She has become a very important part of my life.

Sonakshi - Yes Indeed she is.

Both of them standing near window , looking at stars, Dev still giving hugging Sonakshi and giving her cheeky kiss to her and saying - Thank you.

Next morning Dev's Cabin-

Tina - Sir !! There is call from .

Dev- Without looking at Tina - Not now Tina. I am too busy in preparing this presentation. If it is not related to Gupta & Sons business file. Then am not interested in hearing anything as if now. Note down a message and I will read it in the evening.

Tina- Sir it is related to Devki.

Dev- What ? What happened?

Tina- Sir !! There is call from her school - may from principal office - They want you to meet principal ma'am asap.

Dev- Is Devki alright ? Did you ask anything more ? (while picking up the car's keys)

Tina- Yes they said devki is alright. And they are not able to contact Sonakshi that is reason they called here.

At - Devki School Prinicipal Office.

Prinicipal - Hello Mr. searching inside the paper. Mr. Dev Dixit. Yes Ms. Sonakshi has updated profile of Devki, saying you are secondary.. again searching inside the paper.

Dev- I am father of Devki and husband of Sonakshi.. Is it possible for you to tell me what is wrong over here? Why did you call me ?

Principal - Laughing nervously .. Come in Mr and Mrs. Laal.

Mr. Laal- See even we are in hurry and better we shld talk about the issue directly.

Dev- Yes of course.

Ms. Kanly comes along with Devki and Gauri.

Prinicipal - See Mr. Dev what happened is.. (After a long long longest pause she spoke )Devki has cut eyelash of Gauri..

Dev- Huh??? What ??

Prinicipal - Eyelash.. See we all have eyes and there is eyelashes.. are you understanding...

Dev inner talk- Control your laugh Dev. Otherwise these ppl will kill you.

Dev- Devki !Its not good to cut eyelash.

Prinicpal - Huh? It is not good... Do you means to say Devki shld cut something else?

Dev- No !! NO I mean to say we shld not cut anything in life.. Nothing means absolutely nothing.

Devki- Looking at Gauri- But I ...

Mr. Laal- See Madam .. What will happened to our child now. Eyelash itni choti ho gayi hai meri beti ki.. Aab kya hoga isska..

Dev- Kya hoga ? Kuch nahi hoga.. I mean to say she is still looking very normal and pretty pretty Gauri.

Mrs Laal- Madam even Mr. Bhandari told us everything about Devki- How she pushed Rohit because of which he lost his teeth and then she put gluestick on his hair. Baap re kya bacchi hai. Aise bacchi ko aap allow kyon karte hai school mein. waise bhi maine suna hai..

Dev- That's it... Mind your ( Stare and voice is enough for everyone to shut their mouth)

Dev- I don't know the solution of this problem honestly. But I will call Dr. Sinha and ask him if he can arrange anything for this child and I WILL PAY ALL THE EXPENSES. So no one should open their mouth afterward.

Dev calling Dr. Sinha.

Dr. Sinha- Yes Mr. Dev Dixit? How are u ? and How can I help you?

Dev- Hello Dr.Sinha. Sorry am bothering you. I am in hurry but I want you to discuss something important.IS our Cosmetologist in JLS hospital able to fix/repair or whatever eyelash of 5-6 year old girl.

Dr. Sinha- huh??? Sorry i am not able to understand a thing.

Dev- Woh Devki ne apni friend ke eyelash ko cut kar diya hai. So main jana chahta tha ki uske eyelash wapas aa sakte hai naturally or not . Aur something else.

Dr. Sinha could not control his laugh- HAHAHAHAAHAHAA Seriously Dev. There will be a day when all researchist will give credit of their work to Devki..

Dev- OH YES.. Who is still struggling to control his laugh - OK bye Dr. Sinha and cut the phone.

Prinicipal - OK then problem solved. Mr & Mrs. Laal are you happy now. Mr. Dev Dixit will definitely find the solution of your problem and will help you guys financially as well.

Mr & Mrs. Laal- Thank you.. with this both of them marched outside cursing something something..

Dev came towards Devki and took her to school bench

Dev- You want to say something ..I will listen with open heart and mind, I promise.

Devki- I cut her eyelash..sulking and taking out lower lips again ..

Dev- No no Pls not this look. This puppy looks is irresistable. I can't control myself. WIth this Dev pickup Devki and make her sit on his lap and give her kisses.

Dev- Hmm Bolo .. Aisa kyon kiya..

Devki-Actually teacher is responsible- Teachers said- our hair grows all the time. So Gauri started crying thinking about that- already she was having big and long eyelash.She said to me- Aab after few days mujhe kuch nahi dekhega.Then mujhe dolls nahi dekhigi, I can't paint. I can't play with my dogs.So maine usko bola don't worry- tum ko sab dekhega and I cut her... ( Devki moved her head in one direction indicationg job is done action)

Dev- Wow what a story..yes teacher is responsible.

Devki- Mummy..What about Mumma. Do you think she will be upset hearing all this ?

