Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Omg so emotional and awesome part
Loved it
Written so well..:)

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Emotional update :)

Very nicely written :)

Update soon :)

Thanks for the PM :)

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Very emotional part!!

Please cont soon

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Jyoti Thakur

@JyotiBThakur

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#324

The 2nd part is lovely Mayu... Very well done. Do continue.👏😊

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Gaby09

@Gaby09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#325

lovely my dear...but can i make request plz do update soon may be today or tomorrow...if i am not wrong u took long to update this...u won't believe me i was thinking of sending pm to u to update ...

i must confess u r one of the best writers i have come across ...well done my friend,...u totally rockkk

the best part was the punishment part and the line where u said he wasn't with Ishwari as well even though he physically was present there...my my what a story

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

Nice so this is the secret, Ishwari will come with the proposal of Devakshi marriage

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Nice so this is the secret, Ishwari will come with the proposal of Devakshi marriage do PM when u update next

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: littleshine
Ma'am you are just Fab at this and this update is damn emotional.
Looking forward for the update.

Ma'am why are u addressing as Ma'am 😆😆

I am not that writer type.. Just trying my hands on writing..

Glad you like it and thanks for the comment😊

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: bhgi
Di wat an emotional update i lykd it alot update soonish btw cn i cl u diif u dnt mind??

Yes you can me anything but AUNTY maat bolna 😆😆 No !! NO if you want to address me as"AUNTY" , i will not feel bad.

Jo bolna hai bolo pyaar se bolo then anything will do

Glad you like it and thanks for the comment.😊