Dev ' Ms Bose , can you come up to my room'

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Haha this one was superb and so awesome
Loved the concept and their scene

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Pilu05

@Pilu05

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Lol for last line

Superb OS

Most wanted munda ...this song for Dev

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Antora

@andy1245

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

oh god this was fantastic u jst blewd away in i jst want rr to go in shock fr infinity aftr wat c saw

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Avocetxellis

@Avocetxellis

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Awww...adorable 😳

Loved the last line😆

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Lalitha

@lalitha.rgs

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

it was mind blowing 😊

last line was so very hilarious🤣(wish it happens in reality)

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fatima rukia

@rukiaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Your title had already made my mind thinking something else...😆

Loved it ...so amazing...

Last line🤣

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Aditi

@adoremevirgo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

oh...lovely...i hope radharani had a gud heart attack...

very nice...tfs

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mamatharoyal

@mamatharoyal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hope this happens in the show and the ending is poetic justice to RR.Dev has fallen hopelessly in love with Sona.He is doing things which he wouldn't even imagine to do, getting naughty and romantic.Nice story.

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Finally he reached home and went to the kitchen...Kitchu was there again with Sona! What is with this guy? Why is always there with Sona...? He has to do something about this soon... 🤣

She went to Dev room, her heart thudding... and there he was...he was standing in the middle of the room with both his hands on his hips, his top two buttons of the shirt unbuttoned..☺️

NOOO! Someone screamed...And they bolted apart and saw Radha Rani clutching her heart , falling with a heavy thud, to the ground to her death!🤣

Very entertaining OS...

Enjoyed it a lot...

Please write more and Pm me

Luv

Sri