Dev- Hmm Chances are high that she will be upset.

Dev- Listen Devki- You shld never ever help your friend by cutting anything like this. It could be dangerous. Scissors eyes mein ja sakti thi and uski eyes ko lag sakti thi.. and you know it is dangerous.

Devki- Alrigh then. I won't cut any body parts of my friends from here onwards .

Dev- Yeah Good . Funn hai and Sounds very weird... Anyway leave it.. Don't worry Mumma ko humlog mil kar handle karege..

Devki hugged Dev-Thank you Uncle. Aab se maine kuch bhi kiya na then main principal ma'am ko bologi ki aap ko bulaye.. Heeheh

Dev- You naughty little cheeky girl and kiss her.

Evening time - Ishwari Niwas.

Sonakshi and Dev came inside the house almost together.

Sonakshi- aree you .. I was about you call you to ask you regarding Devki's school.

Dev- now hiding face like Devki.- Yes Woh actually thodi problem ho gayi hai means thi.. Situation is under control i guess.🤔

Sonakshi with her stern face- Spit it out ..

Dev- Ok Devki ne apni frnd ko help kiya jo ki nahi karna chaiye tha. Actually fault uski frnd ki bhi nahi thi woh fault teacher ki thi jo half half incomplete sentence bolte hai jisse baccho ke mind mein confusion create hota hai...

Sonakshi- Dev stop behaving like Devki.. And one sentence mein baato kya hua.?

Dev- Devki cut eyelashes of her frnd - after completing the sentence Dev closed his eyes..

Sonakshi- on top of her voice- Devki!!!!!

Sonakshi took left, right and center class of Devki and gave her tough punishment like no Television for one week- yes For 6 years old kid - cartoon is their life line. So it is big punishment.

Dev tried to explain and gave reasons on behalf of Devki but in vain.

After 2 days in Ishwari Niwas

Again Sona and Dev came together- together inside the Ishwari Niwas .

Dev- Aajkal Ghar mein entry ke baad kya hoga kuch predict nahi kar sakte hai..😆

Sonakshi - Get used to of it.. You are father of Naughty Devki.

With this both entered into house and saw Mamaji and Ishwari Maa, Nikki and Devki was sitting on sofa. Devki was busy in eating her evening snack and was least interested in everyone's activities.

Dev and Sona immediately sensed that something has happened. Mamaji and Ishwari Maa made such a sad face.

Dev- Hope everyone is fit and fine physically.

Ishwari - Yes beta. Aisa toh sab theek hai beta...

Ishwari- Nikki beta tum Devki toh room mein lekar Jaoo..

Sonakshi sensed that it is something related to Devki . She was about to say something. But Dev stopped her by holding her hand.

Dev- Wait Sonakshi .. Firstly listen and then react.

Ishwari - Woh aisa hua beta.. WOh main toh thi yaha par .. Mamaji bhi the.. Bass thode busy the aur nikki kya kar rahi thi bhaiya..

Mamaji- Nikki yaad nahi aa rahi hai..

Ishwari- Nikki yaad nahi aa rahi hai kya matlab hai..

Dev was laughing hearing their conversation and was sure that he was again going to hear something very unique problem or mischief of Devki.

Dev- Maa and Mamaji both of you continue .. Jab tak aap ko batane ki liya himmat aa jaye then aawaaz de dena humlog aajeyege..

Ishwari - Nahi .. Bata rahi hoon.. Main puja kar rahi thi

Dev- Maa... Aur short karo story plsss..

Ishwari - Accha suna toh suna nahi toh jane de..

Sona and Dev- Ok ..no interruption ..

Flashback mode is on

Ishwari- Main puja kar rahi thi. complete Hone hi wali thi tab Keechu and Bhoola aaya aur bola ki chalo chalo Devki ne kya kiya dekho..Main aab fast bhi nahi chal sakti hoon lekin main apne speed se toh main fast chali aur Maine bhaiya ko bhi bolaya.. Main and Bhaiya jab bhara aaye then watchman bola ki Devki gate ke bhaar bethi hai.. Gaay aur apne bag ke saath..

Dev- Kya ??? Gaay(Cow) ke saath.. ??? Omg ye story toh epic hai..

Sonakshi- Bring it on.. Main toh shockproof ho gayi hoon..

Ishwari- Ussne apni saari books and copies khila De.. Baas ye wali drawing copy bacchi hai..And jab maine poocha then boli

Devki- Gaay was feeling very hungry..So was doing and mere pass kuch nahi tha .So maine usko apni copy offer ki then usne kha le.. And woh aur mow mow ke action kar rahi thi Dadi .. See usko aur chaiye- Main mumma and uncle ke pass ke bhi pages lekar aao..

Ishwari- Nahi( Shouted in top voice) Nahi beta uska stomach full ho gaya ..

Flashback mode off

Ishwari- Main usko ghar mein lekar aagayi ye bol ke aab aur nahi kha sakti hai woh ..

