Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome update.. 👏

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi
I am only waiting for next part
Please continue soon

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: ammu3
Beautiful - like I have no words ! Speechless - such an amazing update - you were bang on in making us emotional👏👏😳

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: dishadishki
I am speechless! Absolutely amazing! Could actually imagine something like this happening in the show! Well written :)

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: debby_11
i just loved it. perfect emotions:)

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richa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

again a superb update mayu di 👍🏼
loved how u have shown dev's helplessness and guilt, he doesn't want to loose sona but cant do anytging abt it. 😭

so having a loving heart he sets her free but at the same time doesn't want that. i had tears in my eyes while reading that office conversation part.

u said right the day dev losses sona, ishwari looses dev and the real dev also lost somwhere.

loved tina more in this part.she is a sweetheart and understans dev more than his own family.

update soon
thankz for the pm.

Edited by rcha_bhrt - 9 years ago

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swan_krpk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

You are such a wonderful writer... I was thinking ther had a big big fight, but this looks so realistic...Keep up the work..Thanks for the PM..And I am already waiting for the next part :)