DevAkshi FS~3 Days~ Day 3 on pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: PY18

Amazing writeup n creative storyline. TFS


Eeepps...thanks a lot..Yarr..
Means a lot to me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: alie333

Day 2... u rocked it. It was so cute and I love this Dev... Day 3 asap plzz


Really thank u...
Will do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Tejasvi.Pink

plz plz day 3 make it full of romance

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thnks fr the pm


Will try ..
No problem
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -AditiS

very nice story dear. loving this 3 days challenge. am team Dev n sure he is gonna win it😊


Woah..thank u
Yeah..three cheers for team dev
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">This is amazing... Eagerly waiting for the next part.😊</font>


Thank u for ur appreciation... Means a lot
Will do
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Heya buddies.Thanks a lot for your support. This the very end if this FS
*Day 3*

She was lying carelessly on her bed, sleep miles away fro her.This the very last day for her to make a decision.
Rays of Sun kissed her skin, it was 12o'clock and Dev was yet to make an entry.He was nowhere to be found.Her mind was calculating every possibility of where he could be.She tried calling him but no response.Has he given up on trying to win her.She was restless anxious and what not.The day passed through like that.An unsettling feeling crossed her body.Suddenly her phone pinged up ,catching her attention.
'Meet me @ 6in Hotel Green'
It was his message.Feeling of relief washed her.It was 5 in the evening finally a word from Dev.
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She reached at the hotel ,sharp at 6; clad in a Royal blue gown with silver detailing.Her eyes searching for Dev; desperate to find him out.
'Am I ready to forgive him??'
Her unsettled thought resurfaced back.She was yet to make a decision and Dev's hide and seek game not helping her a bit.She went inside; A party was going on.Dance floor was buzzing off with excitement.Suddenly a hand came out of nowhere and pulled her in a corner,pinning her.
"De-v"
She stuttered,their close proximity which was no problem a day ago suddenly affecting her.
" Sona"
He mimicked her , his husky ,raw voice creating wonder in her stomach.
"Just a last dance with me"
He breath fanned her face.His hand caressing her face,remembering each of her soft contour.She was tongue tied ,her eyes betraying her mind,never leaving his eyes.His hand softly pulled her to the dance floor.For Sona it felt like world was about to end ,a stinging sensation in her heart.'Last Dance'
He took her both of hands and put them behind his neck with his hands embracing her waist.Smoothly swaying to the tunes it was quite remarkable when both of them din't know a thing about dancing.He pulled her more closer that her chin rested on his shoulder.She had unshed tears on her eyes,was it the end.Has He has given up but the real question was she really to give both of them a true chance.Unable to handle all these intoxicated thoughts ,she pulled her hands back and went outside in the garden for fresh air with Dev hot on her heels.
"Sona"
He whispered .
"I haven't given upon you.I just want you to make a decision without my influence"
He answered her unspoken question as if reading her thoughts.
"I thought, i thought a lot on your yesterday's question.But the only reply i got is nothing ,purely nothing has changed"
Her eyes widen in surprise to see him talking all this.
"I cannot promise you to change cause i don't want to break any promise but i will try to change.I'll be a good boy."boy
He laughed at the end because if his lame line
That's it she made her decision ,his words eased her tough task.
"No need to change anything ,Dev"
Her stiff words disappointed him.He had lost her but her next words made him the happiest person in the world.
"I don't want a good boy.But i want a badboy whose only good for me"
He just stood there unable to move.After whole lot 2 years ,she was back with him.A soft smile graced his features as she came forward to hug him with all her might.
"I love you ,Dev.I really do"
"I know"
She smacked him upside down for his haughty reply.
"Owww.You still hit like a man"
He teased her.
"Dev"
She warned her but he has other plans as he sat on the grass and patted the spot next to him for her to do the same.
"Why did you gave me 3 days"
He asked the most awaited question that he was dying to ask.
"I don't know"
She shrugged but He raised an eyebrow to indicate that its not the truth.
"Ok maybe because it was the matter of 3 words."

"Still the hopeless romantic"
He muttered, she was always like this, wanting to live fairy tales.
" Its not a fairy tale "

"I know it is more than that"
She whispered and put her head on his shoulder with his hand embracing her.
"So what happened in these 2 years.How is your mom"
" Din't worry you haven't out anything in my life and Mom well,she is fine and wants me to marry a girl of my choice"
"Woahthat's new"

"Uhh I more question though"

"Oh -god Dev .I liked you better when you used to be less of a speaker"
She pretended to be disappointed.
" Hey.I am curious"
He laughed at her pretence.She nodded her head .
"Are we together now??"
She burst off with his silly question.
"Off-course ,Dev.Why would you ask that"

"So i can do this"
He replied ,scooping his head low.
"Wha..."
He didn't let her complete her word and crashed her lips on hers, sealing his love for her.
" It is more than a love story,a journey to explore our true selves"

The End

So yeah,this is the end.
Hope I didn't disappointed you all
Feel free to criticize me..

Signing off
Anshika
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Nice Update.. 👍🏼
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Romantic day3😳
loved it. .
keep writing dear👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing as usual 👏
Finally they are together 😆
It has ended 😭
Write more na

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