Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: swan_krpk
Hey Mayu..You arte doing a great jon with this story..I can imagine each and every scene in your OS. please continue and update it fast, I am eager for further story :)

Wow Nice

Glad you like it and thanks for the comment

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Ferdous_69

@Ferdous_69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Amazing part...
Really every parts of ur OS is amazing...
Next part update soon...

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AroobaSiddiquie

@AroobaSiddiquie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Its damn awesome plz upload further quick!!!!
Can't wait...😭

PM me as soon as u upload the new one ... I'll be really grateful to u!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Looking forward to reading ...

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

read all parts in a go and trust me loved it to the core
superb work mayu di 👏
devki is so cute 😊 and love the name
feeling so bad for dev and sona 😭 both are so much in love but cant be together because destiny has planned something else.
loved tina... she is a sweetheart
loved mamaji
ishwari can see through dev but is in denial mode or i would say she is selfish.
loved dev and devki bonding.
loved their big night... it was hot 😳
keep writing
waiting for next update
if possible plz pm me

love
richa

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SomethingBlue

@SomethingBlue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Really nice. Waiting for your updates

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Ferdous_69

@Ferdous_69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Really haven't any word to express...
All the part of us OS is just tremendous
Very emotional...
Can't wait for next part...
Plz update soon

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coolarchu

@coolarchu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Read ur os in one shot...u r amazing writer...loved dev and devki bonding😃😃...eagerly waiting for the next part...pm me if possible...

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69
Amazing part...
Really every parts of ur OS is amazing...
Next part update soon...

Glad you like it dear and thanks for comment

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: AroobaSiddiquie
Its damn awesome plz upload further quick!!!!
Can't wait...😭

PM me as soon as u upload the new one ... I'll be really grateful to u!

Glad you like it and thanks for the comment

And for pm- will try to send pm and i wont promise 😳