Ishwari - Sonakshi Beta mujhe sach mein nahi pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch ho sakta hai..Pata hota then main and mamaji uske saath hi rehete

Dev- Tina ko phone karta hoon main..

Sonaskhi - Tina ko phone ??? Seriously Dev ...

Dev- Aree tumne suna nahi Mumma and Uncle ke pages lekar aati hoon.. Next time hummare important pages gaay ke peeth mein jaayege..Isliye Tina ko phone ki kal send carpenter to our house. Saare important cubboard seal and locked hone chaiye😆

Sonakshi- I don't believe this.. Dev Tumhi.. Anyway Devki (she was about to shout.)

Dev hold her hand and took her to other room and closed the door.

Dev- Sonakshi.. What are you doing?

Sonakshi- Dev.. You are telling me .. It is height of everything.. WOh kuch bhi kare and you will tell me to shut ..

Dev Hold by her hand and pulled her towards him and hugged her- Kya hua hai ?..I know she is wrong but ussne itna bada kuch nahi kiya means kiya hai par tumhe tension kuch aur hai.. Hai na.

Sonakshi with tears- Dr.Pradhan ne bola ki aab jayda time nahi hai Dev.. main already bahut pareshaan hoon upar Devki ki almost everyday mischiefness badi ja rahi hai... Sonakshi put her head on his chest and cried like a baby..

Dev- hugging her tightly- I know its difficult.Maine bhi USA ke top most oncologist se baat ki hai infact report bhi send kar diye hai woh mujhe kal tak sab batayege..Maine Baba and Maa ka Visa bhi apply kar bhi diya and unko mil bhi gaya hai in fact waiting for green signal from them. Main sab final karke tumko surprise dene wala tha.

Sonakshi- still in hugging position and pulled Dev from his tie and gave him kiss on cheeks- Thank you Dev..

Dev- Ohhh... Accha hai .. Accha hai. Waise sirf cheeky kiss and thank you.. Kuch Kaam nahi hai.. Mujhe toh kuch aur bhi chaiye and he winked.

Sonakshi hit him on his chest - Dev!! Baba ka solution toh aapne nikal liya but Devki ka kya ??

Dev- Ek baat bolo .. Mujhe ye sab accha lagata hai. Devki and uski naughtiness .Maine aapna bachpan nahi Jee saka leking Devki ko dekhkar lagata hai bacchpan aisa hi hona chaiye ..

Sonakshi- Dev .. WOh sab toh theek hai.. But do you know humlogo ko phirse jana hoga uske school mein principal se baat karni hogi.. Ki kya hua and kyon hua..

Dev and sonakshi took a deep breath and sit on bed keeping head over each other shoulder- OHh No .. Not again ... Principal toh aab definitely murder karegi humara..

Next Part -
Dev and " " s going for lunch : Goes who?

IS Dev and Sonakshi will able to save Mr. Bujoy..?

P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. Silent members atleast hit " Like " button rest other please comment and give your review which will help me in improving my quality😃

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P.s -All the incidents are true-My best frnd cut her eyelashes thinking she will not able to see anything and till now she is living with short eyelashes 😆. Feeding books to cow was done by real sister as she was feed up with studies when she was just in kindy😆😆

Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago

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dhk26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Couldn't stop laughing🤣🤣

I mean eyelashes cut kar diye??!!!

She is so cute!!!!

Lunch with devki I guess...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mayu you bring lot of uniqueness and freshness to your story...I haven't read any story like this before ..so different and real ...Devki is such a naughty kid..love her to the core...I am enjoying her bond with Dev...as expected he will spoil Devki with his love afterall she is his princess and to balance we have Sonakshi ...perfect family ...

Dev is giving epic reactions tof Devki''s antics 🤣...she is adorable. ..you are right she is more popular than her parents 😆...

Love the small Devakshi scene...looks like Dev's naughtiness is back...wish he losses all the self control ... he needs to make the first move ...Sonakshi is too shy to do anything on her own...😉..I must say both are very good at controlling their harmones...if possible I would like them to talk about each other minus Devki...their needs,how much they missed each other ...

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richa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Mayu Di 🤗 first thing I did in morning is read this and really you made my day.I am still laughing.😆

Again a superb part👏 omg this devki she is so naughty and cute , no one can even scold her.she is adorable with her antics.I love devki.

Eyelashes cut kar diye, books cow ko khila diye 🤣

Aisi badmashiya to Maine life me nahi suni kabhi😆

I am loving this dev playing cool dad and living his childhood in devki😊

Bechare mamaji and ishwari 😆 Nikki yad nahi a rahi🤣

Plz devakshi ka thoda romance de do aur bijoy ko bacha lo he is so cute.

yes I am from Delhi so you can contact me for anything.

Thank for PM.

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adi35

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Posted: 9 years ago

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a hilarious update
continue soon
I am always waiting for you to update

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bhargavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I really love your writing and the way u pen the real incident. Ur good exellent writer. I could not laughing and how did u write such humour incident